Vo savera naa raha...R...

by brokenbyluv on July 01, 2010, 07:30:56 PM
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Ek waqt tha apne dukhte dil ko terri baato se behela liya karti thi main,
terre jane se ab vo dilkash basera naa raha,

kabhi tu merri chahto mein duba rehta tha raat din,
per ab pehle jaisa tujhpe vo haq merra naa raha,

andhero mein bhi terri hasrato ki roshni thi,
roshni tou ab bhi hai per ab vo andhera naa raha,

ek pal mein toot kar bikhar gaye kuch khuab in ankho mein,
na ab terri arzu rahi dil ko aur ab koi khuab terra naa raha,

jiski ek jhalak merri suni ankho ko hasa deti thi..
na ab vo humsafar hai saamne aur ab vo umeed bhara savera naa raha.........
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«Reply #1 on: July 02, 2010, 06:22:02 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya shihab ji...god bless u too...Usual Smile
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: July 06, 2010, 06:20:33 AM »
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  Very touching lines Geet ji.
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bahut bahut shukriya kapil ji aur tamanna ji...
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