Ye Jeevan Ka Safar.........KOYAL:Shayri for Dard -e- Judai

KOYAL46

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Ye Jeevan Ka Safar........

Ye jeevan ka safar bhee bada ajeeb lagta hai
Janm k rishte se bhi jyada koi ajeej lagta hai

Kya hai dil me jo kashish ban atak raha hai
Jaante hum,sab kuchh yahi chhut jaana hai

Such-dukh sathi jeevan k kya ghabraana hai
In dono ka saath jaise dhoop aur chhaav hai

Duriyen nahi banee baadha kabhi rishton kee
Ye tou nazdikiyo ne he hilai neev rishton kee

Hona nahi mayus k ye daur bhi gujar jaayega
Bahaaro ka kafila dekh paas phir laut aayega


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SURESH SANGWAN

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Re: Ye Jeevan Ka Safar.........KOYAL

«Reply #1 on: September 15, 2010, 11:12:17 AM »

koyal ji bahut khoob.
kamaaal ka likha .kalam tod ke rakh di hai.
dil se likha hai.
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KOYAL46

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Re: Ye Jeevan Ka Safar.........KOYAL

«Reply #2 on: September 15, 2010, 12:15:42 PM »

Aapka bahoot bahut shukriya Sureshji...... icon_flower

Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on September 15, 2010, 11:12:17 AM

koyal ji bahut khoob.
kamaaal ka likha .kalam tod ke rakh di hai.
dil se likha hai.
Clapping Smiley


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Re: Ye Jeevan Ka Safar.........KOYAL

«Reply #3 on: September 15, 2010, 12:31:51 PM »

bht khubsurat likha hai koyal tumne......
padhke man ko achcha laga....
zindagi ki niraasha se niklne ka ek tarika ye bhi hai samjh aaya swty....


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Re: Ye Jeevan Ka Safar.........KOYAL

«Reply #4 on: September 15, 2010, 12:40:15 PM »

Aap kehti ho tou sach he hoga....koshish jaari he Anu-di...Thanks a lot.... icon_flower

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 15, 2010, 12:31:51 PM

bht khubsurat likha hai koyal tumne......
padhke man ko achcha laga....
zindagi ki niraasha se niklne ka ek tarika ye bhi hai samjh aaya swty....


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Re: Ye Jeevan Ka Safar.........KOYAL

«Reply #5 on: September 15, 2010, 01:26:05 PM »

bahut achcha likha hai aapne Koyal.. bahut bahut khoob... bahut achcha laga padh ke aapki ye poem... bahut hi khoobsurti se likha hai aapne....too good hai ji...!!!

ye rishte hi to hain jo pareshan karte hain,
ek se judna hai aur ek ke tutne se darte hain,

khoon ke rishten bhulake bagawat karte hain,
kisi anjaan ka haath pakadke aage badhte hain,

aasaan nahi hota ki bhool jaayen saare rishton ko,
dil pe paththar rakh ke bhi log ye kaam karte hain,

kuch rishte jinki buniyaad hi aakarshan pe hoti hai,
un rishton ke liye log apna ghar barbaad karte hain,

dushman nahi hain maata pita jo humein samjhaate hain,
par fir bhi apne karam se hum unka dil toda karte hain.....


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KOYAL46

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Re: Ye Jeevan Ka Safar.........KOYAL

«Reply #6 on: September 15, 2010, 02:00:00 PM »

thanks.....Kalaakaarji.... icon_flower


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ParwaaZ

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Re: Ye Jeevan Ka Safar.........KOYAL

«Reply #7 on: September 15, 2010, 06:16:32 PM »

koyal Jee Aadaab!

Achche vichaar hai par kabhi positive bhi likha kijiye... achcha likha hai aapne daad ....

Likhati rahiye....
Khush rahiye......
Khuda Hafez.......


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Anshumali

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Re: Ye Jeevan Ka Safar.........KOYAL

«Reply #8 on: September 16, 2010, 12:47:12 AM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on September 15, 2010, 11:09:34 AM

Koyal Ji ...... bahut khoobsurat lage mujhe aapke sabhi ashaar... zindagi ke aas-paas ka dard samete ...dil se daad hazir hai... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath...


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AMAR SINGH143

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Re: Ye Jeevan Ka Safar.........KOYAL

«Reply #9 on: September 16, 2010, 03:17:29 AM »

Nice ji. . . Usual Smile


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