YE KAISA ASAR HAI.

by madhuwesh on November 02, 2009, 01:14:57 AM
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«Reply #120 on: March 24, 2010, 09:56:13 AM »
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Thank you so much Rehan ji. hello
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«Reply #121 on: March 24, 2010, 12:47:39 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

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:thanks:wah bahut hi pyari lines hai Kapil ji,bahut khoob.excellent Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Usual Smile
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«Reply #122 on: April 12, 2010, 10:53:07 AM »
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Madhu ji.....


Aajkal aap ki kahan par nazar hai
kyun bhooli ye dagar hai
kya hogaya hai aapko
aap par YE KAISA ASAR HAI....
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«Reply #123 on: April 12, 2010, 11:18:13 AM »
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bahut khoob Cara ji, icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause

NA JAANE YE KAISA ASAR HAI
KISIKI CHAHAT KA YA KISIKI NAFRAT KA ASAR HAI
SABKO HASANE WAALI MADHU AAJ KHUDKO BHULA BAITTI
NA JAANE YE KAISA ASAR HAI
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«Reply #124 on: April 12, 2010, 06:43:50 PM »
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bahut achcha likha hai Madhu ji... par itna dard q hai...

asar mohabbat ka kahen ya kahen dard-e-judai ka,
kal tak haste the tum aaj q saya hai tumpe ghum ka,
hum to chahte hain tumhaare hothon pe bas muskaan ho,
par jaane q ab to bas afsana hota hai tumhaare ghum ka...
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«Reply #125 on: April 16, 2010, 05:24:40 AM »
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Thank you so much Kapil ji,aapne toh bahut khoob likha.lovely lines Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #126 on: April 16, 2010, 05:39:13 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on April 12, 2010, 11:18:13 AM
bahut khoob Cara ji, icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause

NA JAANE YE KAISA ASAR HAI
KISIKI CHAHAT KA YA KISIKI NAFRAT KA ASAR HAI
SABKO HASANE WAALI MADHU AAJ KHUDKO BHULA BAITTI
NA JAANE YE KAISA ASAR HAI

Good one Madhu Ji
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«Reply #127 on: April 16, 2010, 05:40:05 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on April 12, 2010, 06:43:50 PM
bahut achcha likha hai Madhu ji... par itna dard q hai...

asar mohabbat ka kahen ya kahen dard-e-judai ka,
kal tak haste the tum aaj q saya hai tumpe ghum ka,
hum to chahte hain tumhaare hothon pe bas muskaan ho,
par jaane q ab to bas afsana hota hai tumhaare ghum ka...


Nice response Kapil Ji
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«Reply #128 on: April 16, 2010, 05:40:48 AM »
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Ek choti si koshish meri or se

Na Jaane Ye Kaisa Asar Hai
Kisi Par Krodh Ka Ya Kisi Gum Ka Asar Hai
Kisi Garoor Ka Ya Apne Ahum Ka Asar
Koi Na Jaane Ye Kaisa Asar Hai
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«Reply #129 on: April 16, 2010, 05:45:35 AM »
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Hmm bahut bahut khoob Rajesh ji,great lines icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Thankyou !
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«Reply #130 on: April 16, 2010, 05:54:06 AM »
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Shukriya Madhu Ji
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«Reply #131 on: April 16, 2010, 02:22:28 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji....!!!

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Nice response Kapil Ji
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«Reply #132 on: April 16, 2010, 02:28:26 PM »
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Aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai Rajesh ji...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 16, 2010, 05:40:48 AM
Ek choti si koshish meri or se

Na Jaane Ye Kaisa Asar Hai
Kisi Par Krodh Ka Ya Kisi Gum Ka Asar Hai
Kisi Garoor Ka Ya Apne Ahum Ka Asar
Koi Na Jaane Ye Kaisa Asar Hai
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«Reply #133 on: April 17, 2010, 09:35:12 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on April 16, 2010, 02:28:26 PM
Aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai Rajesh ji...!!!


Shukriya Kapil Ji
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«Reply #134 on: April 29, 2010, 09:46:31 AM »
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Madhu ji......


Na jaane tumpar "YE KAISA ASAR HAI"
khade hai saamne tumko aate nahi nazar hai....
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