~*~ Yaad ati hai ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on December 31, 2010, 12:25:06 PM
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Yeh saal ki yeh meri akhri nazm hai..Aur yeh bas flow kargayi dil se..Jo dil ne kaha woh likte gaya..
Yeh saal mujhe bahaut kuch dikha gaya hai aur seekha gaya hai..Bahaut lows dekhe hai maine..
Yeh nazm bhi uski yaad main likhi hai..

HAPPY NEW YEAR TO EVERYONE..!

Jhalkati thi jo mera chehra aine ki tarha,
Ae Zalim mujhe teri woh ankhein yaad ati hai..

Jakar jinn main zindagi ko mere zindagi mili thi,
Ae Zalim mujhe teri woh baahein yaad ati hai..

Mohobaton ka raas bhara tha jinn main,
Ae Zalim mujhe ‘apni’ woh baatein yaad ati hai..

‘Kahan the tum?’ ‘Apna khayal kyun nahin rakha?’,
Ae Zalim mujhe teri woh shikayatein yaad ati hai..

‘Khamosh’ haath badaye kharra hai tere intezar main,
Mager saath saath chale the ‘hum tum’ jinn par,
Ae Zalim mujhe woh raahein yaad ati hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: January 01, 2011, 12:35:39 AM »
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kya baat hai Rahim bhai... bahut hi khubsurat...

Intezar !
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«Reply #2 on: January 01, 2011, 12:37:52 AM »
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Waah Rahim, Kya Khoob Likha Hai Yaar,.
Har Lafz  Dil Se Nikalkar Dil Tak Aa Utra,.

yunhi Likhte Raho,.

Tumhe Bhi Naya saal Mubarak Ho,.
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«Reply #3 on: January 01, 2011, 04:23:28 AM »
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Intezar jee aur Azeem bhaijan..
teh teh dil se shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #4 on: January 02, 2011, 01:53:07 PM »
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Bahut Khub Rahim Bhai
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«Reply #5 on: January 02, 2011, 02:08:52 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on December 31, 2010, 12:25:06 PM
Yeh saal ki yeh meri akhri nazm hai..Aur yeh bas flow kargayi dil se..Jo dil ne kaha woh likte gaya..
Yeh saal mujhe bahaut kuch dikha gaya hai aur seekha gaya hai..Bahaut lows dekhe hai maine..
Yeh nazm bhi uski yaad main likhi hai..

HAPPY NEW YEAR TO EVERYONE..!

Jhalkati thi jo mera chehra aine ki tarha,
Ae Zalim mujhe teri woh ankhein yaad ati hai..

Jakar jinn main zindagi ko mere zindagi mili thi,
Ae Zalim mujhe teri woh baahein yaad ati hai..

Mohobaton ka raas bhara tha jinn main,
Ae Zalim mujhe ‘apni’ woh baatein yaad ati hai..

‘Kahan the tum?’ ‘Apna khayal kyun nahin rakha?’,
Ae Zalim mujhe teri woh shikayatein yaad ati hai..

‘Khamosh’ haath badaye kharra hai tere intezar main,
Mager saath saath chale the ‘hum tum’ jinn par,
Ae Zalim mujhe woh raahein yaad ati hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

Bahut khoob rahiim dil ko chhu gyi tumhari ye peshkash...
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«Reply #6 on: January 02, 2011, 02:28:50 PM »
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bahut umda dard ke saath thoda sa pyar bhara gussa mix hai isme.
kuch azeeb haalat rahe honge likhte samay aapke dil ke.
realy ye dil se likha hua hai direct. very touchy bhai.
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«Reply #7 on: January 02, 2011, 07:10:39 PM »
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Shukriya Geet di, Nirala jee aur Rishi jee..

Nice lines Nirala jee..

Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #8 on: January 02, 2011, 08:28:49 PM »
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Shukriya Shihab bhaijan..
Khush rahiye!
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«Reply #9 on: January 03, 2011, 04:09:46 AM »
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SAHI KAHA DIL SE NIKLA K FLOW MW LIKHTE CHALE GAYE....ISILY ITNI KHUBSURAT DARD BHARI TASVEER BAN GAI YE.....
HAR EK SHABD PYAAR ME DUBA HUA....BHT DIL KO LUBHATI RACHNA RAHIM........
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«Reply #10 on: January 03, 2011, 06:43:53 AM »
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bahut khubsurat ahsas likha hai RAhimji aaapne.. bahut khub
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«Reply #11 on: January 03, 2011, 06:49:31 AM »
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bahut dil se likhi aapne bhai jaan.
khush rahen
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«Reply #12 on: January 03, 2011, 08:28:44 AM »
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Shukriya Anamika di, Killbill jee aur Manjum jee..
Teh dil se shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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