<>*Tum nahin ho fir bhi*<>

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<>*Tum nahin ho fir bhi*<>


lamhein to bas beet rahe hain yunhi
ye pal jaise dhal rahe hain yunhi
na kuch kehte hain na kuch sunte
sannate gunj rahe hain har kahin

dhadkane bhi khamosh hain meri
saanson ki gati bhi dhheemi hai
na koi khwaab saja hai aaj mujhse
na hi koi tasveer bani hai kahin

lehrein bhi uth uth kar mit rahi hain
sagar bhi aaj kyun badla nazar aata hai
kuch to baat hai aaj ki tanhaiyon me
kyun mujhe kuch achcha lag raha nahin

har taraf teri hi tasveer dikhai deti hai
teri awaaz mujhe har su.n sunai deti hai
tu nahin hai mere aas paas kahin bhi magar
par janti hun k tu aayehga ek din mere pas yahin....!!!
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«Reply #1 on: October 12, 2010, 08:46:25 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 12, 2010, 08:15:45 AM
<>*Tum nahin ho fir bhi*<>


lamhein to bas beet rahe hain yunhi
ye pal jaise dhal rahe hain yunhi
na kuch kehte hain na kuch sunte
sannate gunj rahe hain har kahin

dhadkane bhi khamosh hain meri
saanson ki gati bhi dhheemi hai
na koi khwaab saja hai aaj mujhse
na hi koi tasveer bani hai kahin

lehrein bhi uth uth kar mit rahi hain
sagar bhi aaj kyun badla nazar aata hai
kuch to baat hai aaj ki tanhaiyon me
kyun mujhe kuch achcha lag raha nahin

har taraf teri hi tasveer dikhai deti hai
teri awaaz mujhe har su.n sunai deti hai
tu nahin hai mere aas paas kahin bhi magar
par janti hun k tu aayehga ek din mere pas yahin....!!!

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«Reply #2 on: October 12, 2010, 12:27:24 PM »
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Nice kasak ji........
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«Reply #3 on: October 12, 2010, 12:42:51 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Kasak ji.. par achaanak aap udaasi pe kyun likhne lag gayi fir???

ye duuri kuch pal ki hai main laut aaunga,
tujhse bichhad ke main ab kahaan jaunga,
tujhse hi to jodi hai zindagi ki har kadi,
kuch duur chalke main tere liye thahar jaunga,

na ho udaas ki main tujhe chhod ke jaunga,
tujhse duur ho ke bhi main tujhe yaad aaunga,
nazar na aaye agar mera chehra kahin to,
aankhen band karna, main tujhe nazar aa jaunga,

main tera hoon bas tera hi banke reh jaunga,
jaana agar pade tujhse dur to duniya chhod jaunga,
chaaha hai tujhe maine chaahta jaaunga,
main hamesha bas tere hi geet gungunaunga....
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Quote from: Rahi2001 on October 12, 2010, 08:46:25 AM
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hmmmm rahul thnx bhai...par tum aate ho tabhi main nahin hoti hun...khair thik hai ...
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«Reply #5 on: October 12, 2010, 12:50:11 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on October 12, 2010, 12:27:24 PM
Nice kasak ji........

thnx geet ji....
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«Reply #6 on: October 12, 2010, 07:37:49 PM »
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bhaut achha kasak ji...

kuch koshish ki hai jawab mein likhne ki... gaur kijiyega

Intezar !

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 12, 2010, 08:15:45 AM
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lamhein to bas beet rahe hain yunhi
ye pal jaise dhal rahe hain yunhi
na kuch kehte hain na kuch sunte
sannate gunj rahe hain har kahin


In lamhon ke saath gujar gaya main bhi kahin
Is pal ke saath bikhar gaya main bhi kahin
Khamosh to raha par sab kuch suntan raha main
Par phir bhi awaaj to deta raha kahin kahin,


dhadkane bhi khamosh hain meri
saanson ki gati bhi dhheemi hai
na koi khwaab saja hai aaj mujhse
na hi koi tasveer bani hai kahin


Teri khaamoshi kar deti hai tujhko bayan
Saanse tez ho jayengi aahat suno ge gar kahin,
Khwaab to teri palko pe ab bhi hai mauzood
Tasveer to meri tere dil mein basi hai kahin,


lehrein bhi uth uth kar mit rahi hain
sagar bhi aaj kyun badla nazar aata hai
kuch to baat hai aaj ki tanhaiyon me
kyun mujhe kuch achcha lag raha nahin


Lehron ke shor huye kam parwaah nahin
bas ye samandar aaj hume baha le jaata kahin
ek kashish kheench laayi hai tujhe is tanhai me,
shayad tu bhi apne pehlu me simat rahi hai kahin,



har taraf teri hi tasveer dikhai deti hai
teri awaaz mujhe har su.n sunai deti hai
tu nahin hai mere aas paas kahin bhi magar
par janti hun k tu aayehga ek din mere pas yahin....!!!

main basa raha tere khwaab mein tujhe bin bataaye
aur aksar khamoshi mein sunaayi deta raha kahin
main to tujhme hi shaamil hun har jagah  “ Kasak ”
gaur se dekh tu paayegi  Intezar ko khud hi mein kahin !
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«Reply #7 on: October 12, 2010, 07:48:47 PM »
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bahut khoob surat kaha hai icon_salut
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«Reply #8 on: October 13, 2010, 04:24:00 AM »
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Quote from: Intezar on October 12, 2010, 07:37:49 PM
bhaut achha kasak ji...

kuch koshish ki hai jawab mein likhne ki... gaur kijiyega

Intezar !


aaj se hum aapke fan ho gaye intezaar ji.......waahhhhhhhh kya khub reply kiya hai aapne....maan gaye ji....
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«Reply #9 on: October 13, 2010, 04:37:38 AM »
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senti nahin likh rahi kapil ji..bas kuch khayal man me aa jate hain to senti ho jati hun...
dekhiye kuch khyal aur aagaye.....

Jaane tum kab laut k mere paas aaoge
Jab aaoge shayad hume nahin paaoge
Hum kho jayenge iss duniya ki bheed me
Bolo na tum hume kaise dhundh paaoge

Na naam hi hai pata na hume jaante ho
Ek chehra hi to hai jise tum pehchante ho
Waqt k sath ye bhi to kuch  badal jayega
Bolo na fir tum hume kaise pehchan paaoge

Aaj to rehte ho mere sath sath har pal tum
Kal apni zindagi me hi ulajh k reh jaoge
Yaad bhi aai kabhi kuch ghadi ko main
Bolo na tum kaise mujhse tab baat kar paaoge

Kho jayengi ye rangeen raatein ye subah bhi
Fas jaoge apni rozz marraa ki zaruraton me
Jab kabhi sath gaya koi geet tum gungunaoge
Bolo na tum meri awaaz kaise sun paaoge..!!!

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 12, 2010, 12:42:51 PM
bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Kasak ji.. par achaanak aap udaasi pe kyun likhne lag gayi fir???

ye duuri kuch pal ki hai main laut aaunga,
tujhse bichhad ke main ab kahaan jaunga,
tujhse hi to jodi hai zindagi ki har kadi,
kuch duur chalke main tere liye thahar jaunga,

na ho udaas ki main tujhe chhod ke jaunga,
tujhse duur ho ke bhi main tujhe yaad aaunga,
nazar na aaye agar mera chehra kahin to,
aankhen band karna, main tujhe nazar aa jaunga,

main tera hoon bas tera hi banke reh jaunga,
jaana agar pade tujhse dur to duniya chhod jaunga,
chaaha hai tujhe maine chaahta jaaunga,
main hamesha bas tere hi geet gungunaunga....
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«Reply #10 on: October 13, 2010, 09:34:40 AM »
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Aise khayaal ko duur hi rakhiye... ye sirf rulaate hain bas .. aur kuch nahi milta inse...  bharosa rakhiye aap us uparwale pe aur khud pe... raaste apne ap nazar aane lag jaate hain....waise likha bahut hi pyaara hai aapne.. bahut bahut khoob....

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tumse rishta mera aankhon ka nahi dil ka hai,
aankhen band kar tumhe hum mehsoos kar lenge,
kya hua agar kabhi tumhaara chehra badal gaya,
tumhe hum tumhaari baaton se pehchaan lenge,

na kabhi poochha na tumhaara naam jaante hain,
hum to tumhe tumhaari aahat se pehchaan lenge,
khone nahi denge tumhe is bheed me duniya ke,
hum tumhe apne dil ki dhadkano me chhupa lenge,

kya hua agar hum ulajh gaye apni zindagi me,
tumhaare liye sapno me hum waqt nikaal lenge,
yaad agar aa gayi kabhi tumhaari tanhaayi me,
to hum aankhen band kar tumse baat kar lenge,

chaahte hain tumhe tab se jab tumhe dekha na tha,
apni chaahat ko hum chaahat se pehchaan lenge,
'Kasak' tumhaari hamaare 'Hriday' me is qadar hai ki,
khaamoshi me bhi tumhaari awaaz ko hum sun lenge...
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