woh

by rawattanha on September 19, 2010, 12:28:35 PM

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rawattanha

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phir wahi chehra khwbon mein aa gaya
kasak wahi purani phirse dil mein jaga gaya,
saaye mein kuch pal jee liya main
jaate-jaate ek kahani keh gaya
main ab bhi pyaasa raha sajde ko uske
wo palkon ko paani bejubani de gaya
yaad hai woh din jab wo mujhse nata torh gaya
kya thi khata meri khuch nahi,
woh bas ek paheli de gaya
taakta aaj bhi ussi raah ko main
bina uske uss raah pa "TANHA" Tanha reh gaya.


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Anshumali

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Re: woh

«Reply #1 on: September 19, 2010, 05:00:45 PM »

Quote from: rawattanha on September 19, 2010, 12:28:35 PM

Nice Poetry .... bahut khoob ! likhte rahen ... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath....


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Re: woh

«Reply #2 on: September 19, 2010, 11:22:57 PM »

Very well said .....

Bhut ache


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Re: woh

«Reply #3 on: September 20, 2010, 03:35:35 AM »

good job...dil ki baat ko laafzoon me khoob utara hai aapnee


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rawattanha

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Re: woh

«Reply #4 on: September 21, 2010, 07:23:55 AM »

Quote from: Anshumali on September 19, 2010, 05:00:45 PM

Nice Poetry .... bahut khoob ! likhte rahen ... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath....

shukriya g bas hamesha dua mein yaad rakhna.......


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rawattanha

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Re: woh

«Reply #5 on: September 21, 2010, 07:25:05 AM »

Quote from: aiina on September 20, 2010, 03:35:35 AM

good job...dil ki baat ko laafzoon me khoob utara hai aapnee

shkriya aiina g
hope aap bhi yahan par kush pesh kaein......


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rawattanha

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Re: woh

«Reply #6 on: September 21, 2010, 07:27:51 AM »

woh joh meri saans ke peeche hai
woh hi meri dhadkan ke peeche hai
sochta hun roz ruksat hone ki
par shayad woh meri jaan hi wajah hai,
woh "TANHA" ke jeene ke peeche hai.

kyun doston? love4