tum

by aazad panchi on August 21, 2012, 10:51:07 PM

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aazad panchi

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tumne kaha tha saath doge ...
kahan kho gaye vo vaade ....??
tumhe kaha tha tum srf mere rahoge ....
kahan kho gaye vo irade ....??

jhuth se tum kab parda uthaoge ....
khamosh mere labon ki pukar kab sun paaoge ....
bheed main tanha hain hum ....
aake thamm lo tum ....
khud tumhare paas daud kar aayenge hum ....
pyar bahre jasbaat se naam toh lo tum .... !!


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Re: tum

«Reply #1 on: August 22, 2012, 12:32:44 AM »

Quote from: aazad panchi on August 21, 2012, 10:51:07 PM

ek se ek umda shayari aaj pada humne aapka. bahut khob azad jee.'

yu hi likhte rahiye. excellant. Clapping Smiley


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Re: tum

«Reply #2 on: August 22, 2012, 12:46:56 AM »

bahut khoob


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Re: tum

«Reply #3 on: August 22, 2012, 01:07:09 AM »

beautiful


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Re: tum

«Reply #4 on: August 22, 2012, 03:21:00 AM »

Quote from: aazad panchi on August 21, 2012, 10:51:07 PM


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BANSI DHAMEJA

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Re: tum

«Reply #5 on: August 22, 2012, 03:37:46 AM »

achha likha hai likhte raheeye


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aazad panchi

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Re: tum

«Reply #7 on: August 22, 2012, 11:32:37 PM »

aap sab ka bahut bahut dhanyavad ... aapke saath ki zarurat hai bas .... Usual Smile

likhana toh tabiyat main shumar kar hi lenge hum ... Usual Smile


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Re: tum

«Reply #8 on: August 23, 2012, 04:30:42 PM »

aazad panchi ji aazadi se urrhte raho
jo chaho jab chaho likhte raho
achha likhoge to wah wah ham karenge
aap chaho to shukriya adaa karte raho


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Re: tum

«Reply #9 on: August 25, 2012, 10:13:18 PM »

bahut bahut shukriya bansi ji .... !!


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