TUM NAHI RAHE......

by sajid_ghayel on August 30, 2008, 07:38:48 AM
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BAAT SAMAJ ME AAYEE HOTI TO BOLE HOTE
BAS ITNA HI SUNA THA KE TUM NAHI RAHE
TUM NAHI RAHE ACHCHA MAZAK HAIN
JAB TUM HI SE SABKUCH HAIN
TO TUM KAISE NAHI RAHOGE
KITNE SAPNE DEKHE HAIN HUMNE MILKE
AUR UNKO PURA BHI MILKE KARNA HAIN
AUR WOH KEHTE HAIN TUM NAHI RAHE
ACHCHA MAZAK HAIN
PAR KYA HUA TUM ABHI TAK GHAR Q NAHI LAUTE
AAJ TUMNE WADA KIYA THA MUJE KAHI NAHER KHANA KHILAOGE
WADA PURA NA KARNA HO MAT KARO PAR GHAR TO AA JAO
AAJ MAINE TUMHARI FAVORITE SADI PEHNI HAIN
AUR DEKHO CHUDIYA BHI KITNI PYAARI HAIN
PAR IN SAB KHUSHIYO KE BEECH
Q YEH BAAT SATA RAHI HAIN
JO MAINE AAJ PHONE PE SUNI THI KE TUM NAHI RAHE
KYA HO SAKTA HAIN ISKA MATLAB
BAAT SAMAJ ME AAYEE HOTI TO BOLE HOTE
BAS ITNA HI SUNA THA KE TUM NAHI RAHE.

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«Reply #1 on: August 31, 2008, 07:15:09 AM »
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SHAYED MAIN THEEK SE APNI BAAT NAHI KEH PAYA ISILIYE TO EK BHI REPLY NAHI AAYA KOI BAAT NAHI AAINDA KOSHISH KARUGA KE ISSE BEHTAR LIKHU.
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«Reply #2 on: August 31, 2008, 07:32:50 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on August 30, 2008, 07:38:48 AM
BAAT SAMAJ ME AAYEE HOTI TO BOLE HOTE
BAS ITNA HI SUNA THA KE TUM NAHI RAHE
TUM NAHI RAHE ACHCHA MAZAK HAIN
JAB TUM HI SE SABKUCH HAIN
TO TUM KAISE NAHI RAHOGE
KITNE SAPNE DEKHE HAIN HUMNE MILKE
AUR UNKO PURA BHI MILKE KARNA HAIN
AUR WOH KEHTE HAIN TUM NAHI RAHE
ACHCHA MAZAK HAIN
PAR KYA HUA TUM ABHI TAK GHAR Q NAHI LAUTE
AAJ TUMNE WADA KIYA THA MUJE KAHI NAHER KHANA KHILAOGE
WADA PURA NA KARNA HO MAT KARO PAR GHAR TO AA JAO
AAJ MAINE TUMHARI FAVORITE SADI PEHNI HAIN
AUR DEKHO CHUDIYA BHI KITNI PYAARI HAIN
PAR IN SAB KHUSHIYO KE BEECH
Q YEH BAAT SATA RAHI HAIN
JO MAINE AAJ PHONE PE SUNI THI KE TUM NAHI RAHE
KYA HO SAKTA HAIN ISKA MATLAB
BAAT SAMAJ ME AAYEE HOTI TO BOLE HOTE
BAS ITNA HI SUNA THA KE TUM NAHI RAHE.

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Sajid ji,

I just came here to have a quick look at my favorite place on Web i.e. YoIndia, and I was not in any mood to comment or write anything at this moment. But, your this poem compelled me to write..

I must congratulate u on the variety of thoughts you bring through your poems... Its really amazing, u wrote this from a women's point of view.. And you have done full justice to the feelings she could have when some mis-happening like this happens to her..  sad7 This is really heart touching poem.. Very very sentimental and close to life..

Excellent work Sajid ji.. Applause

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on August 31, 2008, 07:15:09 AM
SHAYED MAIN THEEK SE APNI BAAT NAHI KEH PAYA ISILIYE TO EK BHI REPLY NAHI AAYA KOI BAAT NAHI AAINDA KOSHISH KARUGA KE ISSE BEHTAR LIKHU.

Please be patient for comments on your writings, you have already got 51 views to this masterpiece. Sometimes people just read and appreciate but were not able to give a written comment.  Usual Smile So, count on number of views rather than written comments.

Anyways, Aap ne jis andaaz mein baat likhi, woh kisi ko bhi samajh aa jaayegi, is se jyaada achha kuch nahin ho sakta...  Usual Smile Once again... Congrats on your fine works Sajid ji..  notworthy
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«Reply #3 on: August 31, 2008, 07:43:30 AM »
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mahiya main wada karta hu aaj ke baad na hi shikayat karuga na afsos bas jo likhuga apne dil se likhuga yeh ghayel ka wada hain aapse, aapki yeh tareef meri puri zindagi ke liye kafi hain.
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«Reply #4 on: August 31, 2008, 04:09:07 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob Bhaijaan,.
Yunhi LIkhte rahiye,.
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«Reply #5 on: September 01, 2008, 03:56:02 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: September 01, 2008, 04:06:13 AM »
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sajid ji ..jo aap kahna chahte the bakhoobi kaha aapne....shabdon ko kavita me sametne me aapka saani nhai koi.....
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«Reply #7 on: September 02, 2008, 07:30:09 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on August 30, 2008, 07:38:48 AM
BAAT SAMAJ ME AAYEE HOTI TO BOLE HOTE
BAS ITNA HI SUNA THA KE TUM NAHI RAHE
TUM NAHI RAHE ACHCHA MAZAK HAIN
JAB TUM HI SE SABKUCH HAIN
TO TUM KAISE NAHI RAHOGE
KITNE SAPNE DEKHE HAIN HUMNE MILKE
AUR UNKO PURA BHI MILKE KARNA HAIN
AUR WOH KEHTE HAIN TUM NAHI RAHE
ACHCHA MAZAK HAIN
PAR KYA HUA TUM ABHI TAK GHAR Q NAHI LAUTE
AAJ TUMNE WADA KIYA THA MUJE KAHI NAHER KHANA KHILAOGE
WADA PURA NA KARNA HO MAT KARO PAR GHAR TO AA JAO
AAJ MAINE TUMHARI FAVORITE SADI PEHNI HAIN
AUR DEKHO CHUDIYA BHI KITNI PYAARI HAIN
PAR IN SAB KHUSHIYO KE BEECH
Q YEH BAAT SATA RAHI HAIN
JO MAINE AAJ PHONE PE SUNI THI KE TUM NAHI RAHE
KYA HO SAKTA HAIN ISKA MATLAB
BAAT SAMAJ ME AAYEE HOTI TO BOLE HOTE
BAS ITNA HI SUNA THA KE TUM NAHI RAHE.

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Sajid Ji,

Aapki is nazm ne meri aankhon ko bhigo diya hai...subah subah rula diya !!!

Bohot khoob Sajid Ji, aapka har andaz-e-shayari qaabil-e-taareef hai, chhahe wo ghazal ho, nazm ho ya phir mazahiya....Bohot bohot Khoob Applause
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«Reply #8 on: September 02, 2008, 08:00:40 AM »
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BEKARAR AND MIRA THANK YOU VERY MUCH
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«Reply #9 on: September 02, 2008, 02:03:19 PM »
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Nice One Again Sajid Bhai,.
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«Reply #10 on: September 02, 2008, 02:15:29 PM »
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Saara Samaan Waisa Hi Tha,.
Hum Bhi Jahaan The Wahin Rahe,.
Par Tum Nahi Rahe,.

Khushiyon Ki Mehfilon Mein Bhi Udaasi Rahi,.
Hum Bhi Un Mehfilon Mein The,.
Par Tum Nahi Rahe,.
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 Bohat acha likha hai aapne sayid ji Applause

Bohat acha likha hai Azeem bhai... Applause
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Shukriya Didi,./'
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Tu Jo Nahi To Fizaaon Mein Asar Nahi,.
Dil Mein Chaai Hai Shab Aisi Jiski koi Sehar Nahi,.
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on September 02, 2008, 02:15:29 PM
Saara Samaan Waisa Hi Tha,.
Hum Bhi Jahaan The Wahin Rahe,.
Par Tum Nahi Rahe,.

Khushiyon Ki Mehfilon Mein Bhi Udaasi Rahi,.
Hum Bhi Un Mehfilon Mein The,.
Par Tum Nahi Rahe,.


Quote from: Jaanasheen on September 05, 2008, 03:18:17 PM
Tu Jo Nahi To Fizaaon Mein Asar Nahi,.
Dil Mein Chaai Hai Shab Aisi Jiski koi Sehar Nahi,.


Bohat khoob Chote too good.
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