'Tumko aanaa tha ! Tum naheen aaye ?

by abdbundeli on May 25, 2008, 04:55:54 PM
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 Tum ko aanaa tha! Tum naheen aaye?
 Tum hi kah do, ki, kya kahaa jaaye?

 Waa'adaa tum ney kiyaa tha, khud hee;
 Aur, tum khud hi aa naheen paaye?

 Jab bhi aaougey; naheen poochhoongaa:
 Kyon na they waa'adey pai tum aaye?

 Tum kabhi aaougey? Umeed to hai!
 Kyon usey hee na jee liyaa jaaye?

 Kyon karoon dar ko muqaffal ab mein?
 Kya pataa, woh abhi bhi aa jaaye?
 
 Raah par teyree, tikeen hain aankheyn:
 Yaar, gar aaye, to nazar aaye!

 Ab bhi, ham ko hai intizar, 'abd',
 Yaad aa jaaye, woh chalaa aaye!!

                        -abd bundeli


 
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«Reply #1 on: May 26, 2008, 03:03:21 AM »
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Kyon karoon dur ko muqaffal ab mein?
 Kya putaa, woh abhi bhi aa jaaye?
 
 Raah pur teyree, tikeen hain aankheyn:
 Yaar, gur aaye, to nazar aaye!

good work
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«Reply #2 on: May 31, 2009, 04:23:08 AM »
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Quote from: Sonia01 on May 26, 2008, 03:03:21 AM
good work
Thanks Sonia01 ji!
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«Reply #3 on: May 31, 2009, 06:13:38 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on May 25, 2008, 04:55:54 PM

 Tum ko aanaa tha! Tum naheen aaye?
 Tum hi kah do, ki, kya kahaa jaaye?

 Waaydaa tum ney kiyaa tha, khud hee;
 Aur, tum khud hi aa naheen paaye?

 Jab bhi aaougey; naheen poochhoongaa:
 Kyon na they waa'adey pai tum aaye?

 Tum kabhi aaougey? Umeed to hai!
 Kyon usey hee na jee liyaa jaaye?

 Kyon karoon dar ko muqaffal ab mein?
 Kya pataa, woh abhi bhi aa jaaye?
 
 Raah par teyree, tikeen hain aankheyn:
 Yaar, gar aaye, to nazar aaye!

 Ab bhi, ham ko hai intizar, 'abd',
 Yaad aa jaaye, woh chalaa aaye!!

                        -abd bundeli


 

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohot Khoob Babu Ji
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«Reply #4 on: June 02, 2009, 04:30:59 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 31, 2009, 06:13:38 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohot Khoob Babu Ji
Thanks bitia Celmira!
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«Reply #5 on: June 02, 2009, 04:43:08 AM »
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realy awesome !!!!
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«Reply #6 on: June 02, 2009, 05:47:12 AM »
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Excellent,very very nice Abd ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: June 02, 2009, 06:56:44 AM »
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Quote from: YoBabby on June 02, 2009, 04:43:08 AM
realy awesome !!!!
Quote from: madhuwesh on June 02, 2009, 05:47:12 AM
Excellent,very very nice Abd ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Thanks a lot, YoBabby & Madhu! I'm happy you liked the gazal!
                - abd bundeli
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«Reply #8 on: January 30, 2010, 06:41:50 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on May 25, 2008, 04:55:54 PM

 Tum ko aanaa tha! Tum naheen aaye?
 Tum hi kah do, ki, kya kahaa jaaye?

 Waa'adaa tum ney kiyaa tha, khud hee;
 Aur, tum khud hi aa naheen paaye?

 Jab bhi aaougey; naheen poochhoongaa:
 Kyon na they waa'adey pai tum aaye?

 Tum kabhi aaougey? Umeed to hai!
 Kyon usey hee na jee liyaa jaaye?

 Kyon karoon dar ko muqaffal ab mein?
 Kya pataa, woh abhi bhi aa jaaye?
 
 Raah par teyree, tikeen hain aankheyn:
 Yaar, gar aaye, to nazar aaye!

 Ab bhi, ham ko hai intizar, 'abd',
 Yaad aa jaaye, woh chalaa aaye!!

                        -abd bundeli

Bahut ache Uncle ji  Applause Applause

Shabbe intezar ki kashma-kash na ye pooch kaise sehar huyi

Kabhi ek charag jala diya, kabhi ek charaj bhuja diya..
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«Reply #9 on: January 31, 2010, 07:25:23 AM »
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Quote from: malli on January 30, 2010, 06:41:50 PM
Bahut ache Uncle ji  Applause Applause

Shabbe intezar ki kashma-kash na ye pooch kaise sehar huyi

Kabhi ek charag jala diya, kabhi ek charaj bhuja diya..


Jaagee mein; jaagaa wirah;
Bujhey deep wishraant!
Batlaao priya, ho kahaan?
Kab hogaa wirahaant?

     - 'Ramwatiya'
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«Reply #10 on: January 31, 2010, 08:44:03 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on January 31, 2010, 07:25:23 AM
Jaagee mein; jaagaa wirah;
Bujhey deep wishraant!
Batlaao priya, ho kahaan?
Kab hogaa wirahaant?

     - 'Ramwatiya'

wah wah.....  love4

Jiske khayal mein hu gum kya usko bi kuch khayal hai?
Mere liye yehi sawal sabse bada sawal hai...
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«Reply #11 on: January 31, 2010, 02:23:25 PM »
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Quote from: malli on January 31, 2010, 08:44:03 AM
wah wah.....  love4


Jiske khayal mein hu gum kya usko bi kuch khayal hai?
Mere liye yehi sawal sabse bada sawal hai...


Pratidhwani hotee hai sabhi
Dhwaniyoun kee chahun or!
Ahrah rahtee hai tabhee,
Aadra drugoun ki kor!

              - abd bundeli
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«Reply #12 on: February 11, 2010, 02:17:16 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on January 31, 2010, 02:23:25 PM
Pratidhwani hotee hai sabhi
Dhwaniyoun kee chahun or!
Ahrah rahtee hai tabhee,
Aadra drugoun ki kor!

              - abd bundeli

Ajab aarzoo hai, anokhi talab hai..
Dil chahta hai, tumhe tumhi se churalu... Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: February 12, 2010, 07:37:40 AM »
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Quote from: malli on January 31, 2010, 08:44:03 AM
wah wah.....  love4


Jiske khayal mein hu gum kya usko bi kuch khayal hai?
Mere liye yehi sawal sabse bada sawal hai...


Thanks, 'malli'!

Khayaal aataa hai jab uskaa, to, wo bhee yaad kartaa hai;
Magar, aankhoun key hotey roo-b-roo, lagtaa hai, dartaa hai!
Thhahar jaaou zaraa-see deyr, phir deykho kanakhiyoun sey;
Nazar aayegaa tab tumko, ki, koyee pyaar kartaa hai!!

                                 - abd bundeli
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