Wo bhi tadapti hogi aaj

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aansuon ki baandh tuti wahaan bhi hogi aaj,
idhar aap hain to udhar wo bhi akeli hogi aaj,
chaha to tha unhone saath nibhana aapka,
par unki bhi kuch majboori rahi hogi aaj,

mohabbat ka ye hashra dekh wo roti hogi aaj,
khaamosh raaton me adhkhuli aankhon se wo soti hogi aaj,
kal tak aap usi ka chehra dekh k muskurate the,
aapke aansu dekh wo bhi wahaan tadapti hogi aaj,

hai nahi paas aapke wo dur hai jo aaj,
par pyaar sirf aapse wo karti hogi aaj...
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«Reply #1 on: April 15, 2010, 12:26:44 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on April 14, 2010, 11:44:20 PM
aansuon ki baandh tuti wahaan bhi hogi aaj,
idhar aap hain to udhar wo bhi akeli hogi aaj,
chaha to tha unhone saath nibhana aapka,
par unki bhi kuch majboori rahi hogi aaj,

mohabbat ka ye hashra dekh wo roti hogi aaj,
khaamosh raaton me adhkhuli aankhon se wo soti hogi aaj,
kal tak aap usi ka chehra dekh k muskurate the,
aapke aansu dekh wo bhi wahaan tadapti hogi aaj,

hai nahi paas aapke wo dur hai jo aaj,
par pyaar sirf aapse wo karti hogi aaj...
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«Reply #2 on: April 15, 2010, 12:27:14 AM »
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Im d 1st one who replis....
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«Reply #3 on: April 15, 2010, 04:36:12 AM »
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Bahut khoob Kapil Ji hazaron daad qubul farmayen.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: April 15, 2010, 05:50:17 AM »
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very nice creation
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«Reply #5 on: April 15, 2010, 07:22:35 AM »
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Bahot achhi kavita likhi hai Kapil, bahot achhi. Keep writing.
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Bahut bahut shukriya Neel ji...tahe dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon mai aapka... !!!

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«Reply #7 on: April 15, 2010, 12:21:56 PM »
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Bilkul sahi kaha aapne... but u missed my "haan sirf main"...

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Bahut bahut shukriya Pandey ji... aapke saare daad qubool kiye humne...hamari kavita ki izzat badhane k liye bahut bahut shukriya.... !!!

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Thanx a lot Rehan dost...!!!

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bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

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Bahut Khoob Klaskarji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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bahut bahut shukriya Kwaish ji...!!!

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