-----/// Tum kabhi aake mujhe dekh jaanaa /// ----- Hriday

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kabhi guzzro meri gali se to tum mere aashiyaane ko dekh jaanaa,
zaraa sa waqt nikaalke usme rehne waale deewaane ko dekh jaanaa,

umeed ka diyaa jalaayaa tha tumne kabhi aake usko dekh jaanaa,
tum aake us diye ke niche bas rahe har andhere ko dekh jaanaa,

kitaab ke panne palat ke usme chhipe sukhe gulaab ko dekh jaanaa,
tum mil na sako mujhse agar to wahaan pade sharaab ko dekh jaanaa,

kaagaz ke tumhe tukde milenge, tum har us tukde ko dekh jaanaa,
tukdo ko agar jod sako to unme tum apni tasveer ko dekh jaanaa,

puraane kuch tumhe khat milenge, tum har us khat ko dekh jaanaa,
har khat me tumhaaraa naam milega, tum apne naam ko dekh jaanaa,

khush ho tum ye maaloom hai mujhe, tum mere haalat ko dekh jaanaa,
aa naa sako tum mere jeete jee to aake mere laash ko dekh jaanaa...


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«Reply #1 on: May 21, 2012, 11:55:24 AM »
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kabhi guzzro meri gali se to tum mere aashiyaane ko dekh jaanaa,
zaraa sa waqt nikaalke usme rehne waale deewaane ko dekh jaanaa,

umeed ka diyaa jalaayaa tha tumne kabhi aake usko dekh jaanaa,
tum aake us diye ke niche bas rahe har andhere ko dekh jaanaa,

kitaab ke panne palat ke usme chhipe sukhe gulaab ko dekh jaanaa,
tum mil na sako mujhse agar to wahaan pade sharaab ko dekh jaanaa,

kaagaz ke tumhe tukde milenge, tum har us tukde ko dekh jaanaa,
tukdo ko agar jod sako to unme tum apni tasveer ko dekh jaanaa,

puraane kuch tumhe khat milenge, tum har us khat ko dekh jaanaa,
har khat me tumhaaraa naam milega, tum apne naam ko dekh jaanaa,

khush ho tum ye maaloom hai mujhe, tum mere haalat ko dekh jaanaa,
aa naa sako tum mere jeete jee to aake mere laash ko dekh jaanaa...


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«Reply #2 on: May 21, 2012, 12:38:14 PM »
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zaraa sa waqt nikaal ke tum us deewane ko dekh jaana..
ham bilkul aisa hi sochte hai jab kisi se bahot door hoote hai....loved this one..very nice!
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«Reply #3 on: May 21, 2012, 01:47:34 PM »
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bahutkhoob ,Hriday ji.
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«Reply #4 on: May 21, 2012, 02:11:07 PM »
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bahut khoob kahaa Hriday ji
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«Reply #5 on: May 21, 2012, 07:26:54 PM »
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diya wala line superbbb--
bht bht khubsurat nagma
daad daad
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«Reply #6 on: May 22, 2012, 05:36:09 AM »
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amazing hridayji...bahut khoob...

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«Reply #7 on: May 22, 2012, 11:36:55 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Adil ji.....!!!

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«Reply #8 on: May 29, 2012, 04:18:02 PM »
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Thank you sooooooooooooooooooo much Sps ji.....!!!

Quote from: Sps on May 21, 2012, 12:38:14 PM
zaraa sa waqt nikaal ke tum us deewane ko dekh jaana..
ham bilkul aisa hi sochte hai jab kisi se bahot door hoote hai....loved this one..very nice!
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aahahhha lajawab peshkash hriday ji...............lafzo mein tareef sambhav nahi isliye sirf


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«Reply #10 on: May 29, 2012, 04:21:18 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on May 21, 2012, 11:52:54 AM
kabhi guzzro meri gali se to tum mere aashiyaane ko dekh jaanaa,
zaraa sa waqt nikaalke usme rehne waale deewaane ko dekh jaanaa,

umeed ka diyaa jalaayaa tha tumne kabhi aake usko dekh jaanaa,
tum aake us diye ke niche bas rahe har andhere ko dekh jaanaa,

kitaab ke panne palat ke usme chhipe sukhe gulaab ko dekh jaanaa,
tum mil na sako mujhse agar to wahaan pade sharaab ko dekh jaanaa,

kaagaz ke tumhe tukde milenge, tum har us tukde ko dekh jaanaa,
tukdo ko agar jod sako to unme tum apni tasveer ko dekh jaanaa,

puraane kuch tumhe khat milenge, tum har us khat ko dekh jaanaa,
har khat me tumhaaraa naam milega, tum apne naam ko dekh jaanaa,

khush ho tum ye maaloom hai mujhe, tum mere haalat ko dekh jaanaa,
aa naa sako tum mere jeete jee to aake mere laash ko dekh jaanaa...


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bahut bahut shukriyaa Hasan ji....!!!

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bahut bahut shukriyaa Saini ji....!!!

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bahut khoob kahaa Hriday ji
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Sarfira ji....!!!

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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on May 21, 2012, 11:52:54 AM
kabhi guzzro meri gali se to tum mere aashiyaane ko dekh jaanaa,
zaraa sa waqt nikaalke usme rehne waale deewaane ko dekh jaanaa,

umeed ka diyaa jalaayaa tha tumne kabhi aake usko dekh jaanaa,
tum aake us diye ke niche bas rahe har andhere ko dekh jaanaa,

kitaab ke panne palat ke usme chhipe sukhe gulaab ko dekh jaanaa,
tum mil na sako mujhse agar to wahaan pade sharaab ko dekh jaanaa,

kaagaz ke tumhe tukde milenge, tum har us tukde ko dekh jaanaa,
tukdo ko agar jod sako to unme tum apni tasveer ko dekh jaanaa,

puraane kuch tumhe khat milenge, tum har us khat ko dekh jaanaa,
har khat me tumhaaraa naam milega, tum apne naam ko dekh jaanaa,

khush ho tum ye maaloom hai mujhe, tum mere haalat ko dekh jaanaa,
aa naa sako tum mere jeete jee to aake mere laash ko dekh jaanaa...


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Wah wah bahut bahut khoob... esp last two lines dil ko chu liya ... good work Thumbs UP
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