Toote dil ka Judna hai Mushkil --->

by kittoo on October 17, 2013, 02:22:56 PM
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Rooth hi gaye tum
aakhir manaate manaate
gir gaya na dekho ashiyaan
aakhir banaate banaate
miloge fir kabhi ya nahi
itna to bata dete tum jaate jaate
hum aaj bhi khade hain usi 2raahe par
aati thi jahan tum sabse chhupake
agar chalta rahta apna wo hi silsila
na tum roothti na hum manaate
ashiyan jo gir gaya hai to ban sakta hai fir se
toote dil ko jodne ki mushkil kash tum samajh paate.
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«Reply #1 on: October 17, 2013, 02:28:03 PM »
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acha likha hai kittoo ji aapne
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«Reply #2 on: October 17, 2013, 02:30:18 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: October 17, 2013, 02:46:05 PM »
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Rooth hi gaye tum
aakhir manaate manaate
gir gaya na dekho ashiyaan
aakhir banaate banaate
miloge fir kabhi ya nahi
itna to bata dete tum jaate jaate
hum aaj bhi khade hain usi 2raahe par
aati thi jahan tum sabse chhupake
agar chalta rahta apna wo hi silsila
na tum roothti na hum manaate
ashiyan jo gir gaya hai to ban sakta hai fir se
toote dil ko jodne ki mushkil kash tum samajh paate.
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«Reply #4 on: October 17, 2013, 03:04:47 PM »
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Bahut khoooooooob...
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«Reply #5 on: October 17, 2013, 04:17:31 PM »
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Rooth hi gaye tum
aakhir manaate manaate
gir gaya na dekho ashiyaan
aakhir banaate banaate
miloge fir kabhi ya nahi
itna to bata dete tum jaate jaate
hum aaj bhi khade hain usi 2raahe par
aati thi jahan tum sabse chhupake
agar chalta rahta apna wo hi silsila
na tum roothti na hum manaate
ashiyan jo gir gaya hai to ban sakta hai fir se
toote dil ko jodne ki mushkil kash tum samajh paate.

behad gehre aur sacche ehsaas..... dil se daad kittuu ji.. Salaamat rahen

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«Reply #6 on: October 17, 2013, 04:36:27 PM »
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That's Great One.
Kittoo Jee.
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«Reply #7 on: October 18, 2013, 09:22:19 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: October 24, 2013, 06:58:36 PM »
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nyc 1 kittu jee,.........
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