---thak gaye nain---

by killbill on April 20, 2011, 05:47:08 AM
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thak gaye nain raah takk takk
naa aya tu bedardi ab takk……

apalakk nain, na dil ko chein
intzaar me ‘ jaanu ’ ye mann bechein……

hansi labo ki jaane lagi
ek udaasi ab chhane lagi

ruuthe ashq poochte ab
kahan gaya kb, tere dil ka rabb……

palkon ke girne uthne me, sadiyo sa ab hai faasla
na tadpa aor tu aye dilbar, intzaar ka ab kuch de de silaaa…

ab aa jaa sanam ki bahot hua………
bhari mehfil me dil ab tanha hua……
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«Reply #1 on: April 20, 2011, 08:30:28 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai Kb ji,great creation.keep writting. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: April 20, 2011, 02:14:24 PM »
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mast likha hai kb...
bas thodi rhyming ki kami hai...
otherwise very very nice...
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«Reply #3 on: April 21, 2011, 12:47:02 PM »
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bahut khoob
mazaa aa gaya ji
kb ji.
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