Thoda sa aram manga~

by AbhiTamrakar on September 29, 2010, 11:09:54 AM
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duniya ki fikra kise e dil-e-diwana

duniya kabhi humare hum kabhi duniya ke liye na the.....

husna walon ki mehfil me hoke badnaam chale hum

na husna ne dil ko "Abhi" na dil ne husna ko kabhi apna mana ....

paththar hi paththar the waha jis raah chal pade hum

paththaron ne mujhe mene paththaron ko hi apna humraah mana...

khanjar ban ke mohabbat ne is kadar ghayal kiya zalim

ki dard ne mujhse dosti dosto ne humse dard ka hi naam manga...

ro raha tha dil hotho par muskurahat basi thi

dekhne walon se humne humse dekhne walon ne do pal ka aaram manga..
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«Reply #1 on: September 29, 2010, 11:12:52 AM »
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yr abhi tum to meri fitrat me achi tarah se wakif ho

mai har baat ka jawab dhondhta hu aur deta hu but is ke liye mai

 Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!

samajh gaye ya ...........................

nice one keep it up  Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: September 29, 2010, 02:39:40 PM »
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duniya ki fikra kise e dil-e-diwana

duniya kabhi humare hum kabhi duniya ke liye na the.....


khanjar ban ke mohabbat ne is kadar ghayal kiya zalim

ki dard ne mujhse dosti dosto ne humse dard ka hi naam manga...


Abhi jee Aadaab!

Kia baat hai ..... kuch kuch khayaal itne umdaa raheN ke bus waah kar diye... kafi gehri baateN hai... Qouted ashaaroN meiN.... Daad janab....

Likhate rahiye.....
Khush O aabdaad rahiye......
Khuda Hafez....... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #3 on: September 29, 2010, 02:48:52 PM »
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duniya ki fikra kise e dil-e-diwana

duniya kabhi humare hum kabhi duniya ke liye na the.....

husna walon ki mehfil me hoke badnaam chale hum

na husna ne dil ko "Abhi" na dil ne husna ko kabhi apna mana ....

paththar hi paththar the waha jis raah chal pade hum

paththaron ne mujhe mene paththaron ko hi apna humraah mana...

khanjar ban ke mohabbat ne is kadar ghayal kiya zalim

ki dard ne mujhse dosti dosto ne humse dard ka hi naam manga...

ro raha tha dil hotho par muskurahat basi thi

dekhne walon se humne humse dekhne walon ne do pal ka aaram manga..

Waah waah Waah!!! bahut Khoob Abhi Ji..Aapki Lekhni Hatke hai..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Padhe-padhte ek sher sa yaad aagya...


Mere Gham Ne Hosh Unke Kho Diye
Woh Samjhaate-Samjhaate Khud Ro Diye...
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«Reply #4 on: September 30, 2010, 05:47:43 AM »
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Abhi jee Aadaab!

Kia baat hai ..... kuch kuch khayaal itne umdaa raheN ke bus waah kar diye... kafi gehri baateN hai... Qouted ashaaroN meiN.... Daad janab....

Likhate rahiye.....
Khush O aabdaad rahiye......
Khuda Hafez....... Usual Smile         



apki nazron ka karam he jiii..warna hamne to yuhi is nacheez dil ki bat kahi thi...
pasand farmane ka shukriya~

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«Reply #5 on: September 30, 2010, 05:50:11 AM »
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Waah waah Waah!!! bahut Khoob Abhi Ji..Aapki Lekhni Hatke hai..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Padhe-padhte ek sher sa yaad aagya...


Mere Gham Ne Hosh Unke Kho Diye
Woh Samjhaate-Samjhaate Khud Ro Diye...


kya bat he sahab bahut khoob keh gaye aap...

ke unki baton se mujhe apne dil ki halat ka pata chala
warna "Abhi" apni hi muskurahat ke pinjre me kaid the ham~
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«Reply #6 on: September 30, 2010, 09:08:57 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Abhi ji...!!!

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«Reply #7 on: September 30, 2010, 09:11:13 AM »
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shukriya kapil jiii~
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«Reply #8 on: September 30, 2010, 09:36:30 AM »
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u r welcome sirji
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«Reply #9 on: September 30, 2010, 09:52:33 AM »
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are sirg bolkar paraya to mat karo yaar~
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«Reply #10 on: September 30, 2010, 10:53:02 AM »
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nice one abhi ji.....
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shukriya jiii
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