Us kaa kaheen patah naheen, jis kaa thaa intizaar!

by abdbundeli on February 18, 2009, 06:06:14 PM
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«Reply #30 on: February 24, 2009, 12:47:14 PM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on February 24, 2009, 12:20:41 PM

Applause ApplauseWonderfull lines Abd ji... 


Iss aag mein jalne mein humen dar nahi lagti
Iss barf mein phigalane mein humen khushi nahi lagti
Chaahe woh hume samjhe ya na samjhe iss duniya mein
Kahin door na ho jaye aapse humen khushi nahi lagti

*HR*
honeyrose ji! Thanks a lot!

Woh khush rahain, to, ham ko khushee hai, sukoon hai!
Kaantaa bhi lagaa un ko, to, ham qasb khaayengey!!
Woh ham ko bulaayen, na bulaayen, ki, bhool jaayen;
Par ham ko, woh zaroor roz yaad aayengey!!

                     - abd bundeli
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«Reply #31 on: February 24, 2009, 12:53:57 PM »
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honeyrose ji! Thanks a lot!

Woh khush rahain, to, ham ko khushee hai, sukoon hai!
Kaantaa bhi lagaa un ko, to, ham qasb khaayengey!!
Woh ham ko bulaayen, na bulaayen, ki, bhool jaayen;
Par ham ko, woh zaroor roz yaad aayengey!!

                     - abd bundeli



Shukriya Abd ji bohat sundar likha aapne... Clapping Smiley


Aab koi raasta nahi iss aag mein kudh jal jaaon mein
Aapse door rahkar aur kya sukoon paaon mein
Aankhen band karte hai dekhun chaand se chehra aapka
Aapse milkar aur zindagi se kya umeed kar paaon mein

*HR*
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«Reply #32 on: February 24, 2009, 01:38:03 PM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on February 24, 2009, 12:53:57 PM
Shukriya Abd ji bohat sundar likha aapne... Clapping Smiley


Aab koi raasta nahi iss aag mein kudh jal jaaon mein
Aapse door rahkar aur kya sukoon paaon mein
Aankhen band karte hai dekhun chaand se chehra aapka
Aapse milkar aur zindagi se kya umeed kar paaon mein

*HR*

honeyrose ji! Thanks you a lot again!

Ummeed pai qaayam hai yeh duniyaa, yeh kaayinaat!
Ham hain yahaan, to, dooriyaan bhi hain naheen bahut!
Duniya hai gol, raastey miltey hain yahaan sab;
Yuun jaaniye, majbooriyaan bhi hain naheen bahut!!

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«Reply #33 on: February 24, 2009, 01:44:11 PM »
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Nice One And Bhaiya, And Jaya Didi,.
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«Reply #34 on: February 24, 2009, 02:00:57 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 24, 2009, 01:44:11 PM
Nice One And Bhaiya, And Jaya Didi,.
Thanks bhai Jaanasheen ji!
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«Reply #35 on: February 26, 2009, 07:46:34 AM »
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honeyrose ji! Thanks you a lot again!

Ummeed pai qaayam hai yeh duniyaa, yeh kaayinaat!
Ham hain yahaan, to, dooriyaan bhi hain naheen bahut!
Duniya hai gol, raastey miltey hain yahaan sab;
Yuun jaaniye, majbooriyaan bhi hain naheen bahut!!

                                   - abd bundeli


Bohat khoob Abd ji ,, Clapping Smiley

Shukriya Azeem bhai...

Manzil bhool gaye hai aab umeed bhi tut gaye
Unke ishq mein aankhen sukee padh gaye
Saath chalne ka joh waada kiya tha humne
Woh khwabh aab iss dil mein feekee padh gaye
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«Reply #36 on: February 26, 2009, 08:35:26 AM »
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Bohat khoob Abd ji ,, Clapping Smiley
Shukriya Azeem bhai...

Manzil bhool gaye hai aab umeed bhi tut gaye
Unke ishq mein aankhen sukee padh gaye
Saath chalne ka joh waada kiya tha humne
Woh khwabh aab iss dil mein feekee padh gaye


Shukriyah honeyrose ji!

Apney khwaaboun ko fir jagaaiye, khwaaboun sey naye!
Zindagee hai wo safar, hai jahaan thhahraawa naheen!
Eik din, yuun to, muqammil hai, fanaa aayegee;
Parhaawa hai wo jahaan sey, 'abd',  bachaawa naheen!!

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«Reply #37 on: February 26, 2009, 09:32:49 AM »
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Shukriyah honeyrose ji!

Apney khwaaboun ko fir jagaaiye, khwaaboun sey naye!
Zindagee hai wo safar, hai jahaan thhahraawa naheen!
Eik din, yuun to, muqammil hai, fanaa aayegee;
Parhaawa hai wo jahaan sey, 'abd',  bachaawa naheen!!

                                     - abd bundeli


Bohat khoob bohat sunder Abd ji... Clapping Smiley

Kyun koi meri saath pareshaan rahe
Meri duniya viraan hai viraan rahegi
Iss safar mein tumare saath khushiyaan rahe
Meri duniya mein uljaane hai uljaan rahegi
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«Reply #38 on: February 26, 2009, 11:46:53 AM »
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Bohat khoob bohat sunder Abd ji... Clapping Smiley

Kyun koi meri saath pareshaan rahe
Meri duniya viraan hai viraan rahegi
Iss safar mein tumare saath khushiyaan rahe
Meri duniya mein uljaane hai uljaan rahegi
honeyrose ji, bahut-bahut shukriyah!

Woh pareysaan kabhi bhi nahin hota dil sey!
Koyi yuun hi naheen jaataa hai bharee mahfil sey?
Galtfahmee mein uub had sey guzar jaatee hai;
Toot jaataa hai bashar, beyhisaab 'kilkil' sey!

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«Reply #39 on: February 26, 2009, 01:08:11 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 26, 2009, 11:46:53 AM
honeyrose ji, bahut-bahut shukriyah!

Woh pareysaan kabhi bhi nahin hota dil sey!
Koyi yuun hi naheen jaataa hai bharee mahfil sey?
Galtfahmee mein uub had sey guzar jaatee hai;
Toot jaataa hai bashar, beyhisaab 'kilkil' sey!

                         - abd bundeli

                       





Bohat khoob Abd ji... Clapping Smiley

Aaj to be-sabab dil kyun udaas hai
Ishq ki raahon mein bikar gaye dil ke tukde
Phir bhi unko kuch ehsaas na hua
Hamesha ke liye woh rishta humse tohd chuke

*HR*
 
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«Reply #40 on: February 26, 2009, 01:25:34 PM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on February 26, 2009, 01:08:11 PM
Bohat khoob Abd ji... Clapping Smiley
Aaj to be-sabab dil kyun udaas hai
Ishq ki raahon mein bikar gaye dil ke tukde
Phir bhi unko kuch ehsaas na hua
Hamesha ke liye woh rishta humse tohd chuke
*HR*
Shukriyah honeyrose ji!

Khushk aahoun sey bach kar kahaan jaayengey?
Maaniye, eik din lout kar aayengey!
Hijra key din museebat key darmyaan bhee;
Raftah-raftah guzartey , guzar jaayengey!!
             
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«Reply #41 on: July 29, 2009, 12:43:33 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 18, 2009, 06:06:14 PM

Us kaa kaheen patah naheen, jis kaa thaa intizaar!
Kaisey kateygee raat? Ho rahaa hoon beyqaraar!
Us dour-e-nisf shab kaa nazaarah hi tha kuchh aur;
Jab thaa uyoon-e-zeyhn key pahloo mein meyraa yaar!!

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HI
HEY DUDE REALLY SOUNDS GREAT BUT WILL BE BEAUTY IF I UNDERSTAND THE MENAING OF LAST TWO LINES


 
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«Reply #42 on: July 29, 2009, 01:55:27 PM »
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Quote from: jochahohojayein on July 29, 2009, 12:43:33 PM
HI
HEY DUDE REALLY SOUNDS GREAT BUT WILL BE BEAUTY IF I UNDERSTAND THE MENAING OF LAST TWO LINES 

Hello Mr jochahohojayein!

Un do lainoun kaa matlab yuun hai:
"The scenic beauty of that period, of that mid-night, was exceptionally different, when my beloved was present in close vicinity of the eyes of my mind!"
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«Reply #43 on: April 02, 2013, 02:30:50 AM »
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Waaah Waah.
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«Reply #44 on: April 02, 2013, 01:53:05 PM »
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Waaah Waah.

Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
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