Vo merra ajnabi...... -Panna 2:Shayri for Dard -e- Judai

brokenbyluv

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«Reply #15 on: March 22, 2010, 08:07:38 PM »

bahut bahut shukriya shihab ji..jane vo merri kismat mein hai bhi ya nhi per apki duao k liye tahe dil se shukriya...take cre...


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Re: Vo merra ajnabi......

«Reply #16 on: March 22, 2010, 08:19:22 PM »

shukriya ji..merri bhi yahi dua hai ki hum mile aur main yahi dua karungi ki khuda apki aur merri dua zarur sun le...take cre n thnx ji...


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brokenbyluv

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Re: Vo merra ajnabi......

«Reply #17 on: March 22, 2010, 08:34:52 PM »

Ji aap duao pe duaye dete rahiye aur main shukriya kehti rahungi..khuda apko bhi har khushi bakshe...bahut bahut bahut bahut shukriya shihab ji...


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brokenbyluv

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Re: Vo merra ajnabi......

«Reply #18 on: March 22, 2010, 08:43:04 PM »


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Talat

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Re: Vo merra ajnabi......

«Reply #19 on: March 23, 2010, 12:38:26 PM »

Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 19, 2010, 05:09:41 PM

Iss kavita ki last line maine ek sher se li hai i alwayz liked this line..isliye is kavita ka ant maine iss khubsurat line se kiya hai kyunki main apni kavita ko kisi khubsurat dard se end karna chahti thi......

Tu aaya merre jahan mein main terri duniya mein khoyi,
tune jagaye kayi ankahe ehsas phir se..
terre hotho se main hasti rahi terri ankho se main royi,

tu jab takta tha zamana bhula k mujhe MERRE AJNABI,
main jane kahan kho jati thi..
terre wishwas pe bus terri hi ho jati thi,

tu kehta tha mujhe jahan mein apna sabse azeez,
main bhi tujhe ankho mein bhar leti thi,
chup reh kar bhi apni nigaho se mhbt ka izhar kar leti thi,

tune kabula tha mujhe apne dilo jaan se,
mujhe bhi tu kabul tha har surat mein..
har su bus tu hi tha merre..har saaye har murat mein,

ab jab tu chala gaya hai mujhse door,
maine terre har aks apni duniya se mita diya..
waise main pehle bhi tanha hi thi..tou kya jo tune phir se ehsas dila diya......

Bohot khoobsurat likha hai aapne, BBL Ji


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brokenbyluv

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Re: Vo merra ajnabi......

«Reply #20 on: March 24, 2010, 06:13:12 PM »

shukriya celmira ji...


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thegrimreaper

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Re: Vo merra ajnabi......

«Reply #21 on: March 24, 2010, 06:32:56 PM »

iss dard e bayan ke liye koi tareef kaafi nahi

Applause


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brokenbyluv

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Re: Vo merra ajnabi......

«Reply #22 on: March 24, 2010, 06:50:01 PM »

Apne itna keh diya utna hi kaafi hai reaper ji...bahut bahut shukriya ji...


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