YE KAISA ASAR HAI.

by madhuwesh on November 02, 2009, 01:14:57 AM
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«Reply #180 on: May 13, 2010, 06:02:19 AM »
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AISE SAPNE KYUN DHEKTE HO KAPIL
JO KABHI POORA NAHI HOTA
HUA HOGA SHAYAD MERI WAFAO KA
ASAR TERE DIL MEIN.
PAR MERE DIL MEIN AISA KOI ASAR
HUA NAHI TERI CHAHAT KA.
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Bahut khoob likha aapne Kapil ji.thank you so much
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«Reply #181 on: May 13, 2010, 05:31:51 PM »
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bahut achcha likha hai Madhu ji....

pyaar mera sapna nahi haqeeqat hai,
tujhe meri nahi mujhe teri jarurat hai,
na ho tere dil me koi asar mere pyaar ka,
tu mere paas hai bas yahi ek ganimat hai....

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AISE SAPNE KYUN DHEKTE HO KAPIL
JO KABHI POORA NAHI HOTA
HUA HOGA SHAYAD MERI WAFAO KA
ASAR TERE DIL MEIN.
PAR MERE DIL MEIN AISA KOI ASAR
HUA NAHI TERI CHAHAT KA.
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Bahut khoob likha aapne Kapil ji.thank you so much
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«Reply #182 on: May 13, 2010, 11:05:21 PM »
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Lovely lines Kapil ji,bahut khoob icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #183 on: May 13, 2010, 11:07:50 PM »
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shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

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Lovely lines Kapil ji,bahut khoob icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #184 on: May 14, 2010, 01:42:26 AM »
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YE PYAR YE MOHOBAT TOH SIRF EK DHOKA
HOTA HAI JAB DARD KA ASAR
DIL KO JALA KAR RAKH DETI HAI
ANJAAM JAANTE HUE BHI
KYUN HUE HO HUM PE FIDA KAPIL JI.
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«Reply #185 on: May 14, 2010, 12:51:39 PM »
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bahut achcha likha hai aapne Madhu ji...!!!

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YE PYAR YE MOHOBAT TOH SIRF EK DHOKA
HOTA HAI JAB DARD KA ASAR
DIL KO JALA KAR RAKH DETI HAI
ANJAAM JAANTE HUE BHI
KYUN HUE HO HUM PE FIDA KAPIL JI.
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«Reply #186 on: May 16, 2010, 01:53:54 AM »
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mohabbat na to anjaam se darti hai na hi fikar karti hai,
jaan lo aaj ye baat ki mohabbat to sirf mohabbat karti hai,
ye na kaho ki mohabbat bas ek dhokha hai jo jala deti hai,
ye wo haseen ehsaas hai jo dheere dheere asar karti hai...
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«Reply #187 on: May 16, 2010, 02:14:19 AM »
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Bahut bahut khoob Kapil ji,great lines.bahut bahut shukriya iss thread ko aage badane ke liye. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #188 on: May 17, 2010, 04:46:35 AM »
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Shukriya Madhu ji...!!!
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«Reply #189 on: May 17, 2010, 09:13:14 AM »
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AKHIR KYUN AAYE THE WOH MERE ZINDAGI MEIN
MERE ZAKHMO KO MITTANE YA BADANE
DE KAR DASTAK ISS DIL MEIN
AKHIR KYUN WOH ANJAAN BANGAYE
KUCH AISA ASAR HUA MERE DIL MEIN
KI USKA MAIN DEEWANI BANGAYI.
AKHIR KYUN ISS SAWAL KA JAWAB
DOODNE SE BHI MILTI NAHI
AKHIR YE KAISA ASAR HAI KI
USKI MAIN DEEWANI BANGAYI. :notwor
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«Reply #190 on: May 17, 2010, 10:25:41 PM »
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Achcha likha hai aapne Madhu ji....!!!

ye asar hai us mohabbat ka jo dikhta nahi aankhon se,
ye asar hai us aashiqui ka jo mit ta nahi aashiqui se,
ye asar hai us khamoshi ka jo sunta nahi baaton se,
ye asar hai us dard-e-dil ka jo darta nahi bekhudi se...
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«Reply #191 on: May 17, 2010, 11:07:26 PM »
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Thank you so much Kapil ji,bahut acha likha aapne. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #192 on: May 17, 2010, 11:16:04 PM »
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shukriya Madhu ji...!!!
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«Reply #193 on: May 17, 2010, 11:26:05 PM »
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Thank you Kapil ji aapke help ke liye,maine correct kar di.
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«Reply #194 on: May 19, 2010, 12:10:06 AM »
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YE KAISA ASAR HUA HAI AAJ MERE DIL MEIN
NA CHAHTE HUE BHI UNKE NAZRO SE NAZRE MILGAYI
APNE KADMO KO ROKNA TOH BAHUT CHAHA
MAGAR FHIR BHI UNSE JA KAR TAKRA GAYE.
DIL KE DHADKAN KUCH ISS RAFTAR SE
BADNE LAGI,JAISE HAWA KE JHOKA
SE HUA YE ASAR. notworthy
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