Un Kadmon Ke Nishaan...

by daljeet_faqeer on September 19, 2008, 03:58:05 PM

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Un kadmon ke nishaan jaane kahan kho gaye,
Jis dagar pe hum chale the,faasle darmiyaan ho gaye.

Dekhkar halaat aur zakhm hamare dil ke,
Apnon ki bheed mein ruswa,gair meherbaan ho gaye.

Koi to jaakar unko bataye dard judaai ka,
Maikade mein jo baithe hum,log kadardaan ho gaye.

Mana ke ye ehsaas kuchh ajeeb hai lekin,
Zakhm jab ban gaye nasoor,dard zubaan ho gaye.

"Faqeer" ne kiye kai shikwe gile us khuda se,
Chhodkar saath mera us bewafa ke,kyon nigehbaan ho gaye.

Daljeet"faqeer"


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Re: Un Kadmon Ke Nishaan...

«Reply #1 on: September 19, 2008, 04:05:36 PM »

daljeet_faqeer sahab b ahoot hi khoob likha hai aapne...kya kahun ab shabd nahi mere paas..........
hann ek sawal jaroor hai ki.....
dekhkar halaat aur zakhm hamaare dil ke
apnon ki bheed mein ruswa, gair meherbaan ho gaye...
ye kuch samajh nahi aaya, gar samjha den to mehar baani hogi
but aapne bahoot khoob likha hai Applause


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Re: Un Kadmon Ke Nishaan...

«Reply #2 on: January 16, 2011, 01:04:07 PM »

behad umda Faqeer sahb.
khaskar wo sher Jiske baare Beqaraar ji ne likha Behad behad aur behad hai sahab.
poora kalaam jandaar hai.
behtareen peshkash hai ji.
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thanx
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