Ye jo fiza hai..Geet...

by brokenbyluv on February 10, 2011, 09:04:39 AM
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Ye jo fiza hai na jisme mhbt basi hai,
use tum mujhe yad kar sanso mein basa lena,

chaho jo agar merre paas aana..
tou chupke se tum ise bata dena,

ye jab tak beheti hui mujh tak aayegi,
tab tak tum thodi raahat paa lena,

main iske sang apni mhbt ka tohfa bhej dungi,
tum use apne labo pe saja dena,

mil nhi paungi tumse per tumhara intezar karungi,
tum bhi merri tarah apne dil ko smjha lena,

tou kya jo har roz ek naya pyar se bhara din aata hai,
tum vo lamhe yad karke merri yado se hi kuch pal muskura dena.........
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«Reply #1 on: February 10, 2011, 09:22:31 AM »
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Geet-di kya geet likhne ki factory khol di hai.....mast mast kalaam pesh kar rahi ho....hat's off to you... Hats off to you! Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Tere ye pyaare pyaare nagme padh k
Romaanchit ho jaati hu Sakhee mein

Mann he mann kisi ko yaad kar leti hu
Aur kuchh pal g bhar muskuraa leti hu



Ye jo fiza hai na jisme mhbt basi hai,
use tum mujhe yad kar sanso mein basa lena,

chaho jo agar merre paas aana..
tou chupke se tum ise bata dena,

ye jab tak beheti hui mujh tak aayegi,
tab tak tum thodi raahat paa lena,

main iske sang apni mhbt ka tohfa bhej dungi,
tum use apne labo pe saja dena,

mil nhi paungi tumse per tumhara intezar karungi,
tum bhi merri tarah apne dil ko smjha lena,

tou kya jo har roz ek naya pyar se bhara din aata hai,
tum vo lamhe yad karke merri yado se hi kuch pal muskura dena.........
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«Reply #2 on: February 10, 2011, 10:42:41 AM »
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in fizaon me basi jo chahat ki khusbu hai teri
wahi to jeene ko majbur karti hai!!

har pal muskura uthta hu soch kar
wahi to hawa hai in saanson me ab, jinme tu aanhen bharti hai!!

mil na payenge iss pal ko fir bhi kuch gam nahi aaj
zism me meri ruh bankar tu hi to chala karti hai!!!
""
aapke achhe achhe nagmo ka chota sa qadardaan ban gaya hu mai BBL ji
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«Reply #3 on: February 10, 2011, 10:56:12 AM »
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wah aap dono ki soch bahut romantic .........lagta hai aaj ka din achha hai ..........har taraf mohabbat hi mohabbat
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manjum
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«Reply #4 on: February 10, 2011, 12:20:30 PM »
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bahut khub.. BBLji....

khub
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«Reply #5 on: February 10, 2011, 02:42:56 PM »
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Bahut Khub Geet JI
Ek se badhkar Ek Likha Hai Aapne Aaj
Padhkar Bahut Accha Lga Hume
U HI lIkhte Rahiye Aur Humesha Muskrate Rahiye
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«Reply #6 on: February 10, 2011, 04:32:21 PM »
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Bahut bahut shurkiya manju mann ji,rishi ji,nirala ji,tamanna ji...bahut khoob kahi nirala ji shurkiya share karne k liye...
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«Reply #7 on: February 10, 2011, 04:34:52 PM »
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Geet-di kya geet likhne ki factory khol di hai.....mast mast kalaam pesh kar rahi ho....hat's off to you... Hats off to you! Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Tere ye pyaare pyaare nagme padh k
Romaanchit ho jaati hu Sakhee mein

Mann he mann kisi ko yaad kar leti hu
Aur kuchh pal g bhar muskuraa leti hu


Bahut pyara likha hai sweetu..waise merra itne kalaam likhne ka maqsad ye tha ki main poore valentine week (7th feb to 14th feb)k har din ek naye ehsas ko leke kuch likhungi bus isiliye kuch zyada hi likh rahi hu kya haru dear love is in the air so cntrl nhi hota...thnx pasand karne k liye aur hamesha ki tarah apni di ka sath dene k liye...Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: February 10, 2011, 06:02:57 PM »
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Shukriya shihab ji..
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #9 on: February 11, 2011, 12:35:15 PM »
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bht khoob geet ji....
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«Reply #10 on: February 11, 2011, 04:40:14 PM »
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Bahut shukriya priya ji..
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«Reply #11 on: February 12, 2011, 01:07:05 AM »
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Ye jo fiza hai na jisme mhbt basi hai,
use tum mujhe yad kar sanso mein basa lena,

chaho jo agar merre paas aana..
tou chupke se tum ise bata dena,

ye jab tak beheti hui mujh tak aayegi,
tab tak tum thodi raahat paa lena,

main iske sang apni mhbt ka tohfa bhej dungi,
tum use apne labo pe saja dena,

mil nhi paungi tumse per tumhara intezar karungi,
tum bhi merri tarah apne dil ko smjha lena,

tou kya jo har roz ek naya pyar se bhara din aata hai,
tum vo lamhe yad karke merri yado se hi kuch pal muskura dena.........

Very Nice Poetry .... broken Ji !

dil se daad !
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«Reply #12 on: February 12, 2011, 03:00:19 PM »
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last line bahut pyaara hai happy9
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«Reply #13 on: February 12, 2011, 03:09:07 PM »
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last line bahut pyaara hai happy9

Thnx..
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