tum gaye ho hamein jahan tanha chhodkar......

by sweetarjita on January 30, 2016, 03:50:34 PM
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karwaton se ab hamari raat kat'ti hai
aansuo ke sang hi tanhaai bant'ti hai
aankhon mein basi hai tasveer tumhari
zehen se na tumhari yaad hat'ti hai

khushiyon ke sabhi khayal - o - khwaab todkar
tum gaye ho hamein tanha chhodkar

subah hoti thi tumhare hi deedaar se
shaamein dhalti thi baahon mein pyaar se
bhari dupehri mein jaise tapte dil par
chhaya karte the ishq ke izhaar se

un khubsurat dino ko kafan mein odhkar
tum gaye ho hamein tanha chhodkar

dil ke khali kamre mein soonepan ka ehsaas hai
ishq ki galiyon mein ab sannaton ki aawaz hai
hamare sab chain-o-sukoon le gaye tum
kuchh hai to bas dard-e-judaai hamare paas hai

aaj bhi hum khade hain usi mod par
tum gaye ho hamein jahan tanha chhodkar.......
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«Reply #1 on: January 30, 2016, 03:59:01 PM »
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karwaton se ab hamari raat kat'ti hai
aansuo ke sang hi tanhaai bant'ti hai
aankhon mein basi hai tasveer tumhari
zehen se na tumhari yaad hat'ti hai

khushiyon ke sabhi khayal - o - khwaab todkar
tum gaye ho hamein tanha chhodkar

subah hoti thi tumhare hi deedaar se
shaamein dhalti thi baahon mein pyaar se
bhari dupehri mein jaise tapte dil par
chhaya karte the ishq ke izhaar se

un khubsurat dino ko kafan mein odhkar
tum gaye ho hamein tanha chhodkar

dil ke khali kamre mein soonepan ka ehsaas hai
ishq ki galiyon mein ab sannaton ki aawaz hai
hamare sab chain-o-sukoon le gaye tum
kuchh hai to bas dard-e-judaai hamare paas hai

aaj bhi hum khade hain usi mod par
tum gaye ho hamein jahan tanha chhodkar.......


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«Reply #2 on: January 30, 2016, 06:16:15 PM »
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bahoot khoob !!!!!
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«Reply #3 on: January 30, 2016, 09:33:26 PM »
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Quote from: sweetarjita on January 30, 2016, 03:50:34 PM
karwaton se ab hamari raat kat'ti hai
aansuo ke sang hi tanhaai bant'ti hai
aankhon mein basi hai tasveer tumhari
zehen se na tumhari yaad hat'ti hai

khushiyon ke sabhi khayal - o - khwaab todkar
tum gaye ho hamein tanha chhodkar

subah hoti thi tumhare hi deedaar se
shaamein dhalti thi baahon mein pyaar se
bhari dupehri mein jaise tapte dil par
chhaya karte the ishq ke izhaar se

un khubsurat dino ko kafan mein odhkar
tum gaye ho hamein tanha chhodkar

dil ke khali kamre mein soonepan ka ehsaas hai
ishq ki galiyon mein ab sannaton ki aawaz hai
hamare sab chain-o-sukoon le gaye tum
kuchh hai to bas dard-e-judaai hamare paas hai

aaj bhi hum khade hain usi mod par
tum gaye ho hamein jahan tanha chhodkar.......

bahut hee khoob waah waah Sweetarjita Jee, dheron daad RAU ke saath. (Rau baad mein miley gaa)
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«Reply #4 on: January 31, 2016, 01:28:58 AM »
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beautiful waah waah dher saaree daad
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Bahut bahut shukriya adil ji...thank u so much surindranji...thanks rajan ji and saini ji
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«Reply #6 on: January 31, 2016, 05:33:36 AM »
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Kya baat kya baat kya baat...
un khubsurat dino ko kafan mein odhkar
tum gaye ho hamein tanha chhodkar
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bahut hee khoob waah waah Sweetarjita Jee, dheron daad RAU ke saath.
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Sweetarjita Jee Rau main ne aapko de diyaa hai, qabool keejiye.
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