Tumse door...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on March 01, 2011, 06:36:47 PM
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«Reply #15 on: March 04, 2011, 01:09:28 PM »
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Quote from: ruku on March 03, 2011, 02:34:42 PM
aapki kavitayen ek se badhkar ek  hai

aapki tareef karne ki liye baatein kaha se dhoondu ??

bahut accha hai  icon_flower  Applause Applause
ASan hai dear tumhe acha laga utna hi bahut hai isse zyada aur kya kahogi..thnx alot....
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«Reply #16 on: March 04, 2011, 01:23:56 PM »
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very nice song boht acha laga dil se daad
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«Reply #17 on: March 04, 2011, 01:26:21 PM »
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Quote from: saahill on March 04, 2011, 01:23:56 PM
very nice song boht acha laga dil se daad

Saahil ji ye gana nhi ek kavita hai per apko agar gungunkae pasand ayi tou  aur bhi behtar hai..shukriya...
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«Reply #18 on: March 04, 2011, 01:47:13 PM »
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sorry for mistake
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«Reply #19 on: March 04, 2011, 01:55:33 PM »
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Quote from: saahill on March 04, 2011, 01:47:13 PM
sorry for mistake

Aji sorry kis liye aap jaise marzi chahe padhe ji apko pasand aati merre liye wahi kaafi hai..take care...
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«Reply #20 on: March 04, 2011, 02:01:03 PM »
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yehi adhayein aapki  dil chura le jaati hain,
jab hothon ko bandh rakhkar aankhon se bol jati hain
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«Reply #21 on: March 04, 2011, 02:06:09 PM »
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Quote from: saahill on March 04, 2011, 02:01:03 PM
yehi adhayein aapki  dil chura le jaati hain,
jab hothon ko bandh rakhkar aankhon se bol jati hain
Bahut khoob saahil ji...

Khiza ki andhiyo mein tumhari hi mhbt basi hai,
jo tufano mein milkar bhi kayam hai...
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«Reply #22 on: March 04, 2011, 02:16:38 PM »
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dear aandhi nahi adhayein likha tha humne___


toofano mein milkar bhi mohabat ki kashti ko paar lagayenge ,
sath ho tumhari chahat to doobkar bhi saahil ko paayenge
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«Reply #23 on: March 04, 2011, 02:29:32 PM »
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Quote from: saahill on March 04, 2011, 02:16:38 PM
dear aandhi nahi adhayein likha tha humne___


toofano mein milkar bhi mohabat ki kashti ko paar lagayenge ,
sath ho tumhari chahat to doobkar bhi saahil ko paayenge

Ji maafi chahungi...

Har kinare pe tumhara intezar karungi main,
lehero ko samet k baho mein tumpe jaan nisar karungi main...
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«Reply #24 on: March 04, 2011, 03:26:25 PM »
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thak jao jo tum itna intzar na karwayenge ,
tere jaan nisaar karne se pehle teri jaan hum ban jayenge
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«Reply #25 on: March 04, 2011, 03:52:00 PM »
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Quote from: saahill on March 04, 2011, 03:26:25 PM
thak jao jo tum itna intzar na karwayenge ,
tere jaan nisaar karne se pehle teri jaan hum ban jayenge

Jaan tou tum ho hi bus merri ruh ki hifazat karna,
zamane ka koi ghum mujhe chhu na sake tum mujhse itni mhbt karna...
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«Reply #26 on: March 04, 2011, 04:37:32 PM »
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itni mohabat denge tumko ke sambhal na paoge,
meri mohabat mein tum khud ko bhul jaoge
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«Reply #27 on: March 04, 2011, 04:44:39 PM »
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Quote from: saahill on March 04, 2011, 04:37:32 PM
itni mohabat denge tumko ke sambhal na paoge,
meri mohabat mein tum khud ko bhul jaoge

Bhul jane k liye hi tou tujhse mhbt ki hai,
kuch maza nhi aata khud ko yad rakhne mein ab...
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«Reply #28 on: March 04, 2011, 05:05:57 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 04, 2011, 04:44:39 PM
Bhul jane k liye hi tou tujhse mhbt ki hai,
kuch maza nhi aata khud ko yad rakhne mein ab...
khud ko yaad Rakhte hain yahi sochkar hum .
Ke khud mein humne tumko aise basaya hai
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«Reply #29 on: March 04, 2011, 05:13:52 PM »
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Bhul jana hr din ko bhul jana  har pal ko,
bhule se bhi na bhulana hum jaise haasil ko...
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