Tumhe kya pata...

by daljeet_faqeer on March 28, 2010, 10:39:39 AM
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Tumhe kya pata teri yaad mein kitna roya hai dil,
hum to tanha the magar har or saji thi mehfil.

Jaane kaise humne ye din aur raat guzari hai sanam,
ismein teri yaadon ke the haseen woh pal bhi shamil.

Koi nagma chhed do ke dil ko kuchh suqoon mile,
yun khamosh rehkar tanhai se kya hoga aapko haasil.

Hamesha doston se milte ho kabhie raqeebon se bhi milo,
dil mein ho ehsaas to yeh mulaqaat nahin mushkil.

Bahut raaton baad woh shaks ghar ko laut aaya hai,
jis shaks ko humne apna maana wohi hai hamara qaatil.

                              Daljeet'faqeer'
 
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«Reply #1 on: March 28, 2010, 11:36:37 AM »
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WAH WAH DALJEET JI BAHUT ACHHA LIKHA HAI.
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«Reply #2 on: March 28, 2010, 01:30:20 PM »
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GUD FAQEER SB Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: March 28, 2010, 05:24:10 PM »
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aapke alfaaz dil ko chu gaye Daljeet ji... bahut khoobsoorat likha hai aapne  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: March 28, 2010, 07:20:54 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: March 28, 2010, 10:58:39 PM »
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Too good Daljeet ji,marvelous creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: March 28, 2010, 11:16:06 PM »
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han bahot acha like ho daljeet keep it up Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: March 28, 2010, 11:51:43 PM »
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wah wah ..bahoot khoob likha hai..khaas kar yeh do shair.

Koi nagma chhed do ke dil ko kuchh suqoon mile,
yun khamosh rehkar tanhai se kya hoga aapko haasil.

Hamesha doston se milte ho kabhie raqeebon se bhi milo,
dil mein ho ehsaas to yeh mulaqaat nahin mushkil.


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