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<>*Udaas Kyun Hun*<>

Ajeeb uljhan me aaj dil hai
Tumhe bhulakar udaas kyun hun
Tujhe na chahna ye zid thi meri
Tujhe ganwakar udaas kyun hun

Ajeeb tewar dekhe hain tere
Bahot thokar hai tune khaai
Magar aaj jab tera sath chhuta
Main yun bad hawaas kyun hun
Ajeeb uljhan me aaj dil hai
Tumhe bhulakar udaas kyun hun

Tujhe hi samjha tujhe hi jana
Tujhe hi dil ne hai apna mana
Yakin hai mujhko na ishq tumse
Fir aaj main yun beaas kyun hun
Tujhe na chahna ye zid thi meri
Tujhe ganwakar udaas kyun hun...!!


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Re: <>*Udaas Kyun Hun*<>

«Reply #1 on: June 18, 2012, 06:23:15 AM »

waah waah bahut khoob


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Re: <>*Udaas Kyun Hun*<>

«Reply #2 on: June 18, 2012, 06:32:16 AM »

boht painful likha kasak ji


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Re: <>*Udaas Kyun Hun*<>

«Reply #3 on: June 18, 2012, 10:09:07 AM »

Quote from: sksaini4 on June 18, 2012, 06:23:15 AM

waah waah bahut khoob

shukriya saini ji... bahot dino baad kuch likha shukra ai aapne pasand kiya.....


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Re: <>*Udaas Kyun Hun*<>

«Reply #4 on: June 18, 2012, 10:09:35 AM »

Quote from: saahill on June 18, 2012, 06:32:16 AM

boht painful likha kasak ji

thnx saahil... par jo feel kiya wahi likha...


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Re: <>*Udaas Kyun Hun*<>

«Reply #5 on: June 18, 2012, 04:19:43 PM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on June 18, 2012, 06:15:07 AM

<>*Udaas Kyun Hun*<>

Awesome.....Bahut Bahut Khooob..

Shukar Anuji Ki Kalam Chali To Varna
Hum To Soch rahe The Ke Anuji
Ab Sirf Padhne Hi Aayenge..
Thankyou Sooooooooooooo Much Ji Kuch likhne Ke Liye..
Chaliye Kuch Hum Bhi Haal-e-dil Likh lete Hai..

Main Kabhi Tujhe Khona Nahi Chaahta Tha..!!
Woh Baat Aur Hai Tu Mera Hona Nahi Chaahta Tha

Maine Kabhi Nahi Chaaha Ke Teri AankheiN Nam Ho
Main Apni Bhi PalkoN Ko Bhigona Nahi Chaahta Tha

Humesha Tere Hi Haq MeiN Faisle Ho Yehi Aarzoo Hai
Toote Dil Ke TukdoN Ko Sanjona Nahi Chaahta Tha

Tera Mujhpar Har Ilzam,Mere Sar AankhoN Ke Sadke
Khokar Tujhe Main Umar Bhar Rona Nahi chaahta Tha

Har Waqt Har Pehar Tere Liye DuayeN Maangta Hai "Khwaish"
Tere Siwa Main Kisi Aur Ka Bhi Hona Nahi Chaahta Tha....


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«Reply #6 on: June 18, 2012, 04:27:25 PM »

Bahut Khoob Kasak jee
Sach me bahut accha likha hai..kuch naya padhne ko dil taras gaya tha..likhtee rahe..
Tujhe gawankar udaas kyo hun. Applause


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«Reply #7 on: June 18, 2012, 04:31:07 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on June 18, 2012, 04:19:43 PM

Awesome.....Bahut Bahut Khooob..

Shukar Anuji Ki Kalam Chali To Varna
Hum To Soch rahe The Ke Anuji
Ab Sirf Padhne Hi Aayenge..
Thankyou Sooooooooooooo Much Ji Kuch likhne Ke Liye..
Chaliye Kuch Hum Bhi Haal-e-dil Likh lete Hai..

Main Kabhi Tujhe Khona Nahi Chaahta Tha..!!
Woh Baat Aur Hai Tu Mera Hona Nahi Chaahta Tha

Maine Kabhi Nahi Chaaha Ke Teri AankheiN Nam Ho
Main Apni Bhi PalkoN Ko Bhi Bhigona Nahi Chaahta Tha

Humesha Tere Hi Haq MeiN Faisle Ho Yehi Aarzoo Hai
Toote Dil Ke TukdoN Ko Sanjona Nahi Chaahta Tha

Tera Mujhpar Har Ilzam,Mere Sar AankhoN Ke Sadke
Khokar Tujhe Main Umar Bhar Nahi Rona Nahi chaahta Tha

Har Waqt Har Pehar Tere Liye DuayeN Maangta Hai "Khwaish"
Tere Siwa Main Kisi Aur Ka Bhi Hona Nahi Chaahta Tha....

Sirf kasak jee ki tareef se kaam nahi banega khwaish jee..
Sach me aapne jo rang bhare hai uska javaab nahi..
Last ka sher..Bhai VAAAAAAAAAAH...Sher of the day.
Laaajavaab...
Likhte rahiye.


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Re: <>*Udaas Kyun Hun*<>

«Reply #8 on: June 18, 2012, 05:44:52 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on June 18, 2012, 04:19:43 PM

Awesome.....Bahut Bahut Khooob..

Shukar Anuji Ki Kalam Chali To Varna
Hum To Soch rahe The Ke Anuji
Ab Sirf Padhne Hi Aayenge..
Thankyou Sooooooooooooo Much Ji Kuch likhne Ke Liye..
Chaliye Kuch Hum Bhi Haal-e-dil Likh lete Hai..

Main Kabhi Tujhe Khona Nahi Chaahta Tha..!!
Woh Baat Aur Hai Tu Mera Hona Nahi Chaahta Tha

Maine Kabhi Nahi Chaaha Ke Teri AankheiN Nam Ho
Main Apni Bhi PalkoN Ko Bhi Bhigona Nahi Chaahta Tha

Humesha Tere Hi Haq MeiN Faisle Ho Yehi Aarzoo Hai
Toote Dil Ke TukdoN Ko Sanjona Nahi Chaahta Tha

Tera Mujhpar Har Ilzam,Mere Sar AankhoN Ke Sadke
Khokar Tujhe Main Umar Bhar Nahi Rona Nahi chaahta Tha

Har Waqt Har Pehar Tere Liye DuayeN Maangta Hai "Khwaish"
Tere Siwa Main Kisi Aur Ka Bhi Hona Nahi Chaahta Tha....

itne din baad likhe ka ye gift milega socha bhi nahin tha khwaish ji..... itna khubsurat likha hai aapne ke aankhein num ho aai padhte hue.... wo har pal ki yaad bas simat gai dil me...... thnxxxxxxxxxxx alot for this lovely lovely post..ise main hamesha sambhalkar rakhungi apne pas......


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Re: <>*Udaas Kyun Hun*<>

«Reply #9 on: June 18, 2012, 05:45:57 PM »

Quote from: mkv on June 18, 2012, 04:27:25 PM

Bahut Khoob Kasak jee
Sach me bahut accha likha hai..kuch naya padhne ko dil taras gaya tha..likhtee rahe..
Tujhe gawankar udaas kyo hun. Applause

MKV ji bht bht shukriya aapka jo aapne meri ye itne waqt baad likhi koshish ko saraha aur asand kiya.....


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«Reply #10 on: June 18, 2012, 05:52:57 PM »

Kasak Jee Aadaab!

WaaH jee aakhir aapne mehfil meiN raNg bhar hi diyaa...
Bahut khoob jee bahut khoob... bade hi khoobsurat aur
kafi sachche ahsaasoN ko lafz diye haiN aapne...

Is khoobsurat aur dilkash kalaam par humari dheroN daad
O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Aur Khawahish Jee aapke bhi kia kahne waaH jee bahut khoob
bada achcha reply kiya hai aapne ...
Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

khuda Hafez...


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Re: <>*Udaas Kyun Hun*<>

«Reply #11 on: June 18, 2012, 06:00:30 PM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on June 18, 2012, 05:52:57 PM

yoooohoooooo aapka reply aagaya ... master ji...... kuch fark pada ya wahi ghisi piti likhawat rahi meri... iss bare me to aap kuch bole hi nahin.... bas yunhi jhut mut ki tareef kar gaye aap to.....


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«Reply #12 on: June 18, 2012, 06:04:19 PM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on June 18, 2012, 06:15:07 AM

<>*Udaas Kyun Hun*<>

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Re: <>*Udaas Kyun Hun*<>

«Reply #13 on: June 18, 2012, 06:07:51 PM »

bahut bahut khoob Kasak ji.. at last aapki ek post dekhne ko mili main page pe... bahut bahut achcha laga mujhe.. bahut khoob likha hai aapne... kuch khaas ban nahi paayaa mujhse par reply diye bina raha nahi gaya ... !!!

bhoolaa ke mujhe tum mujhpe geet kyun sunaate ho,
todke rishta mujhse ab ye apnapan kyun jataate ho,
chaahaa tha tumse sabse badh ke ye maloom tha tumhe,
tod ke mera dil ab tum ye aansoo kyun bahaate ho,

ye kaisi uljhan hai tumhaari ki unjhan me bhi main hoon,
bhulaanaa hi hai mujhe to tumhaari geeton me kyun rahun,
bhulaa do mujhe, meri baton ko, meri har ek yaad ko tum,
toda hai jisne mera dil main use ab apna bhalaa kaise kahun,

mujhse ishq nahi hai tum har kisi se ye jhoot bataate ho,
kar ke bewafaai mujhse tum mujhe hi bewafaa bulaate ho,
raho kuch pal tanha to pata chale tanhaayi kya hoti hai,
kuch pal hi huye hain mujhse judaa ho ke aur khud ko tanha bataate ho....

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