usay fursat nahi rahi

by SUMBUL QAISER on February 14, 2010, 03:13:48 PM
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Mera haal pochne ki usay fursat nahi rahi.
shaid usay meri zarorat nahi rahi

Umeed ki akhri shama bhi bujh gai,
hum nay maan liya usay hum say mohabat nahi rahi.

Shaid mujh say baat karnay ka bahana wo mit gaya,
ya kuch bhool janay ki usay aadat nahi rahi.

Meri udasi mei bhi mujh ko hasa dayna,
Lagta hai uski waisi shrarat nahi rahi.

Aankhon mei meri dekh k wo aansoo khush hai,
shaid usay meray dukh say ab idawat nahi rahi.
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«Reply #1 on: February 14, 2010, 04:15:32 PM »
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Amazing Sumbul ji, this is a very beautiful poetry. Badi nafaasat aur poetic maturity ke saath darde-yaaso-malaal ke rang mein likhi hui ye ghazalnuma poem waqai bahut achhi lagi.Afreen and Bravo.
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«Reply #2 on: February 14, 2010, 05:12:13 PM »
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Здраствуйте, не знаю куда писать напишу сюда. Я подписался на рсс вашего сайта, а текст отображается иероглифами помогите пожалуйста, можно на e-mail
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«Reply #3 on: February 14, 2010, 05:14:55 PM »
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bahut khoob sumbul ji...
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«Reply #4 on: February 14, 2010, 06:10:30 PM »
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Bahut khoob ustaad...
lagta hai kafi gahri chot khayi..hai
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«Reply #5 on: February 14, 2010, 07:07:41 PM »
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Mera haal pochne ki usay fursat nahi rahi.
shaid usay meri zarorat nahi rahi

Umeed ki akhri shama bhi bujh gai,
hum nay maan liya usay hum say mohabat nahi rahi.

Shaid mujh say baat karnay ka bahana wo mit gaya,
ya kuch bhool janay ki usay aadat nahi rahi.

Meri udasi mei bhi mujh ko hasa dayna,
Lagta hai uski waisi shrarat nahi rahi.

Aankhon mei meri dekh k wo aansoo khush hai,
shaid usay meray dukh say ab idawat nahi rahi.

Very nice awsome wonderfullllllllll..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: February 15, 2010, 11:49:14 AM »
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SUMBUL QAISER
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«Reply #7 on: February 15, 2010, 04:42:43 PM »
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thanks alot
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«Reply #8 on: August 24, 2012, 04:16:54 PM »
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Mera haal pochne ki usay fursat nahi rahi.
shaid usay meri zarorat nahi rahi

Umeed ki akhri shama bhi bujh gai,
hum nay maan liya usay hum say mohabat nahi rahi.

Shaid mujh say baat karnay ka bahana wo mit gaya,
ya kuch bhool janay ki usay aadat nahi rahi.

Meri udasi mei bhi mujh ko hasa dayna,
Lagta hai uski waisi shrarat nahi rahi.

Aankhon mei meri dekh k wo aansoo khush hai,
shaid usay meray dukh say ab idawat nahi rahi.


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