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Pta Hai Tumhe Bahut Yaad Aati Hai Ab Meri
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«Reply #1 on: January 22, 2011, 03:15:18 AM » |
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bahut khubsurat creation Rishi ji
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki
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«Reply #2 on: January 22, 2011, 06:02:39 AM » |
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rishiji aaj aapki ye post padhkar na kapil ji k likhne ka style dimagme aagay...unka bhi kuch ye hi andaaz hai likhne ka jab wo fatafut likhte the....
liked ur post very much ji....
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«Reply #3 on: January 22, 2011, 06:36:44 AM » |
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b=nice creatin rishi bhai
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«Reply #4 on: January 22, 2011, 07:49:23 AM » |
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bahot khoob rishi ji..........words bahot bahot hi pyare he....maja aa gaya sahab........keep it up
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«Reply #5 on: January 22, 2011, 07:58:48 AM » |
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U Na Tum Mujhe Itna Yaad Kiya Karo
U Apne Dard Ka Mujhe Ehsaas Na Dilaya Karo
Khudko Tum Akele Hone Ka Tana Na Diya Karo
Apni Yadoon Ka Gila Shikwa Bhi Na Kiya Karo
Kyu Itna Gussa Dikhati Ho Tum Mujh Par
Kabhi Pyar Se Bhi Samjha Diya Karo
Pta Hai Tumhe Bahut Yaad Aati Hai Ab Meri
Par Meri Majburio Ko Bhi Samjha Jaya Karo
Kya Btayen Tumko Kitna Karte Hai Yaad
Hisab Lagana Ho To Apni Sansien Geen Liya Karo Bahut Khoob ... Rishi Ji ! bahut umdaa likha hai aapne ... dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... duaaon ke saath ... ! |
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«Reply #6 on: January 22, 2011, 11:08:22 AM » |
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nice
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«Reply #7 on: January 22, 2011, 12:37:25 PM » |
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bht khoob rishi ji....
very nice lines...
2nd one bht pasand aaya....
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«Reply #8 on: January 22, 2011, 04:39:52 PM » |
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bahut khubsurat creation Rishi ji
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«Reply #9 on: January 22, 2011, 04:43:52 PM » |
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rishiji aaj aapki ye post padhkar na kapil ji k likhne ka style dimagme aagay...unka bhi kuch ye hi andaaz hai likhne ka jab wo fatafut likhte the....
liked ur post very much ji..
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«Reply #10 on: January 22, 2011, 04:47:23 PM » |
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b=nice creatin rishi bhai
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«Reply #11 on: January 22, 2011, 04:49:40 PM » |
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bahot khoob rishi ji..........words bahot bahot hi pyare he....maja aa gaya sahab........keep it up
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«Reply #12 on: January 22, 2011, 04:51:19 PM » |
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Bahut Khoob ... Rishi Ji ! bahut umdaa likha hai aapne ... dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...
duaaon ke saath ... !
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«Reply #13 on: January 22, 2011, 04:53:42 PM » |
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«Reply #14 on: January 22, 2011, 04:55:54 PM » |
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bahut khoob likha hai Rishi dear
khush rahen,muskurate rahen
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