Woh mujh se yoon daaman chhuRaane lage:Shayri for Dard -e- Judai

Brijinder

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Woh mujh se yoon daaman chhuRaane lage
ki guzre huwe din fasaane lage

Jo kal tak muhabbat ka izhaar the
wahi ab hawas ke bahaane lagew

Lagaa`o na pehre yooN khushbu`oN par
haiN haasil meN jin kay zamaane lage

Pighal jaate baahoN maiN jo the kabhii
bahut faasle ab banaane lage

Guzishta jo shab ka hai aayaa khayaal
Woh sharma ke ankheiN jhukaane lage.

Jo poochhaa to keh daalii hai dil kii baat
na kehna tujhe ab rulaane lage

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Woh mujh se yoon daaman chhuRaane lage

«Reply #1 on: June 18, 2007, 02:11:59 PM »

Bahoot Khoob Dost,..
Kamaal Ka Likha Hai,..
Yunhi Likhte Rahiyo,..


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Woh mujh se yoon daaman chhuRaane lage

«Reply #2 on: June 18, 2007, 02:41:18 PM »

Brijinder

Bahut acha laga aap ka yeh kalaam padh kar !

It is very nice and simple to understand and feel.

Keep going :arrow:


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Woh mujh se yoon daaman chhuRaane lage

«Reply #3 on: June 18, 2007, 08:31:25 PM »

I am very thankful to both of you for the kind words.Gazal is not my forte as I write mostly azaad nazms. I most of the time write poetry with philosophical content.
Thanx a lot


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Woh mujh se yoon daaman chhuRaane lage

«Reply #4 on: June 19, 2007, 05:17:09 AM »

Theek Hai..


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Woh mujh se yoon daaman chhuRaane lage

«Reply #5 on: June 25, 2007, 09:56:43 PM »

Thanx a lot


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Re: Woh mujh se yoon daaman chhuRaane lage

«Reply #6 on: June 26, 2007, 02:39:03 AM »

Quote from: "Brijinder"

Bahut khoob janab !!
Akshar real life main yesa hota hai

Pyar ki baaten sararat bhare din
Wo apana ateet samajh humen bhulane lage
Wo roothe kuch is tarah hum se
Ki hum baar baar unhen manane lage


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Re: Woh mujh se yoon daaman chhuRaane lage

«Reply #7 on: July 09, 2007, 06:58:02 AM »

Quote from: "Brijinder"

lovely briji.. lovely


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Brijinder

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Re: Woh mujh se yoon daaman chhuRaane lage

«Reply #8 on: February 04, 2009, 01:43:27 AM »

Thanks a lot for the kind words of appreciation.


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Re: Woh mujh se yoon daaman chhuRaane lage

«Reply #9 on: February 04, 2009, 02:26:13 AM »

Quote from: Brijinder on June 17, 2007, 09:58:08 PM

Simply good


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