Use dard na ata kar...

by brokenbyluv on October 12, 2010, 10:53:09 AM
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Yu na mujhe apni panaho se juda karo,
ab tou hamein milane ka jatan ae khuda karo,

vo ja raha hai ruthkar mujhse door,
merri halat pe kuch tou rehem ada karo,

tod liya hai har nata usne mujhse,
zindgi ki raho pe use yu na tanha karo,

vo kisi se kuch keh nhi sakta,
use har dard ko tum yu na ata karo,

maine har dum chahi hai jiski khushi..
uski nigaho se ab tou tum ansuo ko juda karo.........
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«Reply #1 on: October 12, 2010, 11:29:28 AM »
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Yu na mujhe apni panaho se juda karo,
ab tou hamein milane ka jatan ae khuda karo,

vo ja raha hai ruthkar mujhse door,
merri halat pe kuch tou rehem ada karo,

tod liya hai har nata usne mujhse,
zindgi ki raho pe use yu na tanha karo,

vo kisi se kuch keh nhi sakta,
use har dard ko tum yu na ata karo,

maine har dum chahi hai jiski khushi..
uski nigaho se ab tou tum ansuo ko juda karo.........

Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob Geetji..

Inna Vadhiyan Likheya Hai ke Ki kavan!!!!

"Tod Liya Har Naata Usne Mujhse
Zindagi Ki raahon pe usse yuh na tanha karo"

yeh Lines Mujhe Zyaada Pasand Aayi hai Geetji, Inn Do Line mein Khud Ki Tanhai se zyaada Jisse Hum Chaahte hai uski Tanhaai ki fikr zyaada hai,yeh jazbaat nazar aaye..bahuttttttttttt Khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: October 12, 2010, 11:45:21 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya khwaish ji...
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«Reply #3 on: October 12, 2010, 12:49:14 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji.. judaai k dard ko bahut khoobsurti se shabdon me utaara hai aapne...


wo tumse juda hoke juda na reh paayega,
kuch duur chalke wo waapas laut aayega,

na karo khud ko aansuon se tum geela,
wo tumhaara hai tumse dur na jaa paayega,

wo rutha nahi hai tumse bas pareshaan hai,
waqt ke rehte hi wo sambhal jaayega,

khuda pe aetbaar karo tum mere dost,
khuda ka karam tumhe nazar aa jaayega,

na hongi kabhi aankhen nam na koi dard hoga,
tumhaara mehboob bas kuch pal me muskuraayega,

wo tumhe chaahta hai, tumhe chaahta jaayega,
kuch duur chalke tumhare paas laut aayega....
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«Reply #4 on: October 12, 2010, 12:52:08 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya kapil ji..apki duaye allah kare jald hi asar laaye,mujhe bhi uska intezar hai.........
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«Reply #5 on: October 12, 2010, 12:53:23 PM »
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Bilkul karengi Geet ji.. fikar not...!!!

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«Reply #6 on: October 12, 2010, 12:53:50 PM »
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Bahut shukriya ji......
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«Reply #7 on: October 12, 2010, 01:04:50 PM »
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har lafz jo tum kehti ho lagta hai mujhe mera ye
jaane kya baat hai tere kalam me lagta nahin tera ye
har dard jo tum sehti ho main bhi to wahi sehti hun
kyun fir bhi jo tum kehti ho apni gazlon me
wo mere dil me hokar bhi ab main keh sakti nahin
ye dard tod deta hai mujhe har bar jab padhti hun tujhe
isily shayad kai bar main teri kai gazal padhti nahin........

ab isse zyada kya kahun tumhari poems k liye main geet.....u r mind blowing....
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«Reply #8 on: October 13, 2010, 04:30:29 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 12, 2010, 01:04:50 PM
har lafz jo tum kehti ho lagta hai mujhe mera ye
jaane kya baat hai tere kalam me lagta nahin tera ye
har dard jo tum sehti ho main bhi to wahi sehti hun
kyun fir bhi jo tum kehti ho apni gazlon me
wo mere dil me hokar bhi ab main keh sakti nahin
ye dard tod deta hai mujhe har bar jab padhti hun tujhe
isily shayad kai bar main teri kai gazal padhti nahin........

ab isse zyada kya kahun tumhari poems k liye main geet.....u r mind blowing....

Bahut bahut shukriya kasak ji apki lines k liye..mujhe behad khushi hoti hai ki main apke dard ko alfazo k zariye apke dil tak pahucha paati hu..chaliye dono dua karte hai mhbt ka ye dard jo hamare dilo mein hai vo jald hi khushi mein tabdil ho jaye aur hum bhi thoda sukoon paa sake..........
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«Reply #9 on: October 23, 2010, 12:01:03 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI DEAR  Applause Applause Applause

KISI K YAAD DILADI  Crying
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«Reply #10 on: October 23, 2010, 12:46:37 PM »
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Quote from: rukhsaar on October 23, 2010, 12:01:03 PM
BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI DEAR  Applause Applause Applause

KISI K YAAD DILADI  Crying


Thnx alot rukhsar..kiski yad aa gyi ye tou bata do ??
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«Reply #11 on: October 23, 2010, 01:01:26 PM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Geetji..

Lajawaab!!! Bahut Hi khoobsurat Jazbat!!!

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«Reply #12 on: October 23, 2010, 01:02:23 PM »
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Shurkiya khwaish ji.....
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«Reply #13 on: October 23, 2010, 02:45:56 PM »
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great gazhal hai dost...
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«Reply #14 on: October 24, 2010, 10:13:00 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya sidiqqui ji...
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