us paak jahaan mein farishte ho gaye dono.. charan..

by lovely_charan on January 21, 2013, 10:52:32 AM
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chali main kehne phir se ek kahaani dekho..
mere dil mein phir behti huyi rawaani dekho..
ek chidhiya ke dono pankh the faile huye..
par aasmaan mein barasta hua pani dekho..

kitni mushkil se dil se milne ka samaa aaya tha..
hayaat kaafir aur dil mushtaaq nazar aaya tha..
aise mein habibi saath de na paaya unka..
badi shiddat se pankh chidiya ne failaaya tha..

aab-o-daana kisi dariya kinaare hua karta tha..
har shaqs waha unka deewana hua karta tha..
phir aandhi chali koi, aur ek bada toofaan aaya..
aabnoosi se pehle aab-o-taab hua karta tha..

gharonda toota unka, bichhad gaye dono..
aab-o-rooh ke bashinde dekho ho gaye dono..
ba-hayaa qudrat ne bhi izzat nawazi unki..
us paak jahaan mein farishte ho gaye dono..
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«Reply #1 on: January 21, 2013, 11:40:30 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: January 21, 2013, 11:52:58 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya apka aqsh ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: January 21, 2013, 02:23:48 PM »
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bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob Lovely ji....!!!
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«Reply #4 on: January 21, 2013, 02:54:38 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: January 21, 2013, 03:50:40 PM »
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very nice jeet....
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bahut bahut shukriya aap sabhi ka Usual Smile hriday ji,.. saini sir.. and ritesh bhaiya.. thanks a lot Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: January 25, 2013, 03:18:55 AM »
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bahut  hi   khoobsurat  panktiyan  likhi  hain   apne .... Dheron  daad ......
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«Reply #8 on: January 25, 2013, 03:30:12 AM »
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Quote from: lovely_charan on January 21, 2013, 10:52:32 AM
chali main kehne phir se ek kahaani dekho..
mere dil mein phir behti huyi rawaani dekho..
ek chidhiya ke dono pankh the faile huye..
par aasmaan mein barasta hua pani dekho..

kitni mushkil se dil se milne ka samaa aaya tha..
hayaat kaafir aur dil mushtaaq nazar aaya tha..
aise mein habibi saath de na paaya unka..
badi shiddat se pankh chidiya ne failaaya tha..

aab-o-daana kisi dariya kinaare hua karta tha..
har shaqs waha unka deewana hua karta tha..
phir aandhi chali koi, aur ek bada toofaan aaya..
aabnoosi se pehle aab-o-taab hua karta tha..

gharonda toota unka, bichhad gaye dono..
aab-o-rooh ke bashinde dekho ho gaye dono..
ba-hayaa qudrat ne bhi izzat nawazi unki..
us paak jahaan mein farishte ho gaye dono..

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WAH WAHHH bahut hi badiya likha hai aapne lovely
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«Reply #9 on: January 25, 2013, 04:39:00 AM »
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Quote from: Tuhina on January 25, 2013, 03:18:55 AM
bahut  hi   khoobsurat  panktiyan  likhi  hain   apne .... Dheron  daad ......
thanks tuhina ji
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«Reply #10 on: January 25, 2013, 04:39:35 AM »
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Quote from: suman59 on January 25, 2013, 03:30:12 AM
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WAH WAHHH bahut hi badiya likha hai aapne lovely
thanks a lot suman ji Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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