TUM NAHI RAHE......

by sajid_ghayel on August 30, 2008, 07:38:48 AM
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«Reply #15 on: January 05, 2009, 08:12:32 PM »
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Koi baat nahi shihab Tareef ke liye Bohat shukriyaan
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«Reply #16 on: January 05, 2009, 08:17:40 PM »
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BAAT SAMAJ ME AAYEE HOTI TO BOLE HOTE
BAS ITNA HI SUNA THA KE TUM NAHI RAHE
TUM NAHI RAHE ACHCHA MAZAK HAIN
JAB TUM HI SE SABKUCH HAIN
TO TUM KAISE NAHI RAHOGE
KITNE SAPNE DEKHE HAIN HUMNE MILKE
AUR UNKO PURA BHI MILKE KARNA HAIN
AUR WOH KEHTE HAIN TUM NAHI RAHE
ACHCHA MAZAK HAIN
PAR KYA HUA TUM ABHI TAK GHAR Q NAHI LAUTE
AAJ TUMNE WADA KIYA THA MUJE KAHI NAHER KHANA KHILAOGE
WADA PURA NA KARNA HO MAT KARO PAR GHAR TO AA JAO
AAJ MAINE TUMHARI FAVORITE SADI PEHNI HAIN
AUR DEKHO CHUDIYA BHI KITNI PYAARI HAIN
PAR IN SAB KHUSHIYO KE BEECH
Q YEH BAAT SATA RAHI HAIN
JO MAINE AAJ PHONE PE SUNI THI KE TUM NAHI RAHE
KYA HO SAKTA HAIN ISKA MATLAB
BAAT SAMAJ ME AAYEE HOTI TO BOLE HOTE
BAS ITNA HI SUNA THA KE TUM NAHI RAHE.

                            -SG-

 Applause Applause

bahoot khoob SG Jii... bahoot he simple shabdo main apne bahoot gahra dard likh diya... good work
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«Reply #17 on: January 05, 2009, 08:20:14 PM »
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Applause Applause

bahoot khoob SG Jii... bahoot he simple shabdo main apne bahoot gahra dard likh diya... good work

Thank You pooja
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«Reply #18 on: January 09, 2009, 11:33:57 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 05, 2009, 02:04:45 PM

Bohat khoob Chote too good.

Shukriya Bhaiya,.
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«Reply #19 on: January 09, 2009, 12:06:29 PM »
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Dard ko bahot aasani se likh diya aapne ki jaise kuchh hua hi nahin...wo bhi iss tarah ki kahin tasalsul nahin toota...

waah Sajid ( Ghayal ji)bhaai.
bahot khoob.
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«Reply #20 on: January 09, 2009, 02:46:43 PM »
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Quote from: Naziya Tahera on January 09, 2009, 12:06:29 PM
Dard ko bahot aasani se likh diya aapne ki jaise kuchh hua hi nahin...wo bhi iss tarah ki kahin tasalsul nahin toota...

waah Sajid ( Ghayal ji)bhaai.
bahot khoob.

Bohat shukriyaa Naziya
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«Reply #21 on: January 09, 2009, 02:55:33 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Sajid Saheb...
Padhkar Yeh Mehsoos Hua Hai Ke Yeh Kalaam Dil Se Likhi Gayi Ho..Bahut Khoob
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #22 on: January 09, 2009, 03:10:19 PM »
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Bohat bohat shukriyaa khwaish bas yahi koshish rehti hain jo likhu simple ho aasan ho aur sachcha lage
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«Reply #23 on: January 09, 2009, 03:14:22 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on August 30, 2008, 07:38:48 AM
BAAT SAMAJ ME AAYEE HOTI TO BOLE HOTE
BAS ITNA HI SUNA THA KE TUM NAHI RAHE
TUM NAHI RAHE ACHCHA MAZAK HAIN
JAB TUM HI SE SABKUCH HAIN
TO TUM KAISE NAHI RAHOGE
KITNE SAPNE DEKHE HAIN HUMNE MILKE
AUR UNKO PURA BHI MILKE KARNA HAIN
AUR WOH KEHTE HAIN TUM NAHI RAHE
ACHCHA MAZAK HAIN
PAR KYA HUA TUM ABHI TAK GHAR Q NAHI LAUTE
AAJ TUMNE WADA KIYA THA MUJE KAHI NAHER KHANA KHILAOGE
WADA PURA NA KARNA HO MAT KARO PAR GHAR TO AA JAO
AAJ MAINE TUMHARI FAVORITE SADI PEHNI HAIN
AUR DEKHO CHUDIYA BHI KITNI PYAARI HAIN
PAR IN SAB KHUSHIYO KE BEECH
Q YEH BAAT SATA RAHI HAIN
JO MAINE AAJ PHONE PE SUNI THI KE TUM NAHI RAHE
KYA HO SAKTA HAIN ISKA MATLAB
BAAT SAMAJ ME AAYEE HOTI TO BOLE HOTE
BAS ITNA HI SUNA THA KE TUM NAHI RAHE.

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In one word.......... Wah... Applause Applause

Dil ko chugaya aapka kalam Sajid ji... keep up  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #24 on: January 09, 2009, 03:21:21 PM »
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Aapka kalam padkar yeh sher yaad aaya yahan share kar rahi hu.

Judai ke bandi khane mein.....
Bass ab tu jeene ka aik hi
silsila hai jana!

Tumhari sochoon mein dube rehna
Tumhare khwaaboon mein khuye rehna
Kisi terha tum ko dekhne ki sebeel kerna
Tumhare kooche tak ane ka
koi bahana kerna.

Her ate jate se khriyat ki naveed lena
Hawaaoon aur chand aur
parindoon pe rashk kerna. 

Mera ji ahwaal poochna hai,
tu yeh hai jana!
Ke jane kab se....

judai ke bandi khane mein
baraf ki seel pe tanha

Hararat-e-zindagi se kuch
rabbt dhoondti hoon

badan ko apne..
tumhare hatoon se chuo rahi hoon!

Poet:: Parveen Shakir
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«Reply #25 on: January 09, 2009, 03:30:49 PM »
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Nice Sharing Salma Madam Ji,.
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«Reply #26 on: January 09, 2009, 03:58:37 PM »
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Thank u Roja and thanks for beautiful sharing
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«Reply #27 on: January 09, 2009, 04:33:30 PM »
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GOOD Sharing Roja!!
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«Reply #28 on: January 11, 2009, 04:45:50 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 09, 2009, 03:58:37 PM
Thank u Roja and thanks for beautiful sharing

You are welcome Sajid jii... waise mai yeh zarur kahungi
ke aap ka likha kalam shayari lovers ke liye a real treat hai.
Keep up... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #29 on: January 11, 2009, 04:47:31 PM »
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Thanks pooja di..
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