Tum naheen aaye, to, gul tak naheen khilaa koyee!

by abdbundeli on August 04, 2008, 03:20:09 PM
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'Hazaar baar chaleyngey, jahaan bahaar chaley!
 Ham, eik baar naheen, balki, baar-baar chaley!!
 Tum naheen aaye, to, gul tak naheen khilaa koyee;
 Bahak key, go ki, jhakorey hazaar baar chaley!'

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«Reply #1 on: August 04, 2008, 04:23:25 PM »
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nice lines abd ji
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«Reply #2 on: January 21, 2009, 01:02:57 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 04, 2008, 04:23:25 PM
nice lines abd ji
Thanks Pooja ji!
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«Reply #3 on: January 29, 2010, 05:37:26 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on August 04, 2008, 03:20:09 PM
'Hazaar baar chaleyngey, jahaan bahaar chaley!
 Ham, eik baar naheen, balki, baar-baar chaley!!
 Tum naheen aaye, to, gul tak naheen khilaa koyee;
 Bahak key, go ki, jhakorey hazaar baar chaley!'

                                   - abd bundeli

Na humdam koyi na ab hamraz yahan
Bure waqt ka koyi saathi yahan nahi

Ek baar nahi hazar bar kareeb aaye hum
Tukradiya hame, fir bi hum aaye samne ek naya roop lekar..
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«Reply #4 on: January 30, 2010, 04:12:15 PM »
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Quote from: malli on January 29, 2010, 05:37:26 PM

Na humdam koyi na ab hamraz yahan
Bure waqt ka koyi saathi yahan nahi

Ek baar nahi hazar bar kareeb aaye hum
Tukradiya hame, fir bi hum aaye samne ek naya roop lekar..


Wah hee hai har roop mein;
Dhoop rahey yaa chhaanh!
Chhaliyaa hai wah; sheeghra hee,
Aa pakrheygaa baanh!!

            - 'Ramwatiya'
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«Reply #5 on: January 30, 2010, 04:17:59 PM »
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Bahut achhe sher hain Abd ji. Shandaar, khoobsurat,dilkash. Nice creation.
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«Reply #6 on: January 30, 2010, 04:20:49 PM »
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Waah Waah Bahoot Khoob ABD ji.. Bahoot Khoob!

Bahoot Khoob Roja !
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«Reply #7 on: January 31, 2010, 03:24:44 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on January 30, 2010, 04:20:49 PM
Waah Waah Bahoot Khoob ABD ji.. Bahoot Khoob!

Bahoot Khoob Roja !

Thanks for your kind appreciation sweetu Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: January 31, 2010, 03:26:34 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on January 30, 2010, 04:12:15 PM
Wah hee hai har roop mein;
Dhoop rahey yaa chhaanh!
Chhaliyaa hai wah; sheeghra hee,
Aa pakrheygaa baanh!!

            - 'Ramwatiya'

Us shamma ki mehfil hi kya jismein dil jal kar khaak na ho..!!

Maza hai chahat ka tabhi sajan, dil jale magar khaak na ho..!!
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«Reply #9 on: January 31, 2010, 06:36:29 AM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on January 30, 2010, 04:17:59 PM
Bahut achhe sher hain Abd ji. Shandaar, khoobsurat,dilkash. Nice creation.
Quote from: Sophi on January 30, 2010, 04:20:49 PM
Waah Waah Bahoot Khoob ABD ji.. Bahoot Khoob!

Bahoot Khoob Roja !
Quote from: malli on January 31, 2010, 03:26:34 AM

Us shamma ki mehfil hi kya jismein dil jal kar khaak na ho..!!

Maza hai chahat ka tabhi sajan, dil jale magar khaak na ho..!!


Thanks a lot, riyaz106 ji / Sophi ji / malli ji!

Roz hotey hain khaak, laakh-laakh parwaaney!
Kiskee manzil hai koun, jo chaley wahee jaaney!
Talab ki raah pai laakhoun huye hain khaak,'abd',
Eik tuu hi to naheen hai, ki, raah pahichaaney!!

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«Reply #10 on: January 31, 2010, 08:47:21 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on January 31, 2010, 06:36:29 AM
Thanks a lot, riyaz106 ji / Sophi ji / malli ji!

Roz hotey hain khaak, laakh-laakh parwaaney!
Kiskee manzil hai koun, jo chaley wahee jaaney!
Talab ki raah pai laakhoun huye hain khaak,'abd',
Eik tuu hi to naheen hai, ki, raah pahichaaney!!

                 - abd bundeli                    


Vo yu dil se guzarte hai ki aahat tak nahi hoti
Vo yu awaz dete hai ki pehchani nahi jaati
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«Reply #11 on: January 31, 2010, 02:11:31 PM »
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Quote from: malli on January 31, 2010, 08:47:21 AM

Vo yu dil se guzarte hai ki aahat tak nahi hoti
Vo yu awaz dete hai ki pehchani nahi jaati



Kaash aatee sadaa-e-paa wahee jaaneemaanee;
Beysadaa, kaash, na hotee sanam ki har aamad!
Jaagta-sotaa mahaz intizaar kartaa huun:
Usey lageygaa kabhee meyree talab hai bey-had?

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