Teri yaad aaye to Kya Karen...... Abul Asad

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Teri yaad aye aur to na ho pas mere to kya karen
Tasveer teri ab dil mera na behlaye to kya karen
 
Hai waqt aisa ke tu bolaye aur ham na aapayen to kya karen
Hai jo ab tu vanhan mushtaqh aur ham bechaaar to kya karen
 
Kehte hain bora waqt bhi guzar jata hai kabhi
Jo nahi guzarta yeh waqt abhi to kya karen

Har cheez hai araaish-e zindagi ke liye idhar
Par jo dil ko chahiye, nahi idhar to kiya karen  

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«Reply #1 on: January 16, 2012, 04:43:54 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: January 16, 2012, 08:21:50 AM »
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Dr Sahab,

Aap ka daad dena bahut acha lagta hai,
Shukriya bahut bahut.
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«Reply #4 on: January 16, 2012, 08:40:57 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: January 16, 2012, 09:49:10 AM »
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Sunil ji,

Shukriya,

aap daad dene mein farakh hain
ham aapka shukriya kartein sharaakh hain

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«Reply #6 on: January 16, 2012, 09:51:07 AM »
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boht khoob abul ji wah

Saahil sahab,
Aap ke bahut se kalaam ham padhte hain
aur uska lutf uthate hain,
aap se daad milti hai
tu phir hamare bahut hi maze aate hai
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«Reply #7 on: January 16, 2012, 09:55:10 AM »
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Quote from: Abul Asad on January 15, 2012, 06:22:09 PM

Teri yaad aye aur to na ho pas mere to kya karen
Tasveer teri ab dil mera na behlaye to kya karen
 
Hai waqt aisa ke tu bolaye aur ham na aapayen to kya karen
Hai jo ab tu vanhan mushtaqh aur ham bechaaar to kya karen
 
Kehte hain bora waqt bhi guzar jata hai kabhi
Jo nahi guzarta yeh waqt abhi to kya karen

Har cheez hai araaish-e zindagi ke liye idhar
Par jo dil ko chahiye, nahi idhar to kiya karen 

Abul Asad



kalaam achcha hai. abul sahab , main aap ko ek alag nazariye se dekhta hoon. aur usi mayaar mein bhi taulta(wazan) karta hoon. wajah ye ki aap ki urdu aur ENLISH ki vocabulary MASHAALLAH kaafii alaa hai. per aap ke kalaam mein wo rawaani nahin rahti.
 bura mat maaniye gaa. kyon ki meri pakad litreture mein bahut kamzor hain aur mujhe kahne ka koi haq nahin. phir bhi mujhe ummid hai aap apne kalaam ko apni kabliyat ke hisaab se likhein. taaki padhne mein mazaa bhi aaye.aur hamein bhi kuch seekne ko mile. aap yaqeen jaane .MAIN JO YE TOOTA-PHOOTA SA LIKHNE KI KOSHISH KARTA HOON ISI YOINDIA KE MASHOOR SHORAO.N SE SEEKHA HAI.

MERI BAAT BURI LAGI TO DARGUZAR KAREIN AUR MUJH KAMZARF KO MAAF KARE.
 
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«Reply #8 on: January 16, 2012, 10:08:25 AM »
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Adil Sahab,

Aap ki baat bahut hi achi lagi, iss ka ilm bakhoobi hai mujhe
pehli baat to yeh hai ke hamari fitrat men takabbur nahin, aur
na jalan-o hasad hai, To shayad issiliye ham haq ki baton ke
qayl hain. Aur Jo bhi haq ki baat karta hai khwa woh chota ho
ya bada, ham sar neeche karenge, aur tasleem apni ghalati karenge.
Issiliye, aapka sabse pehle to shukriya karen, sach bolne ka, aur meri kamzoor
nafz par ungli rakhne ka. Phir himmat chahiye yeh kehne ki, to us himmat ka.

Ji thori si meri urdu aur angrezi zubaan ke alfazon ki samajh maquol se zyada hai. Magar yeh shauq-e sukhan wari, kuch hi arsa pehle mere pindaar me aagiri.

To abhi bahut hi kamsin hoon is maidan men, seekh raha hoon, kuch ustaad shayaron ke kalaam padhne se, kuch aap logon se.

Magar sabse acha aur sabse zyaada koi agar meri ghalati saaf bata de, to main beshak sar neecha kare aik seedhe, talib ki tarah seekhne tayyar hoon.

Adil sahab, iss ko maddenazr rakhte hove, aap yeh ashar mere apni zubaani likhden, taake kuch ilm hasil ho hamen.

Shukr guzaar aapka
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«Reply #9 on: January 16, 2012, 10:59:15 AM »
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Adil Sahab,

Aap ki baat bahut hi achi lagi, iss ka ilm bakhoobi hai mujhe
pehli baat to yeh hai ke hamari fitrat men takabbur nahin, aur
na jalan-o hasad hai, To shayad issiliye ham haq ki baton ke
qayl hain. Aur Jo bhi haq ki baat karta hai khwa woh chota ho
ya bada, ham sar neeche karenge, aur tasleem apni ghalati karenge.
Issiliye, aapka sabse pehle to shukriya karen, sach bolne ka, aur meri kamzoor
nafz par ungli rakhne ka. Phir himmat chahiye yeh kehne ki, to us himmat ka.

Ji thori si meri urdu aur angrezi zubaan ke alfazon ki samajh maquol se zyada hai. Magar yeh shauq-e sukhan wari, kuch hi arsa pehle mere pindaar me aagiri.

To abhi bahut hi kamsin hoon is maidan men, seekh raha hoon, kuch ustaad shayaron ke kalaam padhne se, kuch aap logon se.

Magar sabse acha aur sabse zyaada koi agar meri ghalati saaf bata de, to main beshak sar neecha kare aik seedhe, talib ki tarah seekhne tayyar hoon.

Adil sahab, iss ko maddenazr rakhte hove, aap yeh ashar mere apni zubaani likhden, taake kuch ilm hasil ho hamen.

Shukr guzaar aapka
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bahut bahut shukriya ABUL SAHAB jo aapne meri baat ko izzat di. ALLAH AAPKO KHUSH RAKHE AUR KAMYAABI DE....AMIN. bahr ki samajh mujhe bhi nahin hai..!!

        waise aap ke kahne pe likhne ki koshish ki hai. pasand na aaye to tanqeed zarur kariye ga. jisse mujhe samajh aaye.


                  aaye teri yaad aur waqt na milaaye to kya karein..,
                  ab tasweer bhi teri dil na bahlaaye to kya karein..,

                  hai aur bhi masroofiyat zindagi mein mohabbat ke siwa,
                  tere  bulaane  per,gar  na  aa  paaye  to kya karein,

                  guzar jaataa hai zindagi mein buraa waqt bhi dheere-dheere,
                  gar   kabhi   pyaam-e-khushi   hi  na  aaye  to kya karein,

                  rahi maujood har cheez araaish ki aashiyaane mein abul..!
                  hai  talab  dil  ko  jiski, paas na aaye to kya karein..!!
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«Reply #10 on: January 17, 2012, 10:51:35 AM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on January 16, 2012, 10:59:15 AM

bahut bahut shukriya ABUL SAHAB jo aapne meri baat ko izzat di. ALLAH AAPKO KHUSH RAKHE AUR KAMYAABI DE....AMIN. bahr ki samajh mujhe bhi nahin hai..!!

        waise aap ke kahne pe likhne ki koshish ki hai. pasand na aaye to tanqeed zarur kariye ga. jisse mujhe samajh aaye.


                  aaye teri yaad aur waqt na milaaye to kya karein..,
                  ab tasweer bhi teri dil na bahlaaye to kya karein..,

                  hai aur bhi masroofiyat zindagi mein mohabbat ke siwa,
                  tere  bulaane  per,gar  na  aa  paaye  to kya karein,

                  guzar jaataa hai zindagi mein buraa waqt bhi dheere-dheere,
                  gar   kabhi   pyaam-e-khushi   hi  na  aaye  to kya karein,

                  rahi maujood har cheez araaish ki aashiyaane mein abul..!
                  hai  talab  dil  ko  jiski, paas na aaye to kya karein..!!
Bahut Khoob Adil Bhai
Khoob likha hai apne.. Bahr ki baat to pahle hi aapne saaf kar di hai..
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Bas yu hi haum sab ka hausla badhate rahe..kuch galti dikhe to najar andaaj na kare..
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«Reply #11 on: January 17, 2012, 10:57:50 AM »
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Quote from: Abul Asad on January 15, 2012, 06:22:09 PM

Teri yaad aye aur to na ho pas mere to kya karen
Tasveer teri ab dil mera na behlaye to kya karen
 
Hai waqt aisa ke tu bolaye aur ham na aapayen to kya karen
Hai jo ab tu vanhan mushtaqh aur ham bechaaar to kya karen
 
Kehte hain bora waqt bhi guzar jata hai kabhi
Jo nahi guzarta yeh waqt abhi to kya karen

Har cheez hai araaish-e zindagi ke liye idhar
Par jo dil ko chahiye, nahi idhar to kiya karen  

Abul Asad

Asad Bhai
Aapki saafgoi aur dildaari ke liye hum apko salaam karte hai..really we should take the suggestions in the right spirit. nobody wants to dominate anyone..
adil bhai ne jo baat himmat kar ke kah di vo baat mai nahi kah paaya.
Khair apke khoobsurat khayaalo, aur jajbaatoN ke liye aap badhaai ke patra hai..
really u have command over urdu & english..
I will suggest u to read more and review yur creation twice, thrice and then post.. most of the time, u will be able to correct urself.
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«Reply #12 on: January 18, 2012, 07:35:26 PM »
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Mkv ji,

Aapka behad shukriya, aapki daad bahut achi aur dilpasand lagi
Ham abhi shayari ke ibtedayi talib hain, khula dil aur dimaagh hai
yeh behr men likhne ki koshish jaari hai, kuch waqt lage ga shayad wanhan tak pahunchne ko. Magar aaplogon se badi himmat hai.
Phir bhi Aap se Aur ADIL Saheb, Aur doosre sahiban se guzarish hai ke hamari agle kalaam par apni kalam ki dhaar vaise hi tez rakhiye, seekhne ka ye behtareen mauqa hamare liye hoga.

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«Reply #13 on: January 18, 2012, 07:53:57 PM »
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Quote from: Abul Asad on January 15, 2012, 06:22:09 PM

Teri yaad aye aur to na ho pas mere to kya karen
Tasveer teri ab dil mera na behlaye to kya karen
 
Hai waqt aisa ke tu bolaye aur ham na aapayen to kya karen
Hai jo ab tu vanhan mushtaqh aur ham bechaaar to kya karen
 
Kehte hain bora waqt bhi guzar jata hai kabhi
Jo nahi guzarta yeh waqt abhi to kya karen

Har cheez hai araaish-e zindagi ke liye idhar
Par jo dil ko chahiye, nahi idhar to kiya karen 

Abul Asad


Beautifulllllll Creation Abul Ji,, Bahoot Khoob likha hai.. Sach mein Bahoot pyaara sawaal hai yea.. Teri yaad aaye tho kya kare.. bahoot Umda likha hai !!!
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«Reply #14 on: January 18, 2012, 08:02:27 PM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on January 16, 2012, 10:59:15 AM



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                  aaye teri yaad aur waqt na milaaye to kya karein..,
                  ab tasweer bhi teri dil na bahlaaye to kya karein..,

                  hai aur bhi masroofiyat zindagi mein mohabbat ke siwa,
                  tere  bulaane  per,gar  na  aa  paaye  to kya karein,

                  guzar jaataa hai zindagi mein buraa waqt bhi dheere-dheere,
                  gar   kabhi   pyaam-e-khushi   hi  na  aaye  to kya karein,

                  rahi maujood har cheez araaish ki aashiyaane mein abul..!
                  hai  talab  dil  ko  jiski, paas na aaye to kya karein..!!


Waah waah Adil ji.. Kya khoob likha hai ... bahoot hi shandaar .. bahoot Bahoot Umda !!!
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