Usme Ek Gila Sa Reh Jayega................Touhid

by Mohammad Touhid on August 01, 2011, 01:23:35 PM
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Tu Nahi To Meri Zindagi Me Kya Reh Jayega,
Door Tak Sirf Tanhai Ka SilSila Reh Jayega.,
Yu Bhi Hoga Wo Mujhe Dil Se Bhula De Magar,
Ye Bhi Hoga Ke Khud Usme Ek Gila sa Reh Jayega...

Khushiyon Ke Liye Ye Zindagi Tarash jayega,
Har Ek Pal Uski Haseen Yaado Me Tadap Jayega.,
Yu Bhi Hoga Wo Mujhe Dil se Bhula De Magar,
Ye Bhi Hoga Ke Khud Usme Ek Gila sa Reh Jayega...

Aksar Uske Khayalo Me Mera Aks Chala Aayega,
Use Bhi Mera PYAR Yaad Karne Ko Mazboor Kar Jayega.,
Yu Bhi Hoga Wo Mujhe Dil se Bhula De Magar,
Ye Bhi Hoga Ke Khud Usme Ek Gila sa Reh Jayega...

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«Reply #1 on: August 01, 2011, 07:13:52 PM »
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Touhid Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab kafi achche ahsaas O khayaal kahe haiN
aur khoob lafzoN meiN dhalaa hai aapne.. Usual Smile

Puri kalaam behad khoob rahi aur first stanza
behad khoob raha... Humari daad O mubarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye...
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         

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«Reply #2 on: August 02, 2011, 12:40:39 AM »
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bahot achhe janaab
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Touhid Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab kafi achche ahsaas O khayaal kahe haiN
aur khoob lafzoN meiN dhalaa hai aapne.. Usual Smile

Puri kalaam behad khoob rahi aur first stanza
behad khoob raha... Humari daad O mubarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye...
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile          





Shukriya.. Parwaz Sahab..
Aapne Hamare Kalaam Ko Waqt Diya..
Bahut Bahut Shukriya.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Khuda Hafiz..
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«Reply #4 on: August 02, 2011, 12:48:33 AM »
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Thanx sarfira ji...
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«Reply #5 on: August 02, 2011, 09:21:40 AM »
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Tu Nahi To Meri Zindagi Me Kya Reh Jayega,
Door Tak Sirf Tanhai Ka SilSila Reh Jayega.,
Yu Bhi Hoga Wo Mujhe Dil Se Bhula De Magar,
Ye Bhi Hoga Ke Khud Usme Ek Gila sa Reh Jayega...

Khushiyon Ke Liye Ye Zindagi Tarash jayega,
Har Ek Pal Uski Haseen Yaado Me Tadap Jayega.,
Yu Bhi Hoga Wo Mujhe Dil se Bhula De Magar,
Ye Bhi Hoga Ke Khud Usme Ek Gila sa Reh Jayega...

Aksar Uske Khayalo Me Mera Aks Chala Aayega,
Use Bhi Mera PYAR Yaad Karne Ko Mazboor Kar Jayega.,
Yu Bhi Hoga Wo Mujhe Dil se Bhula De Magar,
Ye Bhi Hoga Ke Khud Usme Ek Gila sa Reh Jayega...



Touhid Saheb!! Jab Bhi Aap Kisi Ka Kalaam Share Karte Ho, Waha "N.m" Zaroor Likhiye..Aapne Iss Ghazal mein Apne Likhe Sher Bhi Add Kiye,Aur ACha Likha Hai Par Jo Aapke Likhe Nahi Waha Zaroor 'N.m" Likhiye..

yeh Ghazal ke Pehle Do Ashaar Iftikar Imam Sidiqui Ji ke likhe Hue Hai
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«Reply #6 on: August 02, 2011, 10:41:07 AM »
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Maafi chahta hu Khwaish ji...
ye mere jehan se utar gaya tha,.
agli bar se dhyan rakhunga..

iske pehle do ashaar beshak mere nahi hai..
par hume ye yaad bhi nahi ki kiske hai..
par aapne hume bataya.. iske liye hum behad shukragujar hai aapke..

ye mujhe bahut pasand hai to bas inhe milakar kuchh likh diya..
aapne pasand kiya iske liye bhi shukriya..
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«Reply #7 on: August 02, 2011, 11:26:00 AM »
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bht bht khoob tauhid ji....
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«Reply #8 on: August 05, 2011, 05:43:01 PM »
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Shukriya manzil-e-ishq ji bht bht shukriya... Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: September 29, 2011, 08:50:10 AM »
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Tu Nahi To Meri Zindagi Me Kya Reh Jayega,
Door Tak Sirf Tanhai Ka SilSila Reh Jayega.,
Yu Bhi Hoga Wo Mujhe Dil Se Bhula De Magar,
Ye Bhi Hoga Ke Khud Usme Ek Gila sa Reh Jayega...

Khushiyon Ke Liye Ye Zindagi Tarash jayega,
Har Ek Pal Uski Haseen Yaado Me Tadap Jayega.,
Yu Bhi Hoga Wo Mujhe Dil se Bhula De Magar,
Ye Bhi Hoga Ke Khud Usme Ek Gila sa Reh Jayega...

Aksar Uske Khayalo Me Mera Aks Chala Aayega,
Use Bhi Mera PYAR Yaad Karne Ko Mazboor Kar Jayega.,
Yu Bhi Hoga Wo Mujhe Dil se Bhula De Magar,
Ye Bhi Hoga Ke Khud Usme Ek Gila sa Reh Jayega...




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