YE KAISA ASAR HAI.

by madhuwesh on November 02, 2009, 01:14:57 AM
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«Reply #135 on: April 30, 2010, 10:23:23 PM »
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Madhu ji......


Na jaane tumpar "YE KAISA ASAR HAI"
khade hai saamne tumko aate nahi nazar hai....

Good one Cara Ji

Khade ho saamne aur kahan nazar hai
Ye to unke husn ka hi asar hai
Itne sammohit hua kuchh bhi nazar nahi
Ye na jaane kaosa asar hai
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«Reply #136 on: May 05, 2010, 11:13:51 AM »
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Good one Cara Ji

Khade ho saamne aur kahan nazar hai
Ye to unke husn ka hi asar hai
Itne sammohit hua kuchh bhi nazar nahi
Ye na jaane kaosa asar hai

KYA BAAT HAI         RAJESH HARISH JI.....


HAMPE TOH HUA UNKA ASAR HAI
KYA UNPE HUA APNA ASAR HAI
AGAR HAI TO KYUN NAHIN DETI YEH KHABAR HAI....
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«Reply #137 on: May 05, 2010, 09:51:44 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Cara ji and Rajesh ji,bahut bahut shukriya meri thread ko aage badane ke liye. Thankyou ! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause

DARD JO DIYA HAI TUMNE USI KA ASAR HUA HAI ISS DIL MEIN
AB SAAMNE KHADE HO KAR KIYA JATANA CHAHTE HO TUM
TERE MEETI MEETI BAATO KA ASAR HOGA NAHI AB ISS DIL MEIN

Ek choti si koshish. notworthy tongue3
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«Reply #138 on: May 05, 2010, 10:05:18 PM »
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bahut achcha likha hai aapne Madhu ji... bahut khoob....

tujhe kya maloom meri meethi baatein kya qahar dhayengi tere dil pe,
sach kehta hoon, bin piye hi madhosh ho jayegi tu aaj meri mehfil me,
aisa asar kar jaayegi mere chaahat ka nasha aaj tujhpe meri jaan,
tujhe pata bhi nahi chalega aur samaa jayegi tu meri saanson me meri rago me...



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«Reply #139 on: May 05, 2010, 10:09:42 PM »
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Wow Kapil ji great and lovely lines. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thankyou !
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«Reply #140 on: May 05, 2010, 10:26:22 PM »
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Thank u so much Madhu ji...!!!

Wow Kapil ji great and lovely lines. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thankyou !
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«Reply #141 on: May 06, 2010, 09:07:49 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai          Madhuwesh ji.....

pehele meri har baat ka asar tere dil par hota tha
aaj kal meri koi baat tere dil par asar nahi karti
na jaane tujhpar hogaya "YE KAISA ASAR HAI"
 lagta hai aajkal mera nahi
kisi aur ka tere dil par ho raha asar hai....
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«Reply #142 on: May 06, 2010, 09:12:19 AM »
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KYA BAAT HAI         RAJESH HARISH JI.....


HAMPE TOH HUA UNKA ASAR HAI
KYA UNPE HUA APNA ASAR HAI
AGAR HAI TO KYUN NAHIN DETI YEH KHABAR HAI....

Thanx Cara Ji N  Nice lines
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«Reply #143 on: May 06, 2010, 09:13:30 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Cara ji and Rajesh ji,bahut bahut shukriya meri thread ko aage badane ke liye. Thankyou ! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause

DARD JO DIYA HAI TUMNE USI KA ASAR HUA HAI ISS DIL MEIN
AB SAAMNE KHADE HO KAR KIYA JATANA CHAHTE HO TUM
TERE MEETI MEETI BAATO KA ASAR HOGA NAHI AB ISS DIL MEIN

Ek choti si koshish. notworthy tongue3


Thanx Madhu Ji
N  Nice response
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«Reply #144 on: May 06, 2010, 10:01:02 PM »
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AGAR HUA BHI HAI MERE DIL MEIN KISI AUR KA CHAHAT KA ASAR
HOTA HAI TERE DIL MEIN KYUN ASAR.
TERE DIYE HUE ZAKHMO SE HUA NAHI MERE DIL MEIN KOI ASAR
HUA HAI MERE DIL MEI KISI AUR KA CHAHAT KA ASAR. tongue3

TRIED. notworthy notworthy

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«Reply #145 on: May 06, 2010, 10:03:11 PM »
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Kuchh yun apno ka ashar hai
Kuchh pyare sapno ashar hai
Baki tere krodh ka kahar hai
Yeh na jaane kaisa ashar hai

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«Reply #146 on: May 06, 2010, 10:15:14 PM »
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bahut achcha likha hai sabhi ne... Madhu ji, Rajesh ji, Cara ji... bahut khoob....!!!
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«Reply #147 on: May 06, 2010, 10:15:47 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Rajesh ji.great lines. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #148 on: May 06, 2010, 10:21:52 PM »
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Kabhi sochte hain ki kaash aap hamari zindagi me aaye na hote,
To shayad aapki yaadon ko seene se lagake jeene ki aadat na hoti,
Kabhi sochte hain ki kaash aap hamare dost na hote,
Sach kahen tab shayad ye zindagi zindagi na hoti....
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«Reply #149 on: May 06, 2010, 10:44:24 PM »
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bahut achcha likha hai sabhi ne... Madhu ji, Rajesh ji, Cara ji... bahut khoob....!!!

Thanx Kapil
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