Woh dhagey

by Bambi on September 14, 2009, 11:55:44 AM
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Woh dhaage abhi bhoore ho chuke hain.
Magar voh abhi tak gayab nahin hue hain.
Woh tairte hi rehte hain.
Main unhe pakadne ki koshish karti hoon
Magar main unhe chu bhi nahin sakti.

Haathon ko peet ke peeche rakh,
Unhe dheeme sey kassna chahti hoon,
Taki koi unhe dekh na sake
Magar main unhe chu bhi nahin sakti.

Bus voh tairte hi rehte hain.
Unke mulayam ang khurdure ho rahen hai
Aur
Unka bhura rang fat raha hai.

Magar koi badbu nahin hai,
(Dhoodh jaisa)
Bus khushbu hi khushbu,
Waisiwali khusbu jo subah hone se pehle
Subah ke neend ko jagade.

Woh dhaage abhi bhoore ho chuke hain.
Magar woh abhi tak gayab nahin hue hain.
Woh tairte hi rehte hain.

Maine Unn dhagon ko rokne ki bahut koshish ki
Magar unhe jana hi tha.

Behla ke, phusla ke, unn rangon ko rokne ji bahut koshish ki,
Magar unke pighalne ka waqat aa gaya tha.

Bus woh abhi door jaa rahen hai.
Tairte-tairte aftaab ke aur ja rahen hain
Aur
Dheere-dheere ufaq main doob rahen hain

Magar unpe aftab rang bhi nahin chadta
Woh bus ghulte ja rahen hai
Aasun main namak ki tarah,
Woh dhagey abh gayab ho rahen hain…
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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: September 14, 2009, 08:41:31 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Bambi Ji
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #2 on: September 14, 2009, 08:49:25 PM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Bambi ji,mindblowing creation.excellent Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Bambi
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«Reply #3 on: September 15, 2009, 01:19:30 PM »
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celmira ma'am aapne shabashi di bahut achcha laga. thank u Usual Smile

thank u madhu weshji
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Roja
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«Reply #4 on: September 16, 2009, 05:25:05 AM »
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Wonderful Bambi ji
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #5 on: September 16, 2009, 07:08:47 AM »
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Bambi-di badi rochak rachna hai aapki.... Applause Applause Applause

Par xshma karna main samajh nahi pa rahi hu
ye kaisi kashma-kash hai aapki,yaado k dayre
Kyu chhot rahe hain tujhse ye rishto k dhaage
Kyu badrang ho raha hai preet ka tere ye rang

Quote from: Bambi on September 14, 2009, 11:55:44 AM
Woh dhaage abhi bhoore ho chuke hain.
Magar voh abhi tak gayab nahin hue hain.
Woh tairte hi rehte hain.
Main unhe pakadne ki koshish karti hoon
Magar main unhe chu bhi nahin sakti.

Haathon ko peet ke peeche rakh,
Unhe dheeme sey kassna chahti hoon,
Taki koi unhe dekh na sake
Magar main unhe chu bhi nahin sakti.

Bus voh tairte hi rehte hain.
Unke mulayam ang khurdure ho rahen hai
Aur
Unka bhura rang fat raha hai.

Magar koi badbu nahin hai,
(Dhoodh jaisa)
Bus khushbu hi khushbu,
Waisiwali khusbu jo subah hone se pehle
Subah ke neend ko jagade.

Woh dhaage abhi bhoore ho chuke hain.
Magar woh abhi tak gayab nahin hue hain.
Woh tairte hi rehte hain.

Maine Unn dhagon ko rokne ki bahut koshish ki
Magar unhe jana hi tha.

Behla ke, phusla ke, unn rangon ko rokne ji bahut koshish ki,
Magar unke pighalne ka waqat aa gaya tha.

Bus woh abhi door jaa rahen hai.
Tairte-tairte aftaab ke aur ja rahen hain
Aur
Dheere-dheere ufaq main doob rahen hain

Magar unpe aftab rang bhi nahin chadta
Woh bus ghulte ja rahen hai
Aasun main namak ki tarah,
Woh dhagey abh gayab ho rahen hain…
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Bambi
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«Reply #6 on: September 17, 2009, 07:06:39 PM »
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@koyal46

Waqt ko kaun tal sakta hai aye dost,
uske sui jaise bhagey waise chale
dhaagon ki daud.
Woh banana chahe to ban jaye makhmal
sey yaadein
Woh na chahe toh chubha jaye lakhon
kali raatein.

waqt ke aagey kiski chale hai, aye dost...
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #7 on: September 18, 2009, 11:06:04 AM »
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Such hai Bambi-di.......waqt k aage kisi ki nahi chalti...badi pyarri lines hain aapki..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Manaa Waqt k aage chalti nahi hai kisi ki
Par jarur aata hai waqt her ek ka kisi din
Rank bhi ban jaata hai Raja waqt aane par
Makhmal kya resham ki odhni hogi tere sar


Quote from: Bambi on September 17, 2009, 07:06:39 PM
@koyal46

Waqt ko kaun tal sakta hai aye dost,
uske sui jaise bhagey waise chale
dhaagon ki daud.
Woh banana chahe to ban jaye makhmal
sey yaadein
Woh na chahe toh chubha jaye lakhon
kali raatein.

waqt ke aagey kiski chale hai, aye dost...
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Bambi
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«Reply #8 on: September 19, 2009, 06:53:35 PM »
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@ Koyal46

aapke duwaye dil ko chu gayi,
pyari baatein dil ko chu gayin,
ab resham mile na mile,
bas aapne itna socha, itna chaha,
Aapki chahat dil ko chu gayi.

Thank you koyal meri lines aapke nakuk sey masoom sawaalon ke wajah sey pyari hai. Unke bina main yeh soch hi nahin pati. Appke simple sey lines bahut sweet hain.


Thank you Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: September 20, 2009, 08:51:41 AM »
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wah wah Bambiji aur koyal ji....kya baat hai..badi sunder line likh rahe hain aap log...keep it up... padh kar achha lagta hai...
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #10 on: October 13, 2009, 05:58:39 PM »
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Bambi-di... Applause Applause Applause
Aapka ye andaaje tariff dil ko bha gaya.. love9
Sui-dhage ka jadoo dil pe chha gaya..
Accu-panchar sa asar ho raha hai
Prem rog ka sahi ilaaz ho raha hai
Quote from: Bambi on September 19, 2009, 06:53:35 PM
@ Koyal46

aapke duwaye dil ko chu gayi,
pyari baatein dil ko chu gayin,
ab resham mile na mile,
bas aapne itna socha, itna chaha,
Aapki chahat dil ko chu gayi.

Thank you koyal meri lines aapke nakuk sey masoom sawaalon ke wajah sey pyari hai. Unke bina main yeh soch hi nahin pati. Appke simple sey lines bahut sweet hain.


Thank you Usual Smile
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #11 on: October 13, 2009, 06:00:53 PM »
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Anaamika-di aapka tahedil se shukriya....

Quote from: ANAAMIKA on September 20, 2009, 08:51:41 AM
wah wah Bambiji aur koyal ji....kya baat hai..badi sunder line likh rahe hain aap log...keep it up... padh kar achha lagta hai...
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«Reply #12 on: October 14, 2009, 05:42:00 PM »
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Bas yu he likhte raho tum sab padhne mai mazaa aata hai...
Rahimji ka ye doha yaad hai n....
"Rahiman dhaga prem ka mat todo chhitkaye
Tute se fir na mile,mile gaanth pad jaaye"

Quote from: KOYAL46 on October 13, 2009, 06:00:53 PM
Anaamika-di aapka tahedil se shukriya....
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