YE KAISA ASAR HAI.

by madhuwesh on November 02, 2009, 01:14:57 AM
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«Reply #150 on: May 06, 2010, 10:47:05 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on May 06, 2010, 10:15:47 PM
Wah bahut khoob Rajesh ji.great lines. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thanx Madhu
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«Reply #151 on: May 06, 2010, 10:48:39 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on May 06, 2010, 10:21:52 PM
Kabhi sochte hain ki kaash aap hamari zindagi me aaye na hote,
To shayad aapki yaadon ko seene se lagake jeene ki aadat na hoti,
Kabhi sochte hain ki kaash aap hamare dost na hote,
Sach kahen tab shayad ye zindagi zindagi na hoti....

Bahut khoob Kapil
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«Reply #152 on: May 06, 2010, 10:52:35 PM »
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shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

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Bahut khoob Kapil
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«Reply #153 on: May 07, 2010, 03:48:02 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Kapil ji beautiful lines icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #154 on: May 07, 2010, 01:13:07 PM »
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shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

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Wah bahut khoob Kapil ji beautiful lines icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #155 on: May 09, 2010, 10:10:57 AM »
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JISSE MAANGA THA DUAO MEIN
NA BASA PAYA UNHE NIGAHO MEIN
PATA HOTA AGAR UNHE IN AANSUO KA KEEMAT
SHAYAD HO BHI JATA ASAR IN AANKHO MEIN AANSUO KO DEKH KAR.
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«Reply #156 on: May 09, 2010, 07:49:54 PM »
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bahut khoob asar kar rahi hai aajkal aapke lekh... achcha likha hai aapne.... Applause Applause Applause

har asar be-asar ho jaayegi hamari mohabbat mein,
sukhe phool khil uthenge hamari mohabbat mein,
tab na aasoo hoga teri aankho me na dard dil mein,
khul ke bas khilkhilayegi tu hamari mohabbat mein...
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«Reply #157 on: May 09, 2010, 11:16:50 PM »
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KAASH HOJAYE TERI MOHOBAT KA ASAR ISS DIL MEIN
BHOOL JAHOONGI KI KABHI HUA THA DARD KA ASAR ISS DIL MEIN
GAAYEGI YE ZAMI AASMA AUR YE CHAAND SITAARE
KHUDKO BHOOL KAR AA JAHOONGI TERI BAAHON MEIN.

Lovely lines Kapil ji,bahut khoob icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #158 on: May 10, 2010, 03:21:46 AM »
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JISSE MAANGA THA DUAO MEIN
NA BASA PAYA UNHE NIGAHO MEIN
PATA HOTA AGAR UNHE IN AANSUO KA KEEMAT
SHAYAD HO BHI JATA ASAR IN AANKHO MEIN AANSUO KO DEKH KAR.

bahut achhe      Kapil ji---Madhu ji.....

Tere jaise ham kahan hai jaduugar
tu dale jispar bhi apni nazar
uspar ho jaata hai tera asar
ham toh tere pyar me itne hogaye they be-khabar
hame pata hi nahin chala kab hata di tune mujhpar sey nazar
na jaane meri zindagi me hota "YE KAISA ASAR HAI"
ke pyar ke naam se hi ab lagne laga mujhko dar hai....
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«Reply #159 on: May 10, 2010, 08:20:12 AM »
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JISSE MAANGA THA DUAO MEIN
NA BASA PAYA UNHE NIGAHO MEIN
PATA HOTA AGAR UNHE IN AANSUO KA KEEMAT
SHAYAD HO BHI JATA ASAR IN AANKHO MEIN AANSUO KO DEKH KAR.


Bahut khoob Madhu Ji
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«Reply #160 on: May 10, 2010, 08:21:53 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on May 09, 2010, 07:49:54 PM
bahut khoob asar kar rahi hai aajkal aapke lekh... achcha likha hai aapne.... Applause Applause Applause

har asar be-asar ho jaayegi hamari mohabbat mein,
sukhe phool khil uthenge hamari mohabbat mein,
tab na aasoo hoga teri aankho me na dard dil mein,
khul ke bas khilkhilayegi tu hamari mohabbat mein...

Good one Kapil
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«Reply #161 on: May 10, 2010, 08:23:13 AM »
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 Thank you so much Cara ji and Rajesh ji.Cara ji aapne bhi bahur khoob likha. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #162 on: May 10, 2010, 08:25:59 AM »
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KAASH HOJAYE TERI MOHOBAT KA ASAR ISS DIL MEIN
BHOOL JAHOONGI KI KABHI HUA THA DARD KA ASAR ISS DIL MEIN
GAAYEGI YE ZAMI AASMA AUR YE CHAAND SITAARE
KHUDKO BHOOL KAR AA JAHOONGI TERI BAAHON MEIN.

Lovely lines Kapil ji,bahut khoob icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause

Yeh bhi khoob rahi Madhu Ji
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«Reply #163 on: May 10, 2010, 08:28:58 AM »
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Quote from: cara on May 10, 2010, 03:21:46 AM
bahut achhe      Kapil ji---Madhu ji.....

Tere jaise ham kahan hai jaduugar
tu dale jispar bhi apni nazar
uspar ho jaata hai tera asar
ham toh tere pyar me itne hogaye they be-khabar
hame pata hi nahin chala kab hata di tune mujhpar sey nazar
na jaane meri zindagi me hota "YE KAISA ASAR HAI"
ke pyar ke naam se hi ab lagne laga mujhko dar hai....

Good one Cara Ji

Jab pyaar kiya to darna kya
Wahi hoga jo manzoore khuda hoga
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«Reply #164 on: May 10, 2010, 08:38:03 AM »
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Thank you Rajesh ji agar aap bhi kuch likhte toh acha lagta.
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