Vidaai- Dedicated to all women!!

by Sps on August 08, 2014, 01:02:51 PM
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Hi All, i am back after a looong looong time, however believe me, Yoindia has been on my mind every single moment. I missed being here so sooo much, however now I am happy as I am back to this fraternity. I truely feel that I belong here....
Other responsibilities have taken priority so couldn't write much...Hope you all like this poem

विदाई

हो गई विदाई ,
चारों ओऱ शोर है
खुशियाँ फैली सबके मुख पर
भीगी क्युँ मेरी पलकों की कोर है

सारा जग नाचे ऐसे
सावन में जैसे मोर है
रौशनी से हर कोना चमके
मन में फिर क्युँ ,तम इतना घनघोर है    

अनजाने हैं रिश्ते सारे
घेरे मुझे मुस्काते चेहरे
पैरों को फिर भी खींचे
बचपन क्युँ अपनी ओर है

दीदी नहीं बुलाती मुझको
बहना नहीं चिढ़ाती मुझको
भैया मेरे संग ही रहना
तू तो मेरी ओर है

पापा मुझको रोक लो ना
मम्मी मुझको मत छोड़ो न
पल में सौंपी परदेसी को
प्रेम कि जाने कैसी ये डोर है

अब मै  समझी , माँ
कैसे तुम मेरे पास आई
फिर भी मन मेरा है व्याकुल
तुमपे नहीं क्युँ पहले सा मेरा ज़ोर है

जीवनसाथी के साथ चली मै
तुम्हारी मर्ज़ी मान चल मैं
रीत नाम से करता ठगी ये
जीवन भी कैसा चोर है । …………
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«Reply #1 on: August 08, 2014, 01:47:50 PM »
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अति सुन्दर
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«Reply #2 on: August 08, 2014, 02:52:42 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: August 08, 2014, 08:09:02 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: August 08, 2014, 08:34:01 PM »
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waah waah waah bahut hee sundar rachnaa hai, bhidahee(mabarik) ho aapko.
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«Reply #5 on: August 09, 2014, 06:04:42 AM »
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sundar....spsji
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«Reply #6 on: August 14, 2014, 12:16:12 PM »
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thank u everyone...sabko bahot miss kia!!
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«Reply #7 on: August 16, 2014, 09:05:12 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: June 25, 2016, 01:53:52 PM »
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thank u nandbahu ji
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