YE KAISA ASAR HAI.

by madhuwesh on November 02, 2009, 01:14:57 AM
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«Reply #165 on: May 10, 2010, 02:21:46 PM »
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shukriya Cara ji...!!!

Quote from: cara on May 10, 2010, 03:21:46 AM
bahut achhe      Kapil ji---Madhu ji.....

Tere jaise ham kahan hai jaduugar
tu dale jispar bhi apni nazar
uspar ho jaata hai tera asar
ham toh tere pyar me itne hogaye they be-khabar
hame pata hi nahin chala kab hata di tune mujhpar sey nazar
na jaane meri zindagi me hota "YE KAISA ASAR HAI"
ke pyar ke naam se hi ab lagne laga mujhko dar hai....
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«Reply #166 on: May 10, 2010, 02:22:45 PM »
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Thanx a lot Rajesh ji...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on May 10, 2010, 08:21:53 AM
Good one Kapil
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«Reply #167 on: May 10, 2010, 02:29:21 PM »
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shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne...!!!

meri jaan, jis din tu meri baahon me aajayegi,
meri har saans teri saanso me sama jaayegi,
kuch aisa asar hoga teri meri us milana ka,
ye duniya kya jannat bhi meri ho jaayegi...

Quote from: madhuwesh on May 09, 2010, 11:16:50 PM
KAASH HOJAYE TERI MOHOBAT KA ASAR ISS DIL MEIN
BHOOL JAHOONGI KI KABHI HUA THA DARD KA ASAR ISS DIL MEIN
GAAYEGI YE ZAMI AASMA AUR YE CHAAND SITAARE
KHUDKO BHOOL KAR AA JAHOONGI TERI BAAHON MEIN.

Lovely lines Kapil ji,bahut khoob icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #168 on: May 11, 2010, 12:15:16 PM »
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Wah wah Kapil ji lovely lines. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause :
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«Reply #169 on: May 11, 2010, 12:18:44 PM »
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shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

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Wah wah Kapil ji lovely lines. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause :
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«Reply #170 on: May 11, 2010, 12:26:19 PM »
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JIS DIN KA INTEZAAR HAI TUJHE
WOH DIN KABHI NAHI AAYEGA KAPIL JI
MAANA KI HUA HAI ASAR AAPKE DIL MEIN
PAR HUMARI MILAN KABHI HOGI NAHI
YAHI LIKHA HAI NASEEB MEIN.
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«Reply #171 on: May 11, 2010, 12:27:38 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on May 10, 2010, 02:29:21 PM
shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne...!!!

meri jaan, jis din tu meri baahon me aajayegi,
meri har saans teri saanso me sama jaayegi,
kuch aisa asar hoga teri meri us milana ka,
ye duniya kya jannat bhi meri ho jaayegi...

Wah kya baat hai      Kapil ji....


Aapko mubarak mohabbat
hamare naseeb me hai maikhana
najaane hamare asar me kya kami thi
wo hamari hokar bhi hamari nahi thi...
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«Reply #172 on: May 11, 2010, 12:36:48 PM »
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JIS DIN KA INTEZAAR HAI TUJHE
WOH DIN KABHI NAHI AAYEGA KAPIL JI
MAANA KI HUA HAI ASAR AAPKE DIL MEIN
PAR HUMARI MILAN KABHI HOGI NAHI
YAHI LIKHA HAI NASEEB MEIN.
WAH KYA BAAT HAI       MADHU JI...

HAMKO TO THUKRAYA
AB UNKO BHI THUKRATI HO
AAKHIR KISKA "ASAR"
TUM APNE DIL ME CHAHTI HO....
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«Reply #173 on: May 11, 2010, 02:25:58 PM »
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bahut achcha likha hai aapne Madhu ji...

ye na socho ki tumhaari ye baat maine sun li,
ye na samjho ki humne itni jaldi haar maan li,
aisa asar hoga tumpe meri mohabbat ka sun lo madhu,
ab to tumhaare dil ko jeetne ki humne thaan li...

Quote from: madhuwesh on May 11, 2010, 12:26:19 PM
JIS DIN KA INTEZAAR HAI TUJHE
WOH DIN KABHI NAHI AAYEGA KAPIL JI
MAANA KI HUA HAI ASAR AAPKE DIL MEIN
PAR HUMARI MILAN KABHI HOGI NAHI
YAHI LIKHA HAI NASEEB MEIN.
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«Reply #174 on: May 11, 2010, 02:29:55 PM »
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shukriya Cara ji... aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai....!!!

na to hum duwa karte hain, na hi dawa karte hain,
na to hum ab kisi se koi fariyaad karte hain,
ye to asar sirf hamari mohabbat ka hi hai,
ki ab wo har lamha sirf humein hi yaad karte hain...


Quote from: cara on May 11, 2010, 12:27:38 PM
Wah kya baat hai      Kapil ji....


Aapko mubarak mohabbat
hamare naseeb me hai maikhana
najaane hamare asar me kya kami thi
wo hamari hokar bhi hamari nahi thi...
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«Reply #175 on: May 11, 2010, 08:27:34 PM »
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Wow Cara ji and Kapil ji,bahut hi khoob,great lines.keep writting.and thank you so much. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #176 on: May 12, 2010, 03:01:12 AM »
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MOHOBAT KA ASAR TOH DHOOR RAHEKAR BHI ASAR KAR JAATI HAI CARA JI
AB NASEEB KO DOSH DENE SE KIYA FAYDA
EK BAAR KHUDSE TOH POOCH KAR DEKH CARA JI
JAWAB KHUD-B-KHUD MIL JAYEGA.
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«Reply #177 on: May 12, 2010, 02:33:13 PM »
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shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on May 11, 2010, 08:27:34 PM
Wow Cara ji and Kapil ji,bahut hi khoob,great lines.keep writting.and thank you so much. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #178 on: May 12, 2010, 08:48:23 PM »
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KYA AAPKO ITNA YAKIN HAI KAPIL JI
KI AAPKE MOHOBAT BHARI BAATEIN
MERE DIL PE ASAR KAR JAYEGI
ISS TOOTE HUE DIL SHEESHO KI TARAH
BHIKRA PADA HUA HAI.
ITNA ASAANI SE ISS DIL PE ASAR HONE WAALA
NAHI HAI KAPIL.MANNA PADEGA AB TOH TUMEIN
BHI HUMARI BAATEIN. tongue3 notworthy
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«Reply #179 on: May 12, 2010, 08:55:39 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Madhu ji.... waah kya kehne aapke... hum to fida ho gaye....!!!

ye na soch meri jaan ki mohabbat bas tu ne hi kiya hai,
aaj bhare mehfil me kehte hain dil humne tujhko diya hai,
soch rahe the ki asar kuch bhi na ho paayega tera mujhpe,
jaane kyun fir se teri mohabbat ne humein pighla diya hai...


Quote from: madhuwesh on May 12, 2010, 08:48:23 PM
KYA AAPKO ITNA YAKIN HAI KAPIL JI
KI AAPKE MOHOBAT BHARI BAATEIN
MERE DIL PE ASAR KAR JAYEGI
ISS TOOTE HUE DIL SHEESHO KI TARAH
BHIKRA PADA HUA HAI.
ITNA ASAANI SE ISS DIL PE ASAR HONE WAALA
NAHI HAI KAPIL.MANNA PADEGA AB TOH TUMEIN
BHI HUMARI BAATEIN. tongue3 notworthy
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