tumko bhi neend ati nahi

by saahill on June 01, 2012, 09:26:33 PM
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aadat thi tere sang raat bhar jaagne ki ,
kya karein yeh aadat kambakht jati nahi

hum to jaagte hain teri yaad mein ,
kyun tumko bhi neend aati nahin

dekh kar sitaron ko sochte hain ,
woh batein pyar ki inmein kyun kho jati nahi  

hum to wafa nibhate rahe yeh yaad rahega har pal ,
kyun tum bewafai karke bhi hume bhul pati nahi

mehfil karte hain andekha humein dekhkar
chupke se dekhne ki aadat kyun apki jati nahi

hum to jaagte hain teri yaad mein ,
kyun tumko bhi neend aati nahin
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«Reply #1 on: June 02, 2012, 02:34:02 AM »
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bahut khub ...........sahil bhai.......

kyun tum beawafai karke bhi hhumein bhul pati nahi........ gazab dhaya hai aapne...... Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: June 02, 2012, 04:27:31 AM »
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khoob....
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«Reply #4 on: June 02, 2012, 09:02:41 AM »
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Sahil Jee Aadaab!


Janab kia baat hai... bade gehre khayaaloN ko baNdha hai
waaH jee bahut khoob... bade achche ashaar rahe... behad
khoob kalaam .... Usual Smile

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«Reply #5 on: June 02, 2012, 02:43:13 PM »
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boht shukrya ripan ji
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«Reply #6 on: June 03, 2012, 04:24:20 AM »
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thx saini ji
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«Reply #7 on: June 03, 2012, 04:25:48 AM »
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bahut khub.......
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«Reply #8 on: June 03, 2012, 01:01:24 PM »
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thx laiba ji
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«Reply #9 on: June 03, 2012, 01:07:31 PM »
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Quote from: saahill on June 01, 2012, 09:26:33 PM
aadat thi tere sang raat bhar jaagne ki ,
kya karein yeh aadat kambakht jati nahi

hum to jaagte hain teri yaad mein ,
kyun tumko bhi neend aati nahin

dekh kar sitaron ko sochte hain ,
woh batein pyar ki inmein kyun kho jati nahi 

hum to wafa nibhate rahe yeh yaad rahega har pal ,
kyun tum bewafai karke bhi hume bhul pati nahi

mehfil karte hain andekha humein dekhkar
chupke se dekhne ki aadat kyun apki jati nahi

hum to jaagte hain teri yaad mein ,
kyun tumko bhi neend aati nahin


           kya ishq kya khawaab kya tamanaa bachi abb..!
           sab kuch le gyaa wo mujhe lootne ke baad.!!
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«Reply #10 on: June 03, 2012, 01:19:34 PM »
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 Applause Applause

Bahut hi accha likhte hai aap.
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«Reply #11 on: June 03, 2012, 03:19:26 PM »
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thx saudagar ji
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«Reply #12 on: June 03, 2012, 05:01:02 PM »
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bahut khoob.
BEWAFA KIYA JANE WAFA KIYA CHEEZ HAI
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«Reply #13 on: June 04, 2012, 07:03:04 AM »
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thx khamosh ji
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Bohat Aacha Bana Hai!! Last fourth line mein ek suggestion Hai

Mehfil Me karte hai undekha hume dekh kar...

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Judai ke dard ko khub bayan kiya hai aap ne...
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