Ussi Modh Par Abhi Tumhara intezaar Hai..

by razmi on September 28, 2004, 12:43:21 PM
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"Kissi modh par agar bichad jayen..to ek baar mudh key dekh lena,
Agar mere ansoon roke na sako to unhe apne daman mein samah lena

Jiss modh par chod jaogey humen wahin paogey,
Iltejaa itni hain tumse ke marney key baad hume tum wahin dafnaoge"
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«Reply #1 on: September 28, 2004, 07:02:52 PM »
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wah!!! bahoot khoob razmi....bahoot khoob likha hai...
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #2 on: October 07, 2004, 08:47:05 PM »
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Very Nice!! razmi ji!

Kahin to tera Dusht-e-ghubaar Aaj bhi Hai!
Kisi Nazar ko tera Intezaar Aaj bhi Hai!
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: October 07, 2004, 09:53:15 PM »
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KAHAN HO KI YAH DIL BAKRAAR AJJ BHI HAI
KISI NAJAR KO TERA INTZAAR AJJ BHI HAI
KAHAN HO KI TUJ PER AITBAAR AJJ BHI HAI!!!!!! (NM)


Bahoot khoob AKS JI......
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #4 on: October 08, 2004, 04:28:41 AM »
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Thanks Pooja ji!
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Tosha
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«Reply #5 on: October 08, 2004, 10:47:55 AM »
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where ever you go
what ever you you do
i'll be right here waiting for you(NM)
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #6 on: October 08, 2004, 07:03:42 PM »
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Bahut Khoob pooja ji! & Tosha ji!

Abhi Se Kahoon To Karein log Sharmsaar mujhe,
Ki Kiske wade pe hai is kadar Intezaar Mujhe!
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razmi
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«Reply #7 on: October 11, 2004, 03:54:46 AM »
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Everyone, Thanks for your responses !!

"Tumse se koi shikawa nahi, koi Gila nahi,
Tum meri ho na saki tab bhi main khafa nahin,
Kyon dil jaanta hai ki tum judaa sahi par bewafa nain"
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #8 on: October 11, 2004, 05:57:43 AM »
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Very Nice razmi JI!
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razmi
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«Reply #9 on: October 11, 2004, 06:23:08 AM »
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Hi All, i wrote a complement poem for this one with some changes to the original stanzas..hope you'll like it...

"Socha na tha yoon zindagi mein tum aaoge,
Aakar mujhe zindagi ka ek naya pehlu dikhaoge
 
Awaaz tumhari sunne ke liye kaan taras jaaten hain,
Yaad mein tumhari kabhi kabhi naina baras jaaten hain
 
tumhari khilkhilati haseen raat ke sannate mein goonjti hai,
tumhari pyari aur bholi si surat aankhon ke samney ghoomti hai
 
kabhi kabhi tumhari baaten yaad kar yeh dil hansta hai,
Aur hanste hanste tumko khoney ke dar se rota hai
 
kissi mod par alag ho jayen to ek baar mudhkar zarror dekhna,
mere bahte ansoon roke na sako to unhe apne daman mein sameth lena
 
Jiss modh par chod jaogey hume wahin paogey,
Jabhi laut aogey apney yaadon ka mahal saja paogey aur wahin kahin humko bhi dafnaa hua paogey"
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #10 on: October 11, 2004, 06:47:36 AM »
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Wow!! Bahut Khoob!!!! Rajmi ji!
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