Terri kami hai...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on January 06, 2011, 12:27:10 PM
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Aaj phir terre intezar mein nigahe jami hai,
hotho per muskan hai per ankho mein nami hai,
mausam apne poore khumar per hai,
per har su fizao mein bus terri kami hai.........
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«Reply #1 on: January 06, 2011, 12:38:03 PM »
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BAhaut khoob di..!
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«Reply #2 on: January 06, 2011, 12:42:34 PM »
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geet ji--
nice
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«Reply #3 on: January 06, 2011, 01:02:21 PM »
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Mastammmmmmm Geet-di...mast design aur poem... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kuchh tou sabar kar meri pyaari sakhee
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 06, 2011, 12:27:10 PM


Aaj phir terre intezar mein nigahe jami hai,
hotho per muskan hai per ankho mein nami hai,
mausam apne poore khumar per hai,
per har su fizao mein bus terri kami hai.........
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«Reply #4 on: January 06, 2011, 06:17:26 PM »
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Geet Jee Aadaab!

Achche ashaar hai.... Daad hazir hai...         



Abke unki yaadoN ki barsaat der tak huyi
Humare dil ke zakham phir se num ho gaye

junoon e ishq tha is qadar unse kabhi
Bin unke na rahte the unse juda hum ho gaye
         
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«Reply #5 on: January 07, 2011, 12:31:54 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya rahim,nirala ji,parwaaz ji n koyal...

koyal tu bhi naa bus mazedar kuch likh deti hai...
parwaaz ji bahut umda likha hai shukriya...
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«Reply #6 on: January 07, 2011, 12:47:56 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 06, 2011, 12:27:10 PM


Aaj phir terre intezar mein nigahe jami hai,
hotho per muskan hai per ankho mein nami hai,
mausam apne poore khumar per hai,
per har su fizao mein bus terri kami hai.........



Kya Baat Hai, Bahut Bahut Khoob Geetji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: January 07, 2011, 12:51:39 PM »
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geet ji........bht khub likha he ........

apki ye lines padke wo jagjit singh ji ki gajal yaad aa gayi....

aaj fir aankh me nami si he.
zindagi me kami si he...
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«Reply #8 on: January 07, 2011, 01:04:04 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya khwaish ji n matrix ji.

matrix ji bahut umda ghazal hai...one of my fav...
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«Reply #9 on: January 09, 2011, 11:41:11 AM »
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Nice Geet Ji
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«Reply #10 on: January 09, 2011, 11:44:45 AM »
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Sach kaha apne  shihab ji..shukriya pasand karne k liye..rishi ji apka bhi bahut shukriya..
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«Reply #11 on: January 09, 2011, 11:55:56 AM »
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Geet ji In Char Lines Me Dil Ki har Baat Kaha di Ho Jaise Aapne.. Dil-e-Haal Bakhoobi Bayan Kiya hai aapne.. Lajawab Alfaaz Pesh Kiye Hain.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #12 on: January 09, 2011, 12:05:34 PM »
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wah geeta ji bahut khubsurat likha aapne.
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«Reply #13 on: January 09, 2011, 12:13:20 PM »
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Shukriya mann ji n killlbill ji..
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«Reply #14 on: January 10, 2011, 07:45:53 AM »
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Wah Bohat Badiya Brokenbyluv Ji
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