----- /// Tum aaj tum nahi lagte /// -----klaskar

by klaskar on May 01, 2010, 11:20:46 PM
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O priye, tumhaare hone se hi hum hum the,
tab tak tumhe hum bas tumhare lagte the,
tum hi thi jo humein humse milaati thi,
warna hum jo the wo kabhi bhi na lagte the,

aaj tumne humse ye baat jaane q kahi,
"jab tak tum mere the aise na lagte the,
aaj jaane kyun tum tum nahi lagte,
jab tak tum mere the, mere lagte the",

tumhaare hone se hi haseen thi apni duniya,
saare nazaarein humein haseen lagte the,
aaj wo saare manzar banjar lagte hain,
kal tak jo baag-e-bahaar lagte the,

kya tumne in sukhe phoolon se poochha,
kaise ye kal tak khile gulaab lagte the?
na kaha kuch unse tumne, par bas humse kaha,
"jab tak tum mere the bas mere lagte the",

aaj wo saare khat bas kaagaz lagte hain,
kal tak jo humein tumhaare ehsaas lagte the,
aaj tumhaari har wo nishaani khaamosh lagti hai,
kal tak jo mujhe tumhaare aawaaz lagte the,

na poocha tumne ek baar bhi apne dil se ki kyun,
jab tak hum tumhaare the bas tumhaare lagte the,
bas keh diya, "aaj jaane kyun tum tum nahi lagte,
jab tak tum mere the, mere lagte the".....
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«Reply #1 on: May 01, 2010, 11:28:04 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob Kapil ji.very touching and wonderful creation.kamaal ke likhte ho. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #2 on: May 02, 2010, 08:56:25 AM »
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Bahut khoob Kapil Ji
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«Reply #3 on: May 02, 2010, 10:40:34 AM »
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bhutkhub aap n jane kya kya laga diya diwane ko bilkul jagah dikha diya. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: May 02, 2010, 10:59:53 AM »
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Nice creation Kapil ji. Bahot achhi poem likhi hai aapne. Marhaba.
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«Reply #5 on: May 02, 2010, 01:47:30 PM »
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KApil Ji Very very GUD!!!!!!!!!!

Jst "KAMAL"

Really lyk it very painful.....

ITS JST "WOW"
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«Reply #6 on: May 02, 2010, 06:38:45 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji... !!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on May 01, 2010, 11:28:04 PM
Bahut bahut khoob Kapil ji.very touching and wonderful creation.kamaal ke likhte ho. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #7 on: May 02, 2010, 09:02:49 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on May 02, 2010, 08:56:25 AM
Bahut khoob Kapil Ji
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«Reply #8 on: May 03, 2010, 07:56:58 AM »
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wah..!!!! Applause Applause
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bahut khub kapil sahab....
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bahut bahut shukriya Basuki ji aapke khoobsurat compliment k liye...!!!

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bhutkhub aap n jane kya kya laga diya diwane ko bilkul jagah dikha diya. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: May 03, 2010, 12:46:23 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Riyaz ji jo aapne hamari kavita ko pasand kiya aur usko itni izzat di...!!!

Quote from: riyaz106 on May 02, 2010, 10:59:53 AM
Nice creation Kapil ji. Bahot achhi poem likhi hai aapne. Marhaba.
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Thanx a lot for ur sweet compliments Neel. Ya it is painful but pain gives me words to compose. Thanx to that pain. Thank u so much again.

Quote from: neelgold on May 02, 2010, 01:47:30 PM
KApil Ji Very very GUD!!!!!!!!!!

Jst "KAMAL"

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bahut bahut shukriya Touhid ji...!!!

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bahut khub kapil sahab....
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bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji.....!!!

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