Tum jo nahin ho ....!!!!

by Talat on November 02, 2006, 04:19:57 PM
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Sath to pehle bhi nahin the tum mere,
Phir aaj kyun yeh judaai das rahi hai

Dil par kaisa hai yeh bojh anjaana sa,
yeh kaisi zangeer is ko kas rahi hai

Kyun bheeg rahi hain aankhain meri,
Kisi baat par jab dunya hans rahi hai

Yeh khalish chubhti si, yeh bechaini si,
Kyun thakan rooh main bas rahi hai

Dhadkan ho rahi hai dhemi rafta rafta,
Har saans seene main phans rahi hai !! sad5
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«Reply #1 on: November 02, 2006, 04:25:46 PM »
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Talat

The feeling of chocking and suffocation is very well expressed !

Very good !

Rajbir
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«Reply #2 on: November 03, 2006, 09:58:11 PM »
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Thank you so much Rajbir, for understanding the poem and your appreciation !!
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«Reply #3 on: November 11, 2006, 05:10:42 PM »
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Thanks a lot Majid !!
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«Reply #4 on: November 12, 2006, 04:15:39 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob Talat Ji,..
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«Reply #5 on: November 12, 2006, 04:18:30 PM »
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Specially For Some One,..

Koi Shikwa Nahi Koi Gila Nahi,..
Tu Bichda Nahi Par Mila Bhi Nahi..

Ek Arsa Hua Teri Awaaz Sune Hue,..
Ye Berukhi To Nahi par Chahat Ka Sila Bhi Nahi,..

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«Reply #6 on: November 13, 2006, 01:28:57 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob Bhai,..
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«Reply #7 on: November 13, 2006, 01:30:35 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: November 13, 2006, 02:00:30 PM »
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wwoooowww bhaut khoob doston.......

juda hue the hum phir milne ki aas liye
phir kyon aankho ko dil ko aitbaar nahi
behti hi rehti hai har dum tere aanke intezaar mai
dil bhi na jaane kyo sisak uthta hai teri judai mai
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«Reply #9 on: November 13, 2006, 02:04:34 PM »
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Shukriya Bhai bahoot Khoob Likha Hai Tumne,..
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«Reply #10 on: November 13, 2006, 02:06:49 PM »
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Judaa Hai Wo Mujhse Magar Magar Bewafaa Nahi,..
Hain Use Mujhe Laakhon Gile Magar Wo Mujshe Khafaa Nahi,..
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«Reply #11 on: November 14, 2006, 03:37:41 AM »
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Shukriya JS Bahi.. Bahut khoob kaha aapne.....

jo tu nahi hai paas mere
zindgi to ruuth gayi hai
maut bhi katrati hai aane se
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«Reply #12 on: November 16, 2006, 10:43:13 AM »
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Shukriya Bhaijaan,.
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«Reply #13 on: November 16, 2006, 10:47:27 AM »
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Shukriya JS Bahi.. Bahut khoob kaha aapne.....

jo tu nahi hai paas mere
zindgi to ruuth gayi hai
maut bhi katrati hai aane se


Nice One Bhai,..

Maut Bhi Khafaa Hai Mujhse Ke Tu Mujse Khafaa Hai..
Zindagi To Hai Ek Gham Ka Diya Aur Tu Bhi Mujse Judaa Hai,..

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JS bahi bahut khoob kaha aapne......

Jo tum nahi rahe mere to jee ke kaya karenge
maut ke dua karo doston hum jee ke kaya karenge
marne ke baad kabar me na dalana  mujhko
nahi to kabar mai bhi hum unka intezaar karenge
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