Tumhari Judai

by drpandey on February 02, 2010, 09:20:28 PM
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Tumhari judai mein dam tod dala!
Tumhe di hui her kasam tod dala!
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LaboN tak mere barhaN jaam aaya,
Magar jan-e-ulfat tera naam aaya,
Meri tishnagi ne diya aaj dhoka,
Magar bekhudi ne bahot baar roka,

Teri berukhi ne bharam tod dala!
Tumhe di hui her kasam tod dala!

Yahi gham mujhe hai ki tauba kiya,
Mere rooh ne dil se sauda kiya,
Badi beraham hai judai ki duniya,
JababoN me uljhi safai ki duniya,

Meri khudnumai ne kham tod dala!
Tumhe di hui her kasam tod dala!
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Dr HP Pandey
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ehsaas chahat ka
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«Reply #1 on: February 02, 2010, 09:42:48 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: February 03, 2010, 09:20:36 AM »
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Wah wah Pandey Sahab zore-qalam badhta hi jaa raha hai. Phir se umdah nazm aapne murattab ki hai. Bahut achhi lagi aapki ye creation.
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«Reply #3 on: February 03, 2010, 09:52:39 AM »
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to good pandey ji
keep it up.......
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drpandey
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«Reply #4 on: February 03, 2010, 10:32:11 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on February 03, 2010, 09:24:05 AM
behad umda,bahut khoob likha hai Pandey ji
Quote from: ehsaas SK ka on February 02, 2010, 09:42:48 PM
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Quote from: thinkhattk on February 03, 2010, 09:52:39 AM
to good pandey ji
keep it up.......
Quote from: riyaz106 on February 03, 2010, 09:20:36 AM
Wah wah Pandey Sahab zore-qalam badhta hi jaa raha hai. Phir se umdah nazm aapne murattab ki hai. Bahut achhi lagi aapki ye creation.

Riyaj Sahab, Think Ji, Ehsaas Ji, Shihab ji, @Kaash Ji aap sabko behad Sukriya ki aap sabhi ne aik haqeer si nazm ko itni muhabbat ata farmaye, Main aap sabhi ke himmat afzai ko dhanyabaad deta hun..
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«Reply #5 on: February 03, 2010, 11:59:44 AM »
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Waah Waah Bahoot Khoob Pandey ji.. Bahoot Kamal ka hai
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«Reply #6 on: February 03, 2010, 12:25:30 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on February 03, 2010, 11:59:44 AM
Waah Waah Bahoot Khoob Pandey ji.. Bahoot Kamal ka hai
Sophi ji pasand farmane ka sukriya, ek chhoti si nazm thi..
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«Reply #7 on: February 03, 2010, 01:59:42 PM »
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Bahut Khubsurat Likha Hai Dr. Pandey Ji
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«Reply #8 on: February 03, 2010, 02:43:59 PM »
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Here you decided to help a bit, and sent this post to social bookmark. I really hope your ranking will increase.
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«Reply #9 on: February 03, 2010, 07:28:15 PM »
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Wow bahut badiya.really touched Pandey ji.great creation.excellent. Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: February 03, 2010, 07:32:37 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on February 03, 2010, 07:28:15 PM
Wow bahut badiya.really touched Pandey ji.great creation.excellent. Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Your reply Madhu Ji seems as if a festival to my heart...thanks a lot.
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«Reply #11 on: February 04, 2010, 08:37:12 AM »
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Quote from: drpandey on February 02, 2010, 09:20:28 PM
Tumhari judai mein dam tod dala!
Tumhe di hui her kasam tod dala!
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very nice creation Dr.Pandey ji

Tumhari judai mein dam tod dala
Tumse kiya har vada tod DALA/

Tumhe di har kasam tod DALI/

Tumhari har kasam ka bharam tod DALA
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«Reply #12 on: February 04, 2010, 08:50:58 AM »
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Quote from: S.hashmi on February 04, 2010, 08:37:12 AM
very nice creation Dr.Pandey ji

Tumhari judai mein dam tod dala
Tumse kiya har vada tod DALA/

Tumhe di har kasam tod DALI/

Tumhari har kasam ka bharam tod DALA

Thanks Hashmi Ji Lovely reply..I appreciate such creations in reply.
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