~~~Ulfat ki nazaakat dekho...~~~

by vitasta on February 28, 2010, 05:32:49 AM
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aaj baazaar mein kaise bikti hai mohabbat dekho
dekho aalam aur phir meri ulfat ki nazakat dekho
mujh sa aashiq tum dhoondh sako to dhoondh lena
dua hai uski baaton mein mujh si sharaarat dekho
chaahne waale tumhaare husn ke to bahut milenge
rooh mein basaane mein ho na use koi aafat dekho
meri panah mein tumhe na mil saka sukoon kabhi
uske baazu mein ho tumko thaamne ki taakat dekho
taraana-e-'Noor' to har roz hi sunayi dega duniya ko
ibaadat-e-'Viti' ka yahan hoga har koi kaayal dekho...
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«Reply #1 on: February 28, 2010, 05:39:10 AM »
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Viti Jii..... Subse Pahale to Aapko Itne dino Baad Dekh Kar Bahut Accha Laga... Usual Smile

Aur Humesha ki Tarah Behad Khubsoorat Alfaazon se Saji Rachna Pesh Ki hai aapne.. Dard aur Tadap Ko Lafzon Me Behad Khubsoorati se Piroya hai aapne.. Daad Kubool karen..  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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«Reply #2 on: February 28, 2010, 05:44:37 AM »
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Wah wah Vitasta ji bahut sunder ghazal likhi hai aapne. Umdah alfaaz ka istemaal karke behtreen ghazal murattab ki hai. Nice creation.
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«Reply #3 on: February 28, 2010, 09:35:16 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Vitastaji... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Acha Likha hai Aapne
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«Reply #4 on: February 28, 2010, 02:01:47 PM »
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Bohot khoob Viti...It's good to see you again....
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«Reply #5 on: February 28, 2010, 02:10:29 PM »
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Waah Waah Kya baat hai VITI aate hi jaadu bikher diya apni ak Umda Ghazal se.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob ! Applause Applause  Applause

Keep writing ..

Kahan thi itne dino se Huh?
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