uske yaad mein

by anitha on October 15, 2005, 07:46:36 AM
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anitha
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woh mere zindagi mein aaya aur aise chaaya
bangaya mere zindagi bar ka saaya
pataa na chaltha tha ki kab din huee aur raat
usse hamesha dekhte-rehne ki karthi baat
uske baaton ko sunthi aur sunthe rehne ki dua karthi
par meri aisi naseeb kahan
ki mein usse hamesha keliye paati
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Ghayal
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«Reply #1 on: October 17, 2005, 11:58:38 AM »
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Very Nice Anita Ji....
Bahut Khoob...
TFS.....
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dinbandhu
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«Reply #2 on: October 21, 2005, 05:46:29 AM »
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dil diya dard liya wo bhi bedard ho gai
lekar naam wafa ka sanam bewafa ho gai
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anitha
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«Reply #3 on: October 21, 2005, 01:55:50 PM »
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thanks a lot gayal ji aur dinbandhu ji
woh its really good dinbandhu ...keep it up...and hearty welcome to yoindia

bedard hoke bhi woh jaana na sanam
ki uske liye ro-rahein hai hum
itni bhi kya kafa humse
dekh bhi mooh-modliye humse
hum to ab-bhi unko paane ki dua karte hain
lekin woh hai humse peecha-chudaane ki koshish karte hain
humain hai yakeen ek din paaoongi unko
woh chahe bhi na chod-paayenge humko
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #4 on: October 21, 2005, 08:08:12 PM »
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very nice Anitha.........dinbandhu.........
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babuofusa
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«Reply #5 on: October 22, 2005, 04:33:26 AM »
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wow u guys have good command on shayari. i'll suggest one thing, try to write the correct spelling.
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Ghayal
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«Reply #6 on: October 29, 2005, 09:18:48 AM »
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Wah Very Dood Friend....

Jab Husn aur Shabdo ka Milan Hota hai..
Samjho Qayamat Ka woh Din Hota hai
Yaqeen Nahi Aata to Pooch Le Us Khuda Se...
Uske Liye Bhi woh Ibaadat Ka Din Hota hai


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dil diya dard liya wo bhi bedard ho gai
lekar naam wafa ka sanam bewafa ho gai
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #7 on: October 29, 2005, 06:07:08 PM »
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very  nice  Ghayal...........
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