YE KAISA ASAR HAI.

by madhuwesh on November 02, 2009, 01:14:57 AM
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ITNE KAREEB AA KAR CHALE GAYE KYUN PHIR HUMSE DHOOR
AANKHO MEIN AANSU AUR DIL MEIN HAI DARD
ZINDA RAKHA HAI HUMEIN SIRF TERI CHAHAT KA ASAR
NA HAI AB IN AANKHO MEIN NEEND ,NA HAI DIL MEIN KARAR
MUSKURAATE HAI HUM BHI ISS MAHEFIL MEIN
MAGAR KISKO PATA HAI KITNA DARD HAI AAJ ISS SEENE MEIN
HO GAYE JUDHA HO KAR KHAFA HUMSE ,PAR CHODD
GAYE APNI CHAHAT KA ASAR HUM PE.


DOSTO EK KOSHISH KI AGAR KUCH GALAT LIKHI HAI TOH PLIZ CORRECT ME.
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Sager4u
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«Reply #1 on: November 02, 2009, 02:08:53 AM »
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Are wah madhu,pahli koshish,mast yaar
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Roja
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«Reply #2 on: November 02, 2009, 02:13:23 AM »
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Very Nice  Applause Applause

(Yeh toh bata itna Asar kisne kardiya?  Winking )
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cara
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«Reply #3 on: November 02, 2009, 04:10:04 AM »
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KYA BAAT HAI   MADHU JI...

ITNE PAAS AAKAR HAM KAESE JAA SAKHTE HAI TUMSE DHOOR
HAI KISKI HIMMAT JO  KARE AESA HAME MAJHBOOR.
ARE HAM NIKAL PADE HAI TERI RAHA MEIN,
KAANTE HAI THODE,IS RAHA DAGAR MEIN,
UNKO BHI TOH RAASTE SE HATAANA HAI IS SAFAR MEIN.
AB NIKLE HAI TOH PAUNCH JAAYEGEN,
KISI BHI WAQAT HAM HOGE TERE PAAS MEIN.
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«Reply #4 on: November 02, 2009, 05:59:44 AM »
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Thank you so much Sager ji. Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: November 02, 2009, 06:01:18 AM »
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Thank you so much Roja ji.hmm bhai ke secret hai. tongue3 love4
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«Reply #6 on: November 02, 2009, 06:02:43 AM »
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Cara ji bahut bahut khoob lovely creation.excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
thank you so much Cara ji. Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: November 02, 2009, 06:58:19 AM »
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Der aaye durast aaye sach aapne bahut hi accha likha hai aise hi likhte rho madhu ji excellent creation and keep it up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: November 02, 2009, 07:02:18 AM »
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Thank you so much Rishi ji. Usual Smile
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #9 on: November 02, 2009, 07:05:55 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on November 02, 2009, 01:14:57 AM
ITNE KAREEB AA KAR CHALE GAYE KYUN PHIR HUMSE DHOOR
AANKHO MEIN AANSU AUR DIL MEIN HAI DARD
ZINDA RAKHA HAI HUMEIN SIRF TERI CHAHAT KA ASAR
NA HAI AB IN AANKHO MEIN NEEND ,NA HAI DIL MEIN KARAR
MUSKURAATE HAI HUM BHI ISS MAHEFIL MEIN
MAGAR KISKO PATA HAI KITNA DARD HAI AAJ ISS SEENE MEIN
HO GAYE JUDHA HO KAR KHAFA HUMSE ,PAR CHODD
GAYE APNI CHAHAT KA ASAR HUM PE.


DOSTO EK KOSHISH KI AGAR KUCH GALAT LIKHI HAI TOH PLIZ CORRECT ME.


Wah! Kya Baat Hai Madhu
Kar Diya Madhosh
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«Reply #10 on: November 02, 2009, 07:12:56 AM »
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Thank you so much Rajesh ji. Usual Smile
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #11 on: November 02, 2009, 07:16:19 AM »
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YE TOH BAS NAZRO.N KA PHER HAI
DIL MEIN HI TOH MERA BASERA HAI
AANSUO.N KO THAAM LO THODA SA
NAZRE.N UTHA KAR DEKH LO ZARA SA
KYO.N BANTE HO TU ITNE MAJBOOR
KAUN KAHTA HAI KI MAIN HOON DUUR
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«Reply #12 on: November 02, 2009, 07:20:30 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on November 02, 2009, 07:16:19 AM
YE TOH BAS NAZRO.N KA PHER HAI
DIL MEIN HI TOH MERA BASERA HAI
AANSUO.N KO THAAM LO THODA SA
NAZRE.N UTHA KAR DEKH LO ZARA SA
KYO.N BANTE HO TU ITNE MAJBOOR
KAUN KAHTA HAI KI MAIN HOON DUUR

KYA BAAT HAI  RAJESH HARISH JI....
 AAP BAHUT DINO BAAD  DIKHE HO
AATE AATE REPLY BHI MAST DIYE HO.....
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«Reply #13 on: November 02, 2009, 07:21:26 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Rajesh ji,lovely creation,excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: November 02, 2009, 07:30:55 AM »
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AANSUO KO BAHE JAANE DO AAJ
KARENGE NAHI AB HUM BHI KISI KA INTEZAAR.
HOTE AGAR AAJ AAP MERE PAAS TOH BAHETA KANHA
IN AANKHO SE AANSU AAJ.
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