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by amrita on October 03, 2005, 04:19:09 AM
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Mere Aanchal Mein Basa Hai Woh Khushboo Ki Tarah
Mein Jitna Usse Samaitu Woh Bikharta Chala Jaaye

Kahi Aisa Nah Ho Daman Jal Jaaye Mera
 Asfurdah Ka Dhua Usse Yaad Reh Jaaye
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«Reply #1 on: October 03, 2005, 04:21:33 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne amrita ji  glasses2
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amrita
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«Reply #2 on: October 03, 2005, 04:27:56 AM »
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..........................................shukriy a...!!
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Ghayal
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«Reply #3 on: October 09, 2005, 07:39:42 AM »
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Wha!!!!!!!
Amrita ji aap ka javab nahi he....
Aap To hume Bhi apane Shaath Le Dubegi.... Usual Smile


Aaj Fir Dil NeTamanna Ki..Dunia Ke Usi Mele Me Jaane Ki...
Jis Ne Hume Kal Bhi Dhoka Diya...Aaj Fir Thokar Maar Di......
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«Reply #4 on: October 09, 2005, 07:05:07 PM »
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very  nice Amrita.......Ghayal................
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amrita
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«Reply #5 on: October 14, 2005, 06:05:58 PM »
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thanks a lot guys..!!

aati hai har waqt  teri baatein yaad
kehti hu daud kar qaasid se raah pe

ke rakhna meri  baatein yaad
kuch paayenge unke tarz-e-bayaar se..
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«Reply #6 on: October 14, 2005, 11:43:27 PM »
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wow bohot ache amrita ji..!!!



kaash aapka dil na itna saqt hota,
hamareliye bhi aapkepas thoda waqt hota,
kash hamara dil bhi thoda saqt hota,
judaai ka ehsaas to hame na harwaqt hota...
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amrita
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«Reply #7 on: October 17, 2005, 08:39:35 AM »
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thanks roshni for reading and appreciating..!!and good1 from u too..
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tinda
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«Reply #8 on: October 17, 2005, 11:38:14 AM »
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nice work amrita, roshni and ghayal

kal tha jiska chehra mere hathon mein
aaj woh hai bas meri yaadon mein. . .
dekh to nahi sakta usko apne paas
haan..bula let hun usko apne khwabon mein. . .
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Ghayal
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«Reply #9 on: October 17, 2005, 11:54:38 AM »
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Shukriya Friend....

Muje Tum Nazaro se Gira Rahe Ho...
Muje Tum Kabhi bhi bhoola Na Shakoge....
Na Jane Muje Kyo Yakeen Ho Chala He...
Meri Yaad Ko Tum Mita Na Shakoge....


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nice work amrita, roshni and ghayal

kal tha jiska chehra mere hathon mein
aaj woh hai bas meri yaadon mein. . .
dekh to nahi sakta usko apne paas
haan..bula let hun usko apne khwabon mein. . .
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amrita
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«Reply #10 on: November 01, 2005, 08:52:08 AM »
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baatein bhool jaati hain yaadein hai jo pass reh jaati hai...nice..ghayal and tinda
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«Reply #11 on: November 07, 2013, 06:53:57 PM »
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Nicee onee...
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