Us kaa kaheen patah naheen, jis kaa thaa intizaar!

by abdbundeli on February 18, 2009, 06:06:14 PM
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Us kaa kaheen patah naheen, jis kaa thaa intizaar!
Kaisey kateygee raat? Ho rahaa hoon beyqaraar!
Us dour-e-nisf shab kaa nazaarah hi tha kuchh aur;
Jab thaa uyoon-e-zeyhn key pahloo mein meyraa yaar!!

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«Reply #1 on: February 21, 2009, 02:35:30 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on February 21, 2009, 12:14:18 PM

waah Abd ji...bahot acha likha hai aapne... Applause
Thanks @kaash ji!
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«Reply #2 on: February 21, 2009, 02:37:34 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 18, 2009, 06:06:14 PM
Us kaa kaheen patah naheen, jis kaa thaa intizaar!
Kaisey kateygee raat? Ho rahaa hoon beyqaraar!
Us dour-e-nisf shab kaa nazaarah hi tha kuchh aur;
Jab thaa uyoon-e-zeyhn key pahloo mein meyraa yaar!!

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Good lines ABD ji... (Magar kiska tha intezar? )
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«Reply #3 on: February 21, 2009, 02:39:45 PM »
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Nice lines Abd Ji
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«Reply #4 on: February 21, 2009, 02:41:48 PM »
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Bahoot hi khoob Abd ji......... Applause
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«Reply #5 on: February 21, 2009, 03:29:30 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on February 21, 2009, 02:37:34 PM
Good lines ABD ji... (Magar kiska tha intezar? )
Thanks Roja Ji!
Shaayad kisee 'mrudu-wyaktitwa' kaa? Khud bhi naheen aayaa, na koyee'sandesh' hee bheyjaa!
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«Reply #6 on: February 21, 2009, 03:38:48 PM »
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Thanks Roja Ji!
Shaayad kisee 'mrudu-wyaktitwa' kaa? Khud bhi naheen aayaa, na koyee'sandesh' hee bheyjaa!
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'Sandesh' Aayega aayega ... sabr kijiyega ji  Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: February 21, 2009, 03:39:23 PM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on February 21, 2009, 02:39:45 PM
Nice lines Abd Ji
Thanks Rajesh Harish ji!
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«Reply #8 on: February 21, 2009, 03:46:34 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on February 21, 2009, 03:38:48 PM
'Sandesh' Aayega aayega ... sabr kijiyega ji  Usual Smile

Thanks a lot for your very kind wishes!

Ummeed pai duniyaa qaayam hai;
Is paar naheen, us paar sahee!
Yeh zeyhn-o-jigar kaa rishtah hai:
Bas dil-dil mein ho pyaar sahee!!
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«Reply #9 on: February 21, 2009, 03:49:14 PM »
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Bahoot hi khoob Abd ji......... Applause
Thanks a lot salma786 ji!
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«Reply #10 on: February 21, 2009, 03:53:26 PM »
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Thanks a lot for your very kind wishes!

Ummeed pai duniyaa qaayam hai;
Is paar naheen, us paar sahee!
Yeh zeyhn-o-jigar kaa rishtah hai:
Bas dil-dil mein ho pyaar sahee!!
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Dua Yahi Hai Ke
Tum jaha bi rahe hamesha khush rahe
Teri har aahat mein Rub ka Aashirwaad rahe
Tum fikar na karna kisike ibadat ki
Kyuki mere dil ki har dhadakti saansein,
Dua mein tera hi naam kahe...
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«Reply #11 on: February 21, 2009, 04:09:43 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on February 21, 2009, 03:53:26 PM
Dua Yahi Hai Ke
Tum jaha bi rahe hamesha khush rahe
Teri har aahat mein Rub ka Aashirwaad rahe
Tum fikar na karna kisike ibadat ki
Kyuki mere dil ki har dhadakti saansein,
Dua mein tera hi naam kahe...

Thanks Roja ji! How sweet?

Duaayen aapki yuun hain, to khush rahnaa bhi pakkaa hai!
Duaayen saaf dil waaloun ki, woh suntaa hai, suntey hain!
Wahaan par kamee koyee bhi naheen hai, jaantey hain sab;
Unhain woh ataa kartaa hai, ki, jis ko dost chuntay hain!!

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«Reply #12 on: February 21, 2009, 04:13:08 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 18, 2009, 06:06:14 PM
Us kaa kaheen patah naheen, jis kaa thaa intizaar!
Kaisey kateygee raat? Ho rahaa hoon beyqaraar!
Us dour-e-nisf shab kaa nazaarah hi tha kuchh aur;
Jab thaa uyoon-e-zeyhn key pahloo mein meyraa yaar!!

                                     - abd bundeli



Bohat khoob Abd ji... Applause Applause

Jiska tha intezaar woh kar gaye badnaam
Aab aur kya chaaon mein jab kiye humne zindagi uskey naam
Mat poocho humen ke kis kader hum hue badnaam
Raat aur din hum sirf karte rahe aapne khushiyan unke naam
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«Reply #13 on: February 21, 2009, 05:15:39 PM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on February 21, 2009, 04:13:08 PM
Bohat khoob Abd ji... Applause Applause

Jiska tha intezaar woh kar gaye badnaam
Aab aur kya chaaon mein jab kiye humne zindagi uskey naam
Mat poocho humen ke kis kader hum hue badnaam
Raat aur din hum sirf karte rahe aapne khushiyan unke naam

Bahut hi khoobsoorat tasawwur kaa izhaar kiyaa hai aapney honeyrose ji! Applause Clapping Smiley

Jo mazah, dey key mileygaa, wahee leyney mein naheen!
Jo mazah bahr-e-zeyhn mein hai, safeeney mein naheen!
Jo mazah, bin piye, aataa hai us key pahloo mein;
Wo mazah, sharwat-e-angoor key peeney mein naheen!!

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