Tum Kab Aaoge Jaan-E-Ghazal

by Mohammad Touhid on May 15, 2010, 05:33:22 AM
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Dosto....ye intezar ke pal bhi bade ajeeb hote hai, gamgin hote hai, khush bhi karte hai aur dukhi bhi, maza bhi aata hai aur saza bhi pata hai...ufff...ye intezar ke pal...... iska ek pyara sa ehsaas apne kalam se yahan utaarne ki koshis kar raha hu... ummid karta hu mera intezar ka ye pal aap logo ko jarur pasand aayega.... (...Ghazal meri sabse achhi dost hai., jise mai Pyar se Jaan-E-Ghazal kehta hu...)


Pyar bahut hai tujhse ye saanse keh rahi hai,
bichhad rahi hai zindagi se meri saanse ab.,
intezar tera dard-e-zindagi me hai har pal,
ye saanse puchh rahi hai tum kab aaoge jaan-e-Ghazal.,

rota hu, bilakhta hu, tanha rehta hu mai,
na sota hu, na marta hu bas teri raah takta hu mai.,
zinda hokar bhi na jee saka mai ye pal,
suni raahe puchh rahi hai tum kab aaoge jaan-e-Ghazal.,

khalti hai teri kami mujhe har jagah ish tarah,
jaise chakor ko chandni ka deedar nahi milta.,
dil ke sukhe baagh ka haseen hai tu baadal,
khuli baahe puchh rahi hai tum kab aaoge jaan-e-Ghazal.,

tere saath naa hone se duniya suni si lagti hai,
tere bin ye zindagi bilkul berang ooni si lagti hai.,
deedar ko tere taras raha hai "Touhid" har shu har pal,
pyasi aankhe puchh rahi hai tum kab aaoge jaam-e-Ghazal.,
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«Reply #1 on: May 15, 2010, 08:26:26 AM »
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Wah wah wah ,bahut khoob Touhid ji,very beautiful gazal,very touching and mindblowing creation.excellent. Hats off to you! Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 15, 2010, 08:40:15 AM »
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sahi kaha aapne kisike intezar me aesa hi feel hota he....
minblowing.... Clapping Smiley   Applause   Applause
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«Reply #3 on: May 15, 2010, 09:03:41 AM »
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Bahut Khoobsurat Ehsaas!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut bahut Khoob Touhidji..Lovely Creation
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«Reply #4 on: May 15, 2010, 01:38:09 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya... khwahish ji..., Madhu ji.... and Devangi ji.... Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: July 29, 2011, 07:46:05 PM »
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Jaan-e-Ghazal..

huh..!! wat a name..
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