YE KAISA ASAR HAI.

by madhuwesh on November 02, 2009, 01:14:57 AM
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«Reply #105 on: December 29, 2009, 09:54:38 AM »
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ISS DIL MEIN ABHI ABHI HUA HAI KISI KI MOHOBAT KA ASAR.
AAPKO AUR AAPKE BACCHO KO PAALNE KA ASAR NAHI
NIKAAL DE YE KHAYAL APNE DIL SE CARA JI.
KI BANJAOONGI MAIN BHI SATI SAVITRI. Giggle Giggle tongue3
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«Reply #106 on: December 30, 2009, 09:21:36 AM »
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BALE TU MUJHKO MAT PAAL
APNE BACHHE TOH SAMBHAL
TERE BIN IN BACHON KA BURA HOGA HAAL
AB KISI AUR SE MOHABBAT KI MAT KHEL CHAAL
DEKH DOODH MAANG RAHE HAI YEH CHOTE CHOTE BACHHE
TERE DIL MEIN DAYA NAHI-KYUN NAHI LAGTE YEH TUMHE ACCHE..
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«Reply #107 on: January 19, 2010, 10:02:10 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on November 02, 2009, 01:14:57 AM
ITNE KAREEB AA KAR CHALE GAYE KYUN PHIR HUMSE DHOOR
AANKHO MEIN AANSU AUR DIL MEIN HAI DARD
ZINDA RAKHA HAI HUMEIN SIRF TERI CHAHAT KA ASAR
NA HAI AB IN AANKHO MEIN NEEND ,NA HAI DIL MEIN KARAR
MUSKURAATE HAI HUM BHI ISS MAHEFIL MEIN
MAGAR KISKO PATA HAI KITNA DARD HAI AAJ ISS SEENE MEIN
HO GAYE JUDHA HO KAR KHAFA HUMSE ,PAR CHODD
GAYE APNI CHAHAT KA ASAR HUM PE.


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acha try hai madhu

tere asar ab bhi mere dil-o-dimagh per chaya hai
her aanhat pe lagta hai tu lout ker aaya hai

na neend aankho me na sukoon dil me hai
ai khuda zindaghi ki kaisi ye maya hai

tu chor gaya hume, mager ye jaan le jaane wale
her pal her wakt mere sath tera saya hai
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«Reply #108 on: January 19, 2010, 10:07:01 AM »
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Wow bahut khoob Samnoj ji.lovely lines.thank you so much. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #109 on: January 19, 2010, 10:08:20 AM »
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thanks madhu
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«Reply #110 on: January 20, 2010, 08:29:12 PM »
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Ye kaisa asar chhodti hai judai?
Aankhon me aansu na dil me khudai!

Badi beraham hai judai ki duniya,
Sawalon me uljhi khudai ki duniya,
Hasrat bhari khud-numai ki duniya,
Kai pech-o-kham ke ikai ki duniya,

Na jane kahan se sanwar karke aai?
Ye kaisa asar chhodti hai Judai..?

Dr HP Pandey
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«Reply #111 on: January 21, 2010, 05:54:52 AM »
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Thank you so much Pandey ji.beautiful lines. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #112 on: March 14, 2010, 10:32:08 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB LIKHI HAI MADHUWESH JI. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #113 on: March 14, 2010, 10:40:53 AM »
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Thank you so much Suresh ji,aap bhi kuch lines likhte toh khushi milti.
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«Reply #114 on: March 14, 2010, 12:36:41 PM »
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Thank you so much Pandey ji.beautiful lines. Thumbs UP
Aapke farmaiyish ki lines aapko pasand aai behad shukriya Madhu Ji..
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«Reply #115 on: March 24, 2010, 12:03:19 AM »
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Bahut khoobsurat kavita likhi hai aapne madhuwesh ji... Chhoo gayi dil ko... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #116 on: March 24, 2010, 06:12:13 AM »
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Thank you so much Kapil ji.aap bhi kuch lines likhta toh achi  lagti. Thankyou ! hello
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«Reply #117 on: March 24, 2010, 09:41:09 AM »
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Madhu ji aapke request pe main apni ek kavita k last ki kuch lines likh raha hoon...

"sang beeta wo waqt tha aisa,
kam tha lekin tha wo pyara,
kabhi kabhi ye sochta hoon main,
kaash wo waqt wapas laa pata,
kuch palon ki khushiyaan dekar,
jaane kahaan wo aaj kho gayi,
un dino ki kuch yaadein hai,
jo aaj bhi mujhko yaad aate hain,
wo beete lamhe yaad aate hain,
wo gujre zamaane yaad aate hain, "

Quote from: madhuwesh on March 24, 2010, 06:12:13 AM
Thank you so much Kapil ji.aap bhi kuch lines likhta toh achi  lagti. Thankyou ! hello
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«Reply #118 on: March 24, 2010, 09:45:33 AM »
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 :thanks:wah bahut hi pyari lines hai Kapil ji,bahut khoob.excellent Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Usual Smile
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«Reply #119 on: March 24, 2010, 09:53:08 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on November 02, 2009, 01:14:57 AM
ITNE KAREEB AA KAR CHALE GAYE KYUN PHIR HUMSE DHOOR
AANKHO MEIN AANSU AUR DIL MEIN HAI DARD
ZINDA RAKHA HAI HUMEIN SIRF TERI CHAHAT KA ASAR
NA HAI AB IN AANKHO MEIN NEEND ,NA HAI DIL MEIN KARAR
MUSKURAATE HAI HUM BHI ISS MAHEFIL MEIN
MAGAR KISKO PATA HAI KITNA DARD HAI AAJ ISS SEENE MEIN
HO GAYE JUDHA HO KAR KHAFA HUMSE ,PAR CHODD
GAYE APNI CHAHAT KA ASAR HUM PE.


DOSTO EK KOSHISH KI AGAR KUCH GALAT LIKHI HAI TOH PLIZ CORRECT ME.



Wah Madhu
Kehtey hain pyaar main neend urrh jati hain
koi humain bhi muhabbat kary ,,,
kambakhat na neend aati hain... aur na koi apna hain...
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